class 1 creative writing

1. Week 1 Class 1

2. Agenda
• Adding the Class
• Syllabus/Green Sheet
• Website
• Terms
• In-class writing

3. Adding the Class
• I will take 32 students
• If you are on the waiting list, you can stay. I
won’t hand out add codes until Monday of next
week, and then, only if there is room.
• As we go over the syllabus, consider whether
you will stay in the class. If you want out, please
let me know, so I can offer your seat to another
student.
• If you are not on the waiting list, it is unlikely you
will get into the class.

4. The Green Sheet
• What you will find
here
– Course Requirements
• Assignments and values
• Participation
– Required Materials
– Class Policies
• Plagiarism
• Conduct and Courtesy
– The Class Website
• How to sign up for an
account
• How to post your
homework.
– How to use Kaizena to
submit your Paper

5. Texts and Required Materials:
• Reading assignments will be posted on the
course website. There is no text book for you to
buy.
• College-level dictionary
• A stapler, USB flash drive, loose-leaf paper or a
notebook for notes and drafts, and pens or
pencils. Alternatively, you may use your
computer for drafting.

6. Requirements:
• Active participation in class discussions and regular
attendance. You will earn real points for your participation
in activities.
• Keeping up-to-date on the assignments and reading.
• Formal writing: a poetry project, two fiction projects, and a
drama project (small groups).
• A series of creative writing posts to the class website
• Terms tests, reading quizzes, and in-class assignments.

7. Grading

9. Class Policies

10. Writing Submissions
1. Kaizena allows me to respond to your essay with both voice and written
comments and to insert helpful links.
2. Create your account. Go to Kaizena.com or simply use the link on our class
website home page. Click “Sign up.” Choose “Student.” Enter your group code
(you can find this on the right side of the website or in the slideshow directions
for how to use Kaizena.
3. Files are added to Conversations in Kaizena. To add a file to a conversation,
click the "Add File" button.
4. Next, choose to add a file from Google Drive or to upload a file from your
computer. Use the box that pops up to find your file. When you find your file,
click it; next, click "Select" (for a Google Docs file) or open (for an uploaded
file). The file will be added to your conversation.
5. If you experience formatting errors when you upload a Word file, try saving
the file as a PDF, and uploading it again.
6. Once I have graded your paper, you can access it by going to the
“conversations” link in Kaizena.
7. Click on the highlighted sections of the paper to find both audio and written
comments concerning your essay or links to materials that will help you
improve your writing.
All out of class work is to be submitted to me electronically
before the due date.

11. Attendance:
Success in this course depends on regular attendance
and active participation. Participation points will be
part of our daily activities. If you are not in class, you
cannot earn these points. You should save absences
for emergencies, work conflicts, weddings, jury duty,
or any other issues that might arise in your life.
It is your responsibility to talk to me your absences or
other conflicts. Work done in class cannot be made
up. Also, please arrive on time, as you will not be able
to make up work completed before you arrive,
including quizzes.

12. • Tests:
– We will have several terms tests during the quarter. I will
offer one opportunity late in the quarter to retake (or
make-up) one of the first three terms tests.
• Late Work
– I do not accept late work. I do, however, extend an
opportunity to revise one assignment for a better grade. If
you miss a due date, you may submit that work when the
revisions are due on the last day of the term. This does
disqualify you from revising another piece.

13. Conduct, Courtesy, and Electronic Devices:
• In this class, we will regularly engage in the discussion of each
other’s work. Because writing is so personal, I ask each of you
to be both kind and honest. Do share helpful critiques so each
writer may grow. Courtesy will allow each person to have the
opportunity to express his or her ideas in a comfortable
environment.
• Courtesy includes but is not limited to politely listening to
others when they contribute to class discussions or while they
give presentations, not slamming the classroom door or
walking in front of classmates giving presentations if you do
arrive late, and maintaining a positive learning environment
for your fellow classmates. To help maintain a positive learning
environment, please focus on the work assigned, turn off all
cell phones and iPods before class, and do not text-message in
class. If your behavior becomes disruptive to the learning
environment of the class, you may be asked to leave and/or be
marked absent.

14. Academic Dishonesty:
Plagiarism includes quoting or
paraphrasing material without
documentation and copying from
other students or professionals.
Intentional plagiarism is a grave
offense; the resulting response will
be distasteful. Depending upon the
severity, instances of plagiarism may
result in a failing grade for the paper
or the course and possible
administrative action. All
assignments will be scanned and
scrutinized for academic dishonesty.
Please refer to your handbook for
more information regarding
plagiarism.

15. The
Syllabus

16. Syllabus
• The syllabus is a tentative schedule.
• It may be revised during the quarter.
• Use it to determine how to prepare for class.
What we
will do in
class 
Homework due
before the next
class  Current
Project
Week and
Days 

17. Website:palmoreewrt30.wordpress.com
palm• Our class website is http://palmoreewrt30.wordpress.com. In
order to do the homework, you must establish an account.
To make your own FREE Word Press account, go to
wordpress.com. The system will walk you through the steps
to signup for a username or to set up your own user-friendly
Word Press blog. Alternatively, you can sign into our website
through Facebook.
• If you prefer not to use your own name, you may use a
pseudonym. Please email me your username if it is
significantly different from your real name.
• If you cannot establish your website and username, please
come to my office hours as soon as possible, and I will help
you with the process. Much of our work will take place
online, so establishing this connection is mandatory.

18. • Writing Assignments
• Reading Assignments
• The Green Sheet
• Your Daily Homework Assignment (which is
where you post your homework.)
• The Syllabus (The Daily Plan)
• Writing Tips
• Helpful Links

19. Homework
There is writing homework due the
evening before each meeting. This is both
to help you think about your reading and
to help you produce ideas for your writing.
In order to earn an A on your homework,
you must do the following:
 Complete all of the posts.
 Post them on time.
 Be thoughtful in your writing.

20. Posting Homework
• On the front page of the website, you will find the
homework post after each class. (text me if you don’t
see it)
• Below that post on the right, are the words “Leave a
comment.”
• Click there and a comment box will open. Copy and
paste your homework into the comment box
• Click “Post Comment.”

21. Is this
class too
hard?
Is this class
History 10?
Will I be a famous
writer soon?

22. TERMS

23. Haiku
The haiku is composed of 17 sound units divided into three parts - one with 5 syllables, one
with 7 syllables and another with 5 syllables.
Alliteration
The repetition of consonant sounds, especially at the beginning of words. Example:
"Fetched fresh, as I suppose, off some sweet wood." Hopkins, "In the Valley of the Elwy.”
Assonance
The repetition of similar vowel sounds in a sentence or a line of poetry or prose, as in "I rose
and told him of my woe." Whitman's "When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer" contains
assonantal "I's" in the following lines: "How soon unaccountable I became tired and sick, /
Till rising and gliding out I wander'd off by myself."

24. Convention
A customary feature of a literary work, such as the use of a chorus in Greek tragedy, the
inclusion of an explicit moral in a fable, or the use of a particular rhyme scheme in a
villanelle. Conventions of the Haiku include the line and syllable count, the use of a word that
marks a season, and the “phrase and fragment” style.
Onomatopoeia
The use of words to imitate the sounds they describe. Words such as buzz and crack are
onomatopoetic. The following line from Pope's "Sound and Sense" onomatopoetically
imitates in sound what it describes:
When Ajax strives some rock's vast weight to throw,
The line too labors, and the words move slow.
Most often, however, onomatopoeia refers to words and groups of words, such as Tennyson's
description of the "murmur of innumerable bees," which attempts to capture the sound of a
swarm of bees buzzing.

25. Let’s get ready
to write!
Haiku

26. “Haiku show[s] us the world in a water drop,
providing a tiny lens through which to glimpse the
miracle and mystery of life” (National Endowment
for the Humanities).
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27. • It is a traditional form of
Japanese poetry
• It describes nature, every
day life, or the human
condition
• It is based on personal
reflection
• Its value is in sudden
discovery or revelation
What is Haiku?
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28. The moment two bubbles
are united, they both vanish.
A lotus blooms.
-Kijo Murakami (1865-1938)

29. Why Haiku?
• It is a great mode of self-
expression
• It demands both brevity and
clarity in writing
• It captures one moment and
its emotions perfectly
• It expresses complex ideas
through simple observations
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Attribution, No Derivatives

30. • Writing and understanding
Haiku requires multiple
skills:
– Close observation
– Careful reflection
– Concise word choice
– An open mind
Writing Haiku
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31. • A Haiku traditionally has three lines with seventeen
syllables:
– Five --Three
– Seven --Five
– Five --Three
• This form is strict in Japanese
• Sometimes it varies in other languages or in
translation. Endeavor to be traditional—even in
English!
Writing Haiku: Form

32. • A haiku consists of two parts: The description and the
reflection.
• Each part depends on the other for meaning.
• In Japanese Haiku, the break is marked by a “cutting word.”
In English, the break is often marked by punctuation (e.g.
colon, long dash, ellipsis)
• A haiku usually includes a kigo, a word that indicates a
season. This does not have to be a traditional season like fall
or winter. It could be baseball season or voting time; the
reader just has to be able to determine when the event takes
place.
Writing Haiku: Structure and Language

33. English Haiku
the rhythm
of her old brown hands
weaving thin wet reeds
Elizabeth St Jacques
1991 Charles B. Dickson International Haiku
Contest--winners

34. Write Your Own Haiku
–Try the five, seven, five syllable form
–Try the three, five, three syllable form
–Include a kigo to indicate the season
–Use both a description and a reflection.
–Remember to identify the break between
the two with punctuation.

35. old pond . . .
a frog leaps in
water's sound
Matsuo Bashô
(1644-1694)
Billboards . . .
wet
in spring
rain . . .
Eric W. Amann

37. • Natural Endowment for the Humanities. EDSITEment. Can You
Haiku? May 2002. 10 October 2009.
<http://edsitement.neh.gov/view_lesson_plan.asp?ID=250>.
• Toyomasu, Kei Grieg. HAIKU for PEOPLE. 10 Jan. 2001. 10
October 2009. <http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku>.
• Herrlin, Jackie. HA-KU. 2004. Internet Archive. 10 October
2009. <http://www.archive.org/details/cie_haku>.
(Attribution, Non Commercial, No Derivatives)
• Russo, Dave. North Carolina Haiku Society. Unknown. 10
October 2009. <http://nc-haiku.org/haiku-misc.htm>.
Works Cited

38. Homework
• Make your Word Press
Website or establish your user
name
• Post #1: 2-3 Haiku
• Bring a copy of your work to
our next meeting.
• Reading: Blank Verse-All (on
the website under “course
readings,” “poetry,” and
“blank verse”).
• Study Terms 1-5