change

1. Changesmade after feedback frommy pitch client.
Afterspeakingtothe clientwe bothagreedona few changesI can make to my shortfilmbasedon
scene changesanda fewdetail differences. We discussedscenessuchasthe beginningone atthe
part of mymaincharacter sayinggood morningtoa neighbour.We keptthe scene inas itgives
some establishmentbutwe cut itdownconsiderably,we didthe same forthe sense where mymain
character goesto the scenesof the murders.We cut a few fromthe story andagain cut downthe
time of those that do occur. My clientalsohelpedme getideasof whatlocationssome of myscenes
couldbe in,especiallythe sceneswhere the threemeetandtalk.We exchangedafew ideasfrom
one the characters house,ina car, walkingdownthe roadbut eventuallywe agreedtheywould
meetandconverse ina local park to make it seemmore realistictoa teenager.