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Essay Writing: Introductions and Conclusions
Essay Writing: Introductions
and Conclusions
This resource aims to:
• Explain briefly what an essay is and why it is
important for academic study
• Demonstrate an essay structure and represent it
visually
• Show how to write an introduction
• Show how to write a conclusion
• Provide links to further useful resources
The Academic Essay
What?
An essay at university is a written argument in favour
of a view. It does not mean writing about everything
you have learned in your lectures. Watch the
presentation here for a more detailed explanation.
Why?
The main skill being developed at university is the
ability to think critically, which means being able to
analyse (examine) and evaluate (judge) other peoples’
arguments and theories before coming to your own
conclusion.
How?
Structure your essay clearly with an introduction that
sets out your position before presenting a number of
relevant points, supported by academic references.
Finish off with a conclusion that restates your position.
The following slides will show you how to do this.
The Christmas Cracker
One way of thinking about essay
structure visually is the Christmas
cracker.
The essay starts by introducing the
general subject area before identifying
the specific problem being addressed
and indicating the structure. A series of
paragraphs in the main body then
delivers the argument in a coherent
way. The essay concludes by returning
to the question, stating your position
and summarising the main arguments
before linking back out to the general
subject area.
Source: adapted from Wallbank (2018)
Introduction
Main body
(approximately
80% of word count)
Conclusion
Introductions Keep the introduction short and to the point – between 5 and 10 per cent of the
word count is a rough guide. Some people find it easier to write the main body of
the essay first and then write the introduction at the same time as the conclusion.
General
Specific
Introduce the essay: briefly set your essay in its wider context
or subject area with a general statement. You could provide a
‘hook’ for the reader such as a data, facts or a quote.
Focus the essay: identify the central issue or the
specific problem that the essay is addressing. You
could briefly define any key terms you will be
using.
Orient the reader: provide your
reader with a road map by outlining
the structure of your argument. It
should not be a mystery tour. The
reader needs to know where the
essay is going.
Source: adapted from Kain (1999) and Wallbank (2018)
Thesis Statements
A thesis (position) statement
says what the essay argues and
basically answers the question.
It is not essential but including
one here may help to keep your
writing focused and on track
throughout the essay.
Introduction Example
Source: text adapted from Auckland University of Technology (2018b)
Introduce the
essay
Focus the
essay
Orient the
reader
The social networking site Facebook has become increasingly popular since its
inception in 2004, with over 1.8 billion people using the sire on a monthly basis
(Facebook, 2017). As a result, a discussion has arisen within the education
sector about the ways in which websites like Facebook can be used in learning
and teaching. The use of such social networking sites within universities is not
uncontroversial and has the potential for both positive and negative impact.
Therefore, learners and teachers should critically evaluate the educational value
of such sites before endorsing their use. This essay discusses both the positive
and negative effects of using Facebook in Higher Education (HE). First, it
identifies benefits related to online community building, engagement and
collaboration, before identifying concerns about its potential for distraction and
issues related to safety and privacy. It will argue that despite the teaching and
learning opportunities it presents, the use of Facebook in HE remains too
fraught with threats to safety to be unequivocally endorsed for educational
use, without specific guidance for teachers and students.
Thesis Statement
Conclusions The conclusion should not introduce new ideas or references. It should state or
restate your final position on the question.
Specific
General
Restate position: link back to the
question and make sure you have
reached a conclusion, e.g. answer the
question!
Thesis Statements
If you used a thesis statement,
reword it here to reflect the
argument you have just laid out in
your essay. Don’t simply copy and
paste it from the introduction.
Summarise the argument: remember that the
reader has just read your essay so no need to
overdo this. Simply reiterate your main points in the
order you presented them in the body of the essay.
Discuss implications: State why this is important for the
subject area of the essay. You could also signal the future by
suggesting where things might go next in terms of policy or
more research for example.
Source: adapted from Hull (2020 and Wallbank (2018)
Conclusion Example
Restate
position
Summarise
discussion
Discuss
implications
In summary, this essay has considered both the positive and negative aspects of
using Facebook in the HE classroom. It has argued that an unequivocal
endorsement of the social media site is not possible given the very real threats
to student safety its use presents. Research has identified that Facebook can
facilitate social interaction and rich collaboration between peers. Therefore, it
has the potential to complement face-to-face modes of delivery. However, if
Facebook is going to be effectively and safely used in teaching and learning,
then students and teachers need careful guidance. Concerns about its use
centre on the tendency for Facebook to distract students as well as the need to
support students to better control privacy settings. Although the use of any
online tool comes with inherent challenges that needs careful consideration,
the benefits exemplify how the integration of technology offers new approaches
to teaching in learning. Higher education institutions will need to adapt rapidly
to this changing landscape and learn to harness these possibilities safely if they
are to succeed in the current remote-learning environment.
Thesis Statement
Source: text adapted from Auckland University of Technology (2018a)
This resource provides a basic guide to writing introductions and
conclusions in academic essay writing.
Here are links to online resources for students wanting to take their
understanding further:
http://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/introducing-work/
https://libguides.hull.ac.uk/essays/home
Connelly, J. and Forsyth, P. (2012) Essay writing skills: essential techniques to gain top grade. Available
from:https://www-dawsonera-com.ezproxy.leedsbeckett.ac.uk/abstract/9780749463922
Creme, P. and Lea, M. R. (2008) Writing at university: a guide for students 3rd ed. Available
from:https://www-dawsonera-com.ezproxy.leedsbeckett.ac.uk/abstract/9780335235476
Next Steps
References
Auckland University of Technology (2018a) Essays: Conclusion paragraphs. [Online video], April 2018. Available
from:<https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmntQAkOeRI>[Accessed 28 July 2020].
Auckland University of Technology (2018b) Essays: Introduction paragraphs. [Online video], April 2018. Available
from:<https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmntQAkOeRI>[Accessed 28 July 2020].
Kain, P. (1999) Beginning the Academic Essay. [Online] Available
from:<https://writingcenter.fas.harvard.edu/pages/beginning-academic-essay >[Accessed 23 July 2020].
Leeds Beckett University (2018) Skills for Learning: Essay writing. [Online presentation] Available
from:<https://skillsforlearning.leedsbeckett.ac.uk/local/academic_communication/essay_writing/01.shtml>[Accessed
29 July 2020].
University of Hull (2020) Essay writing: Home. [Online guide] Available
from:<https://libguides.hull.ac.uk/essays/main>[Accessed 21 July 2020].
UT Writing Center (2015) Making an Outline: Sticky Notes. [Online video], August 2015. Available
from:<https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAxjUwomB9g>[Accessed 21 July 2020].
Wallbank, A. J. (2018) Academic Writing and Dyslexia: A Visual guide to Writing at University. Abingdon: Routledge
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Essay_Intros_and_Conclusions.pptx

  • 3. This resource aims to: • Explain briefly what an essay is and why it is important for academic study • Demonstrate an essay structure and represent it visually • Show how to write an introduction • Show how to write a conclusion • Provide links to further useful resources
  • 4. The Academic Essay What? An essay at university is a written argument in favour of a view. It does not mean writing about everything you have learned in your lectures. Watch the presentation here for a more detailed explanation. Why? The main skill being developed at university is the ability to think critically, which means being able to analyse (examine) and evaluate (judge) other peoples’ arguments and theories before coming to your own conclusion. How? Structure your essay clearly with an introduction that sets out your position before presenting a number of relevant points, supported by academic references. Finish off with a conclusion that restates your position. The following slides will show you how to do this.
  • 5. The Christmas Cracker One way of thinking about essay structure visually is the Christmas cracker. The essay starts by introducing the general subject area before identifying the specific problem being addressed and indicating the structure. A series of paragraphs in the main body then delivers the argument in a coherent way. The essay concludes by returning to the question, stating your position and summarising the main arguments before linking back out to the general subject area. Source: adapted from Wallbank (2018) Introduction Main body (approximately 80% of word count) Conclusion
  • 6. Introductions Keep the introduction short and to the point – between 5 and 10 per cent of the word count is a rough guide. Some people find it easier to write the main body of the essay first and then write the introduction at the same time as the conclusion. General Specific Introduce the essay: briefly set your essay in its wider context or subject area with a general statement. You could provide a ‘hook’ for the reader such as a data, facts or a quote. Focus the essay: identify the central issue or the specific problem that the essay is addressing. You could briefly define any key terms you will be using. Orient the reader: provide your reader with a road map by outlining the structure of your argument. It should not be a mystery tour. The reader needs to know where the essay is going. Source: adapted from Kain (1999) and Wallbank (2018) Thesis Statements A thesis (position) statement says what the essay argues and basically answers the question. It is not essential but including one here may help to keep your writing focused and on track throughout the essay.
  • 7. Introduction Example Source: text adapted from Auckland University of Technology (2018b) Introduce the essay Focus the essay Orient the reader The social networking site Facebook has become increasingly popular since its inception in 2004, with over 1.8 billion people using the sire on a monthly basis (Facebook, 2017). As a result, a discussion has arisen within the education sector about the ways in which websites like Facebook can be used in learning and teaching. The use of such social networking sites within universities is not uncontroversial and has the potential for both positive and negative impact. Therefore, learners and teachers should critically evaluate the educational value of such sites before endorsing their use. This essay discusses both the positive and negative effects of using Facebook in Higher Education (HE). First, it identifies benefits related to online community building, engagement and collaboration, before identifying concerns about its potential for distraction and issues related to safety and privacy. It will argue that despite the teaching and learning opportunities it presents, the use of Facebook in HE remains too fraught with threats to safety to be unequivocally endorsed for educational use, without specific guidance for teachers and students. Thesis Statement
  • 8. Conclusions The conclusion should not introduce new ideas or references. It should state or restate your final position on the question. Specific General Restate position: link back to the question and make sure you have reached a conclusion, e.g. answer the question! Thesis Statements If you used a thesis statement, reword it here to reflect the argument you have just laid out in your essay. Don’t simply copy and paste it from the introduction. Summarise the argument: remember that the reader has just read your essay so no need to overdo this. Simply reiterate your main points in the order you presented them in the body of the essay. Discuss implications: State why this is important for the subject area of the essay. You could also signal the future by suggesting where things might go next in terms of policy or more research for example. Source: adapted from Hull (2020 and Wallbank (2018)
  • 9. Conclusion Example Restate position Summarise discussion Discuss implications In summary, this essay has considered both the positive and negative aspects of using Facebook in the HE classroom. It has argued that an unequivocal endorsement of the social media site is not possible given the very real threats to student safety its use presents. Research has identified that Facebook can facilitate social interaction and rich collaboration between peers. Therefore, it has the potential to complement face-to-face modes of delivery. However, if Facebook is going to be effectively and safely used in teaching and learning, then students and teachers need careful guidance. Concerns about its use centre on the tendency for Facebook to distract students as well as the need to support students to better control privacy settings. Although the use of any online tool comes with inherent challenges that needs careful consideration, the benefits exemplify how the integration of technology offers new approaches to teaching in learning. Higher education institutions will need to adapt rapidly to this changing landscape and learn to harness these possibilities safely if they are to succeed in the current remote-learning environment. Thesis Statement Source: text adapted from Auckland University of Technology (2018a)
  • 10. This resource provides a basic guide to writing introductions and conclusions in academic essay writing. Here are links to online resources for students wanting to take their understanding further: http://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/introducing-work/ https://libguides.hull.ac.uk/essays/home Connelly, J. and Forsyth, P. (2012) Essay writing skills: essential techniques to gain top grade. Available from:https://www-dawsonera-com.ezproxy.leedsbeckett.ac.uk/abstract/9780749463922 Creme, P. and Lea, M. R. (2008) Writing at university: a guide for students 3rd ed. Available from:https://www-dawsonera-com.ezproxy.leedsbeckett.ac.uk/abstract/9780335235476 Next Steps
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