JULIET C. GATUS
School Paper Adviser
THE ANVIL
Br. Andrew Gonzalez Technical High
School
EDITORIAL
WRITING
Courtship
A form of persuasion and
HOW IT COULD BE USED
IN WRITING
Courtship in the Philippines:
“Courtship is the best part of a girl’s
romance and love life”. This is the reason
why in the earlier courting practices there
have been a lot of rituals involved.”
Stages of courting as
well as in writing an
editorial
STAGE 1:
Express your intention
-always say what you want (walang paliguy-
ligoy)
BE CONCISE!
STAGE 2:
Introduce yourself
-from head to leg providing data (‘wag
mag-imbento)
The HEAD of our
Editorial
The NECK of our
Editorial
The BODY of our
Editorial- give at least three reasons why you are taking your stand.
An ARM of our
Editorial
- Support your arguments with evidence and examples. Your
English teachers call this elaboration.
The LEG of our
Editorial-If you are going to complain about something, you must have a better
way of doing it.
Head:
Binigyang- katwiran ang media killings
(Pang-masa) - June 5, 2016 - 12:00am
MARIIN ang pahayag ni president-
elect Rodrigo Duterte sa isang press
conference noong isang araw. Sabi
niya, kaya maraming mediamen
ang napapatay ay dahil bias na
kahit nabigyan na ay bumabanat pa
rin.
Neck/Body:
Ginawang halimbawa at binigyang katwiran ni Duterte ang
pagpatay sa mamamahayag na si Jun Pala noong Set. 6, 2003 sa
Davao City. Pinagbabaril si Pala ng riding in tandem. Si Pala ay
kritiko ni Duterte. Sabi niya, “ I don’t want to demean his me-
mory but he was a rotten son of bitch, He deserved it..”
Sa lahat nang sector ng lipunan ay mayroong nangyayaring
corruption. Alam ng mamamayan ang kalakarang ito. Talamak
ang nangyayaring corruption at ang sector ng media ay kabilang
dito. May mga “corrupt” na mamamahayag na nagpapabayad
para baliktarin ang tama o kampihan ang nagbayad at mayroon
ding bumabanat kahit pa nga binayaran na.
Pero hindi naman makatwiran na dahil sa pagbanat ay
kamatayan na ang hatol gaya nang nangyari kay Pala. Ang lahat
ng mga nagawang pagkakamali ay may katapat na kaparusahan.
At sigurado kami na alam ito ni Duterte sapagkat dati siyang
prosecutor bago pumasok sa pulitika. Alam niya kung ano ang
nakasaad sa batas.
Arm:
Maraming mamamahayag na ang
napapatay. Ngayong 2016, dalawa na
ang napapatay at ang pinaka-latest ay si
Alex Balcoba, reporter-columnist ng
People’s Brigada na binaril sa harap ng
kanyang shop sa Quiapo noong
nakaraang linggo. Wala pang naaresto
ang pulisya sa pagpatay kay Balcoba.
Leg:
Sa aming palagay, may epekto ang
pahayag ni Duterte ukol sa pagpatay sa
mga mamamahayag. Parang binibigyan
niya ng lisensiya ang sinuman na
itumba ang mamamahayag kahit pa ito
ay parehas. Ito ang aming nakikita sa
himig ng kanyang pana-nalita. Sana
nagkakamali kami.
GIVE A PROPOSAL
Be my GF/BF!
Before saying YES, pick first what type of a
man do you like the most:
TYPES OF EDITORIAL
CRITICIZE?
If the editorial criticizes, it should always be constructive.
Emphasize the positive about what you are criticizing, or
your readers will not trust you.
If you criticize, you have an obligation to offer an
alternative solution or course of action.
INFORM/EXPLAIN?
Editorials that explain are somewhat like expository
essays.
They attempt to interpret or inform rather than to argue a
point of view.
The only expression of opinion comes in the interpretation
of the facts.
PERSUADE/PROVIDES
SOLUTION?
Generally, editorials that persuade offer
specific solutions to a perceived problem.
They expect immediate action rather than
the understanding of a situation.
A persuasive editorial can provide
leadership in bringing about changes in
school policy or in student behavior.
PRAISE OR COMMAND?
If the editorial praises, there should be specific
reasons for doing so.
Perhaps an organization or individual has gone
above and beyond the call of duty and the staff feels
there should be some recognition.
Whichever it would be always
choose the…
SINCEREST!
WHY?
because EDITORIAL
WRITING is an…
article that presents the newspaper's STAND on an
issue. It reflects the MAJORITY vote of
the editorial board.
Vermont C. Royster
Pulitzer Prize winning editorial writer
“The editorial page of the
paper should begin where the
rest of the paper leaves off.”
YOU CHOSE HIM?
And you feel regretful?
What went
wrong?
You didn’t take a stand
there are both positives and negatives to this new proposal.
The argument was trite and
generalized. Be specific to the
situation
You asked too many rhetorical
questions without stating an
opinion
The wording was pompous or
pretentious
You turned into a preacher
(Disruptive students must attend awards ceremonies to
learn how to become better people.)
You got off topic
Your argument lacked credibility
You used stereotypes or made
personal attacks
Remember the key to a successful
Editorial …
 Think. Original thought.
 Provide strong evidence to support your
stance
 Write in third person (some first person
plural)
MORE?
 Use active voice
 Be mature, fair and reasonable
 Offer a solution
Time to
work!!

Editorial Writing

  • 1.
    JULIET C. GATUS SchoolPaper Adviser THE ANVIL Br. Andrew Gonzalez Technical High School EDITORIAL WRITING
  • 2.
    Courtship A form ofpersuasion and HOW IT COULD BE USED IN WRITING
  • 3.
    Courtship in thePhilippines: “Courtship is the best part of a girl’s romance and love life”. This is the reason why in the earlier courting practices there have been a lot of rituals involved.”
  • 4.
    Stages of courtingas well as in writing an editorial
  • 5.
    STAGE 1: Express yourintention -always say what you want (walang paliguy- ligoy) BE CONCISE!
  • 6.
    STAGE 2: Introduce yourself -fromhead to leg providing data (‘wag mag-imbento)
  • 7.
    The HEAD ofour Editorial
  • 8.
    The NECK ofour Editorial
  • 9.
    The BODY ofour Editorial- give at least three reasons why you are taking your stand.
  • 10.
    An ARM ofour Editorial - Support your arguments with evidence and examples. Your English teachers call this elaboration.
  • 11.
    The LEG ofour Editorial-If you are going to complain about something, you must have a better way of doing it.
  • 12.
    Head: Binigyang- katwiran angmedia killings (Pang-masa) - June 5, 2016 - 12:00am MARIIN ang pahayag ni president- elect Rodrigo Duterte sa isang press conference noong isang araw. Sabi niya, kaya maraming mediamen ang napapatay ay dahil bias na kahit nabigyan na ay bumabanat pa rin.
  • 13.
    Neck/Body: Ginawang halimbawa atbinigyang katwiran ni Duterte ang pagpatay sa mamamahayag na si Jun Pala noong Set. 6, 2003 sa Davao City. Pinagbabaril si Pala ng riding in tandem. Si Pala ay kritiko ni Duterte. Sabi niya, “ I don’t want to demean his me- mory but he was a rotten son of bitch, He deserved it..” Sa lahat nang sector ng lipunan ay mayroong nangyayaring corruption. Alam ng mamamayan ang kalakarang ito. Talamak ang nangyayaring corruption at ang sector ng media ay kabilang dito. May mga “corrupt” na mamamahayag na nagpapabayad para baliktarin ang tama o kampihan ang nagbayad at mayroon ding bumabanat kahit pa nga binayaran na. Pero hindi naman makatwiran na dahil sa pagbanat ay kamatayan na ang hatol gaya nang nangyari kay Pala. Ang lahat ng mga nagawang pagkakamali ay may katapat na kaparusahan. At sigurado kami na alam ito ni Duterte sapagkat dati siyang prosecutor bago pumasok sa pulitika. Alam niya kung ano ang nakasaad sa batas.
  • 14.
    Arm: Maraming mamamahayag naang napapatay. Ngayong 2016, dalawa na ang napapatay at ang pinaka-latest ay si Alex Balcoba, reporter-columnist ng People’s Brigada na binaril sa harap ng kanyang shop sa Quiapo noong nakaraang linggo. Wala pang naaresto ang pulisya sa pagpatay kay Balcoba.
  • 15.
    Leg: Sa aming palagay,may epekto ang pahayag ni Duterte ukol sa pagpatay sa mga mamamahayag. Parang binibigyan niya ng lisensiya ang sinuman na itumba ang mamamahayag kahit pa ito ay parehas. Ito ang aming nakikita sa himig ng kanyang pana-nalita. Sana nagkakamali kami.
  • 16.
    GIVE A PROPOSAL Bemy GF/BF! Before saying YES, pick first what type of a man do you like the most: TYPES OF EDITORIAL
  • 17.
    CRITICIZE? If the editorialcriticizes, it should always be constructive. Emphasize the positive about what you are criticizing, or your readers will not trust you. If you criticize, you have an obligation to offer an alternative solution or course of action.
  • 18.
    INFORM/EXPLAIN? Editorials that explainare somewhat like expository essays. They attempt to interpret or inform rather than to argue a point of view. The only expression of opinion comes in the interpretation of the facts.
  • 19.
    PERSUADE/PROVIDES SOLUTION? Generally, editorials thatpersuade offer specific solutions to a perceived problem. They expect immediate action rather than the understanding of a situation. A persuasive editorial can provide leadership in bringing about changes in school policy or in student behavior.
  • 20.
    PRAISE OR COMMAND? Ifthe editorial praises, there should be specific reasons for doing so. Perhaps an organization or individual has gone above and beyond the call of duty and the staff feels there should be some recognition.
  • 21.
    Whichever it wouldbe always choose the… SINCEREST!
  • 22.
  • 23.
    because EDITORIAL WRITING isan… article that presents the newspaper's STAND on an issue. It reflects the MAJORITY vote of the editorial board.
  • 24.
    Vermont C. Royster PulitzerPrize winning editorial writer “The editorial page of the paper should begin where the rest of the paper leaves off.”
  • 25.
    YOU CHOSE HIM? Andyou feel regretful? What went wrong?
  • 26.
    You didn’t takea stand there are both positives and negatives to this new proposal.
  • 27.
    The argument wastrite and generalized. Be specific to the situation
  • 28.
    You asked toomany rhetorical questions without stating an opinion
  • 29.
    The wording waspompous or pretentious
  • 30.
    You turned intoa preacher (Disruptive students must attend awards ceremonies to learn how to become better people.)
  • 31.
  • 32.
  • 33.
    You used stereotypesor made personal attacks
  • 34.
    Remember the keyto a successful Editorial …  Think. Original thought.  Provide strong evidence to support your stance  Write in third person (some first person plural)
  • 35.
    MORE?  Use activevoice  Be mature, fair and reasonable  Offer a solution
  • 36.