Timeline (Draft 2)
Emma Marshall
Annamaria Noto
Bridget Cardenas Pazmino
Close up/
overhead shot of
Amber on ground
with eyes shut
Mid shot of the
girls looking up
and realising
where they are
Long of the 2 girls
continue to walk,
looking at map,
unsure where
they’re going
Over the shoulder
showing the map
on Amber’s
phone
Long shot of the 2
girls walking,
looking at a
phone
Director Actors
Long shot from
behind of friend
running away
Mid-long of the
girls, Amber looks
excited, her friend
looks scared and
leaves
When panning
stops, long shot
of a tree
Establishing/
POV/ panning
showing the
location of a
graveyard
Written by
POV from M.C. (in
tree) of Amber
now by herself
START
0 Secs 10 secs 30 secs 35 secs 45 secs 55 secs
Close up/ overhead
shot of Amber with
eyes shut. They
suddenly open and
are red.
Long shot from
behind Amber
walking towards
tree
Close up on
Amber’s feet
beginning to walk
Close up shot on
Amber’s pocket
as she puts her
phone away
Music by Title
POV from M.C. of
Amber getting
closer to him
Long shot of
Amber walking
from behind
POV from M.C. of
Amber coming
towards him
POV from M.C.
face to face with
Amber
Long shot of
Amber walking
from behind (still
getting closer to
M.C.)
END
90secs65 secs 75 secs

DRAFT 2 TIMELINE

  • 1.
    Timeline (Draft 2) EmmaMarshall Annamaria Noto Bridget Cardenas Pazmino
  • 2.
    Close up/ overhead shotof Amber on ground with eyes shut Mid shot of the girls looking up and realising where they are Long of the 2 girls continue to walk, looking at map, unsure where they’re going Over the shoulder showing the map on Amber’s phone Long shot of the 2 girls walking, looking at a phone Director Actors Long shot from behind of friend running away Mid-long of the girls, Amber looks excited, her friend looks scared and leaves When panning stops, long shot of a tree Establishing/ POV/ panning showing the location of a graveyard Written by POV from M.C. (in tree) of Amber now by herself START 0 Secs 10 secs 30 secs 35 secs 45 secs 55 secs
  • 3.
    Close up/ overhead shotof Amber with eyes shut. They suddenly open and are red. Long shot from behind Amber walking towards tree Close up on Amber’s feet beginning to walk Close up shot on Amber’s pocket as she puts her phone away Music by Title POV from M.C. of Amber getting closer to him Long shot of Amber walking from behind POV from M.C. of Amber coming towards him POV from M.C. face to face with Amber Long shot of Amber walking from behind (still getting closer to M.C.) END 90secs65 secs 75 secs