1) Marie and Johnny, two school friends who have feelings for each other, sneak away to the science lab after school. However, Marie worries her boyfriend Alfie will find out. 2) The next morning, newspaper headlines report two school children were killed in a suspicious fire at the school. 3) A flashback reveals Alfie saw Marie laughing with Johnny on the phone and became jealous and angry, motivating him to seek revenge through the fire.

1. Pitch and feedback

2. First pitch Our story starts when, one night after school Blair and Chuck, two school friends who have always had eyes for each other (Narrative ), slip away to the science labs and have started to get a bit too close. However, Blair starts to worry ( logical causality ) thinking her high-school boyfriend Nate will find out. She knows he will go insane so she suggests to Chuck they make a move( character motivation ). As they retreat Chuck finds they have been locked in. Blair thinks he is messing with her until he starts to panic and shakes the door. Suddenly the lights black out, the trays of the lab start shaking, and the taps slowly begin to drip ( thematic unity ). The couple start to be become more and more curious as Chuck swears he hears footsteps. It’s then when Blair finds something as she walks into the cupboard. An open box of matches and can of petrol are laying across the floor. She begins to freak until Chuck reassures her they are in a science lab, and it is probably the part of some experiment. The story then skips to the next morning where newspaper headlines are flashing. Two school children were killed last night in the suspicions of a non-accidental fire. A very mournful looking Nate is sitting in the playground holding a picture. He looks lost in between two worlds. A friend comes over to console him. He confides in his friend finishing the story by telling him at least this way Blair will always be his.