The author has made several changes to the layout and design of their double page spread (DPS) magazine article. They moved the text to the right side so that a guitar image fits better on the left. The text is now wrapped around the guitar to look more professionally laid out. They also added a banner behind the model's name to make it stand out using a contrasting color from his coat. The first letter of the article is enlarged to make the magazine look more like a typical publication.

1. I have decided to change the layout of my double page spread by moving the text onto
the right hand side of the DPS. I made this change because the image fits better on the
left as the guitar would have gone over the page. Also I have made the text to go around
the guitar as it looks more professional in terms of layout.

2. I have decided to put up a
banner behind my models
name to make it stand out.
I have chosen the brown
colour from his coat so that
there’s a contrast in colours.
Also I have made the letter J
larger in the start od the
article to make my magazine
look more like one.

3. I have decided to
change the colour of
the banner at the top
of my page because I
thought that the I
should have colours
that go with my
house style.
Also I have add an
image which makes
the DPS more
interesting to look at.
I have put a large F behind
my article as it represents
my magazine Fame. Also It
makes my magazine more
enjoyable to read
I have added the models name
to my DPS so that the readers
know who the article is on if
they cant recognize my model
in the image.