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1. Dissecting Writing
Assessment
Mr Brown March 2023

3. Purpose
• To review the recently released game Wu Long: Fallen Dynasty
• To promote the game, without spoiling any content for
potential players
• To express that this is a good game, that has a few flaws

4. Audience
• Gamers- familiar with this type of game. (lots of reference to
previous games and assumed knowledge)
• People who have not yet played the game, but are interested in
buying it
• People who have played similar games before, and want to
know how this new game is different- is it better or worse?

5. Field: How Accessible is it?
The game developer
A type of game that is
really hard and frustrating,
involving lots of death and
repetition to build skills.
A previous game by Team
Ninja that was a successful
soulslike game
The different ways you can
build your character- the
skills you can give them,
and the attributes you can
change.
Whether you like to be
stealthy, aggressive,
magical, ranged, hard-
hitting, or can take lots of
damage
Previously released games
that are Souls like, which
are held in high regard-
the namesake
How you find, equip and
manage equipment for
your character in the game

6. Field: How Accessible is it?
field
accessible inaccessible
Prior Knowledge
Specialist Terms

7. Tenor: How formal is it?

8. Tenor: How formal is it?
Tenor
casual formal
Use of personal language
Active vs Passive Language
Relationship with Reader

9. Mode: How written is it? Nouns Verbs

10. Mode: How written is it?
Mode
spoken written
Nominalisation
Sentence Density

11. field
tenor
mode
spoken written
accessible inaccessible
formal
Prior Knowledge
Specialist Terms
Active vs Passive Language
Relationship with Reader
Sentence complexity
Nominalisation
casual
The Verdict

12. At this point, it’s probably fair to say that Team Ninja has a
pretty good handle on this whole soulslike genre thing.
The game developer is pretty good at making this type
of game
Wo Long: Fallen Dynasty may not reach the same heights as
Nioh 2 did back in 2020, but it certainly scratches that same
itch of lightning-fast combat, punishing-yet-rewarding
difficulty, and deep build customization options that you can
craft and tailor to your own playstyle.
The game isn’t as good as similar games but it has
good features that make it enjoyable
It’s great for the same reasons that the Nioh games are, and it
accomplishes that feat even while completely changing up
the fundamentals of its combat system to be closer to Sekiro
than Dark Souls.
It’s good for the same reason previous games have
been, even though it changes some things to be more
like other popular games
But by that same token, it also falls victim to the same
familiar issues nagging at those other Team Ninja soulslikes,
including subpar storytelling and excessively fiddly loot
mechanics.
It also has some of the same problems as previous
games of this type
But when you consider that the things Wo Long does better
than just about any other game in this genre, that baggage
amounts to scratches on an otherwise pristine set of armor.
Even though it has bad parts to it, overall the game is
better than many of the similar games on the market.

13. At this point, it’s probably fair to say that Team Ninja has a
pretty good handle on this whole soulslike genre thing.
It’s common knowledge that Squaresoft know their way
around a JRPG.
Wo Long: Fallen Dynasty may not reach the same heights as
Nioh 2 did back in 2020, but it certainly scratches that same
itch of lightning-fast combat, punishing-yet-rewarding
difficulty, and deep build customization options that you can
craft and tailor to your own playstyle.
Final Fantasy 7 Remake may not be as game-changing as its
1997 namesake, but its beautiful graphical enhancements,
fleshing out of classic characters, and accessible but
challenging combat system will tick more than a few of your
wish list boxes.
It’s great for the same reasons that the Nioh games are, and it
accomplishes that feat even while completely changing up
the fundamentals of its combat system to be closer to Sekiro
than Dark Souls.
If you like Final Fantasy games this title will no doubt resonate,
and yet for all of its familiarity there is something distinctly
more polished about the gameplay and storytelling that wasn’t
quite captured in previous iterations.
But by that same token, it also falls victim to the same
familiar issues nagging at those other Team Ninja soulslikes,
including subpar storytelling and excessively fiddly loot
mechanics.
While there are notable improvements, the game isn’t perfect,
with some of the same busy-work and lifeless questing that we
are all too familiar with, many of which lead to inconsistencies
in the feel and atmosphere of the game.
But when you consider that the things Wo Long does better
than just about any other game in this genre, that baggage
amounts to scratches on an otherwise pristine set of armor.
Despite these setbacks, if you are looking to relive the
experience of FFVII, or stepping into the world for the first
time, you‘ll be swept away by this creative reimagining of such
an iconic story.

14. It’s common knowledge that Squaresoft know their way around a JRPG. Final
Fantasy 7 Remake may not be as game-changing as its 1997 namesake, but it’s
beautiful graphical enhancements, fleshing out of classic characters, and accessible
but challenging combat system will tick more than a few of your wish list boxes. If
you like Final Fantasy games this title will no doubt resonate, and yet for all of its
familiarity there is something distinctly more polished about the gameplay and
storytelling that wasn’t quite captured in previous iterations. While there are
notable improvements, the game isn’t perfect, with some of the same busy-work
and lifeless questing that we are all too familiar with, many of which lead to
inconsistencies in the feel and atmosphere of the game. Despite these setbacks, if
you are looking to relive the experience of FFVII, or stepping into the world for the
first time, you‘ll be swept away by this creative reimagining of such an iconic story.
My Composition

15. It’s common knowledge that Squaresoft know their way around a JRPG. Final Fantasy 7
Remake may not be as game-changing as its 1997 namesake, but its beautiful graphical
enhancements, fleshing out of classic characters, and accessible but challenging combat
system will tick more than a few of your wish list boxes. If you like Final Fantasy games this
title will no doubt resonate, and yet for all of its familiarity there is something distinctly
more polished about the gameplay and storytelling that wasn’t quite captured in previous
iterations. While there are notable improvements, the game isn’t perfect, with some of the
same busy-work and lifeless questing that we are all too familiar with, many of which lead
to inconsistencies in the feel and atmosphere of the game. Despite these setbacks, if you
are looking to relive the experience of FFVII, or stepping into the world for the first time,
you‘ll be swept away by this creative reimagining of such an iconic story.
My Composition- Field Analysis
The game developer
A genre of game based
around Japanese culture
and involving a complex
story.
The name of the new
game
Describes updates in
resolution, textures and
character models
Refers to the actions
and activities you will
be asked to do in the
game
Refers to the game this
one was based on, also
called Final Fantasy 7
Refers to other games
in the series that are
similar in gameplay
Refers to the characters
in the original 1997
game that have been
reinvented for the
modern remake.

16. It’s common knowledge that Squaresoft know their way around a JRPG. Final
Fantasy 7 Remake may not be as game-changing as its 1997 namesake, but its
beautiful graphical enhancements, fleshing out of classic characters, and accessible
but challenging combat system will tick more than a few of your wish list boxes. If
you like Final Fantasy games this title will no doubt resonate, and yet for all of its
familiarity there is something distinctly more polished about the gameplay and
storytelling that wasn’t quite captured in previous iterations. While there are
notable improvements, the game isn’t perfect, with some of the same busy-work
and lifeless questing that we are all too familiar with, many of which lead to
inconsistencies in the feel and atmosphere of the game. Despite these setbacks, if
you are looking to relive the experience of FFVII, or stepping into the world for the
first time, you‘ll be swept away by this creative reimagining of such an iconic story.
My Composition- Tenor Analysis

17. It’s common knowledge that Squaresoft know their way around a JRPG. Final
Fantasy 7 Remake may not be as game-changing as its 1997 namesake, but its
beautiful graphical enhancements, fleshing out of classic characters, and accessible
but challenging combat system will tick more than a few of your wish list boxes. If
you like Final Fantasy games this title will no doubt resonate, and yet for all of its
familiarity there is something distinctly more polished about the gameplay and
storytelling that wasn’t quite captured in previous iterations. While there are
notable improvements, the game isn’t perfect, with some of the same busy-work
and lifeless questing that we are all too familiar with, many of which lead to
inconsistencies in the feel and atmosphere of the game. Despite these setbacks, if
you are looking to relive the experience of FFVII, or stepping into the world for the
first time, you‘ll be swept away by this creative reimagining of such an iconic story.
My Composition- Tenor Analysis

18. field
tenor
mode
spoken written
accessible inaccessible
formal
Prior Knowledge
Specialist Terms
Active vs Passive Language
Relationship with Reader
Sentence complexity
Nominalisation
casual
The Verdict