Names of Group
•
•
•
•

Helmi Kurniadi
Indra Dermawan
Oktavianus Hemdi
Rosa Lidia Sigalingging
• DESCRIBES HOW SOMETHING OR SOMEONE LOOKS OR FEELS

• INCLUDE HOW THE WRITER FEELS
• ‘SHOWS’ THE READER THAN ‘TELL’

• CREATES A SENSORY IMAGE ON THE READER’S MIND
• Descriptive paragraphs let the reader
touch, taste, see, hear and smell what you
are describing. The reader should feel as if
they can see what you are describing
clearly. You want to paint a picture as you
write the descriptive paragraph. Here are
a few guidelines to help you write a great
descriptive paragraph.
• Identification

Identification is part of Descriptive Text contain about topic
or “what" will you describe.
• Description
Description is the last part of Descriptive Text contain about
explanation or description about topic or “what" will you
identifacate about physic form, quality, common behaviors
or characteristics.
• Descriptive Text used Present Tense, such as : go, eat, fly, etc.
• Descriptive Text used various of Adjectives have the characteristics Describing,
Numbering, dan Classifying, such as : two strong legs, sharp white fangs, etc.
•
• Descriptive Text used Relating Verbs to give information about subject, such as: my mum
is realy cool, it has very thick fur, etc.
• Descriptive Text used Thinking Verbs, such as : belive, think, etc. And Feeling Verbs, such
as : feel to give expression to writer’s personal view about subject, such as : police believe
the suspect is armed, I think it is a clever animal, etc.

• Descriptive Text juga used Adverbs to give extra information about behaviors or
characteristics (Adjective) explained, such as : it is extremely high, it runs definitely past,
etc.
Every people certainly have a mother. Because people was born from
her. The existence of her among us is definitely important. That is why I
love her so much. I owe great debt to what she has been doing to me
until right now. I love you, mom.

Identification

My mother's name is Khodijah. She was born 49 years ago. She is short,
but not too short. She is little fat. And she is old. She has got short
white straight hair. She has got brown skin. She is beautiful. Her hand is
so soft, the hand that have taught me to be kind person.

Description
She never stops to support me. She always tells me to not give up so
easily. She always gives me some fine solutions when I have some
problems. The importance of her is never denied. That is why I never
reject her willing.
• A short account (or narrative) of an interesting or amusing
incident, often intended to illustrate or support some point.
Adjective: anecdotal.
• The expression anecdotal evidence refers to the use of particular
instances or concrete examples to support a general claim. Such
information (sometimes referred to pejoratively as "hearsay") may
be compelling but does not, in itself, provide proof.
1. Abstract
The first structure of anecdote text is abstract. Commonly, writer starts recognize strange event to
tell you. Theres some abstract of anecdote text begin with using introgrative sentences, but not all of
abstract of anecdote text used introgrative sentences.
2. Orientation
The second structure of anecdote text is orientation like in narrative text. Orientation of anecdote
text to tell who, when and where the strange event happened.
3. Crisis
The third structure of anecdote text is crisis. In this part tell about the strange event happened.
writer tells completely.
4. Reaction / Incident

The last structure of anecdote text is reaction / incident. In this part of reaction, writer tells about
how the subject solves the problem and in the end of the strange event.
1.Use past tense such as : I found it last night.

2.Use rhetoric question such as : do you know what?
3.Use conjuction of time such as : then, afterward, etc.
4.Use action verb such as : went, writed, etc.
5.Use imperative sentence such as : listen to this.
6.Use exclamation sentence such as : it’s awful , it’s
wonderful, etc.
How would you like to find a snake in your bath? A nasty one
too!
We had just moved into a new house, which had been empty
for so long that everything was in a terrible mess anna and I decided
we would clean the bath first, so we set to and turned on the tap.

Abstract
Orientation

Suddenly to my horror a snake’s head apperead in the plug-hole.
Then out slithered the rest of his long thin body. He twisted and
turned on the slippery bottom of the bath, spitting and hissing at us.
For an instant I stood there quite paralysed. Then I yelled for my
husband, who luckily came running and killed the snake with the
handle of a broom Anna, who was only three at the time, was quite
interested in the whole business. Indeed I had to pull her out of the
way or she had probably have leant over the bath to get a better
look!

Ever since then I’ve always put the plug in firmly before running
the bath water.

Crisis

Reaction

Descriptive Paragraph and Anecdote Text

  • 1.
    Names of Group • • • • HelmiKurniadi Indra Dermawan Oktavianus Hemdi Rosa Lidia Sigalingging
  • 2.
    • DESCRIBES HOWSOMETHING OR SOMEONE LOOKS OR FEELS • INCLUDE HOW THE WRITER FEELS • ‘SHOWS’ THE READER THAN ‘TELL’ • CREATES A SENSORY IMAGE ON THE READER’S MIND
  • 3.
    • Descriptive paragraphslet the reader touch, taste, see, hear and smell what you are describing. The reader should feel as if they can see what you are describing clearly. You want to paint a picture as you write the descriptive paragraph. Here are a few guidelines to help you write a great descriptive paragraph.
  • 4.
    • Identification Identification ispart of Descriptive Text contain about topic or “what" will you describe. • Description Description is the last part of Descriptive Text contain about explanation or description about topic or “what" will you identifacate about physic form, quality, common behaviors or characteristics.
  • 5.
    • Descriptive Textused Present Tense, such as : go, eat, fly, etc. • Descriptive Text used various of Adjectives have the characteristics Describing, Numbering, dan Classifying, such as : two strong legs, sharp white fangs, etc. • • Descriptive Text used Relating Verbs to give information about subject, such as: my mum is realy cool, it has very thick fur, etc. • Descriptive Text used Thinking Verbs, such as : belive, think, etc. And Feeling Verbs, such as : feel to give expression to writer’s personal view about subject, such as : police believe the suspect is armed, I think it is a clever animal, etc. • Descriptive Text juga used Adverbs to give extra information about behaviors or characteristics (Adjective) explained, such as : it is extremely high, it runs definitely past, etc.
  • 6.
    Every people certainlyhave a mother. Because people was born from her. The existence of her among us is definitely important. That is why I love her so much. I owe great debt to what she has been doing to me until right now. I love you, mom. Identification My mother's name is Khodijah. She was born 49 years ago. She is short, but not too short. She is little fat. And she is old. She has got short white straight hair. She has got brown skin. She is beautiful. Her hand is so soft, the hand that have taught me to be kind person. Description She never stops to support me. She always tells me to not give up so easily. She always gives me some fine solutions when I have some problems. The importance of her is never denied. That is why I never reject her willing.
  • 7.
    • A shortaccount (or narrative) of an interesting or amusing incident, often intended to illustrate or support some point. Adjective: anecdotal. • The expression anecdotal evidence refers to the use of particular instances or concrete examples to support a general claim. Such information (sometimes referred to pejoratively as "hearsay") may be compelling but does not, in itself, provide proof.
  • 8.
    1. Abstract The firststructure of anecdote text is abstract. Commonly, writer starts recognize strange event to tell you. Theres some abstract of anecdote text begin with using introgrative sentences, but not all of abstract of anecdote text used introgrative sentences. 2. Orientation The second structure of anecdote text is orientation like in narrative text. Orientation of anecdote text to tell who, when and where the strange event happened. 3. Crisis The third structure of anecdote text is crisis. In this part tell about the strange event happened. writer tells completely. 4. Reaction / Incident The last structure of anecdote text is reaction / incident. In this part of reaction, writer tells about how the subject solves the problem and in the end of the strange event.
  • 9.
    1.Use past tensesuch as : I found it last night. 2.Use rhetoric question such as : do you know what? 3.Use conjuction of time such as : then, afterward, etc. 4.Use action verb such as : went, writed, etc. 5.Use imperative sentence such as : listen to this. 6.Use exclamation sentence such as : it’s awful , it’s wonderful, etc.
  • 10.
    How would youlike to find a snake in your bath? A nasty one too! We had just moved into a new house, which had been empty for so long that everything was in a terrible mess anna and I decided we would clean the bath first, so we set to and turned on the tap. Abstract Orientation Suddenly to my horror a snake’s head apperead in the plug-hole. Then out slithered the rest of his long thin body. He twisted and turned on the slippery bottom of the bath, spitting and hissing at us. For an instant I stood there quite paralysed. Then I yelled for my husband, who luckily came running and killed the snake with the handle of a broom Anna, who was only three at the time, was quite interested in the whole business. Indeed I had to pull her out of the way or she had probably have leant over the bath to get a better look! Ever since then I’ve always put the plug in firmly before running the bath water. Crisis Reaction