Introduction to Task 2A:
Character Graphic Organizer
What’s the task about?


Do up a graphic organizer that depicts Greenheart’s
and Poll’s character traits

Use the PEEL structure to complete the graphic
organizer
Skills Needed for the Task


Knowledge of the play’s storyline
Knowledge of character types
Knowledge of symbols
Knowledge of the PEEL structure
Knowledge of how to provide proper evidence
The PEEL Structure


Point
Evidence +
Explanation
Link
Point


An argument that answers the question

Example question: Is Shrek a dynamic character?
Explain your answer.

Example stand: Yes, he is a dynamic character who
changes over time.
Point


 Example point:


Shrek is a dynamic character because
  his attitude towards friendship
              changes.
Evidence + Explanation


Both should be hand in hand

Evidence can either take the form of references
(pointing out specific scenes) or quotations

Explanation should interpret the evidence for the
reader
Evidence + Explanation


Example evidence:

This can be clearly seen from his care and concern for
 Donkey and Fiona towards the end of the story, as
 compared to how he preferred being alone in the
                      beginning.
Evidence + Explanation


  Example evidence:

   For instance, he insists on Donkey ‘leav[ing] [him]
alone’ in the beginning, but eventually develops a close
                  friendship with him.
More on Evidence…


SHOULD:                  SHOULD NOT:
Be concise and           Be copied in chunks
carefully selected
Be interwoven into the   Be left standing alone
explanation
Very clearly supports    Be vaguely related to
your point               the point
More on Evidence…


Quotes should be given in SINGULAR quotation marks

Language of quotes should be adapted to become
reported speech

E.g. in the play: I will do what I want
In the evidence: He said that he would ‘do what [he]
want[ed]’.
More on Evidence…


Use SQUARE BRACKETS when you change the speech

E.g. I declared my love for Lucy

          He ‘declared [his] love for Lucy’

Applies to tenses too. E.g. want -> ‘want[ed]’
Explanation


Use analytical language
  This shows that…
  From this, we can see that…
  It is evident from this that…
  This explains…

  BEWARE of lapsing into narrative. The examiner already
  knows the story; please don’t retell it
Explanation


  For instance, he insists on Donkey ‘leav[ing]
  [him] alone’ in the beginning, but eventually
   develops a close friendship with him. This
shows that Shrek overcame his aversion/dislike
   of other people and changed his attitude
              towards friendship.
Link


Show how this point answers the question

Usually 1-2 lines
Link


              Example Link:


  This shows that Shrek overcame his
  aversion/dislike of other people and
changed his attitude towards friendship.
Therefore, his change in attitude makes
        him a dynamic character.
Putting it all together


Shrek is a dynamic character because his attitude
towards friendship changes.
For instance, he insists on Donkey ‘leav[ing] [him]
alone’ in the beginning, but eventually develops a
close friendship with him. This shows that Shrek
overcame his aversion/dislike of other people and
changed his attitude towards friendship.
Therefore, his change in attitude makes him a
dynamic character.
Focus for Task 2A


Point
Evidence +
Explanation
Link
Steps for Task 2A


Fill in the graphic organizer planner provided

Create your own graphic organizer, using
Paint/Photoshop/drawing or any other software to
illustrate Greenheart and Poll’s character traits

PEEL structure for literature essays

  • 1.
    Introduction to Task2A: Character Graphic Organizer
  • 2.
    What’s the taskabout? Do up a graphic organizer that depicts Greenheart’s and Poll’s character traits Use the PEEL structure to complete the graphic organizer
  • 3.
    Skills Needed forthe Task Knowledge of the play’s storyline Knowledge of character types Knowledge of symbols Knowledge of the PEEL structure Knowledge of how to provide proper evidence
  • 4.
  • 5.
    Point An argument thatanswers the question Example question: Is Shrek a dynamic character? Explain your answer. Example stand: Yes, he is a dynamic character who changes over time.
  • 6.
    Point Example point: Shrekis a dynamic character because his attitude towards friendship changes.
  • 7.
    Evidence + Explanation Bothshould be hand in hand Evidence can either take the form of references (pointing out specific scenes) or quotations Explanation should interpret the evidence for the reader
  • 8.
    Evidence + Explanation Exampleevidence: This can be clearly seen from his care and concern for Donkey and Fiona towards the end of the story, as compared to how he preferred being alone in the beginning.
  • 9.
    Evidence + Explanation Example evidence: For instance, he insists on Donkey ‘leav[ing] [him] alone’ in the beginning, but eventually develops a close friendship with him.
  • 10.
    More on Evidence… SHOULD: SHOULD NOT: Be concise and Be copied in chunks carefully selected Be interwoven into the Be left standing alone explanation Very clearly supports Be vaguely related to your point the point
  • 11.
    More on Evidence… Quotesshould be given in SINGULAR quotation marks Language of quotes should be adapted to become reported speech E.g. in the play: I will do what I want In the evidence: He said that he would ‘do what [he] want[ed]’.
  • 12.
    More on Evidence… UseSQUARE BRACKETS when you change the speech E.g. I declared my love for Lucy He ‘declared [his] love for Lucy’ Applies to tenses too. E.g. want -> ‘want[ed]’
  • 13.
    Explanation Use analytical language This shows that… From this, we can see that… It is evident from this that… This explains… BEWARE of lapsing into narrative. The examiner already knows the story; please don’t retell it
  • 14.
    Explanation Forinstance, he insists on Donkey ‘leav[ing] [him] alone’ in the beginning, but eventually develops a close friendship with him. This shows that Shrek overcame his aversion/dislike of other people and changed his attitude towards friendship.
  • 15.
    Link Show how thispoint answers the question Usually 1-2 lines
  • 16.
    Link Example Link: This shows that Shrek overcame his aversion/dislike of other people and changed his attitude towards friendship. Therefore, his change in attitude makes him a dynamic character.
  • 17.
    Putting it alltogether Shrek is a dynamic character because his attitude towards friendship changes. For instance, he insists on Donkey ‘leav[ing] [him] alone’ in the beginning, but eventually develops a close friendship with him. This shows that Shrek overcame his aversion/dislike of other people and changed his attitude towards friendship. Therefore, his change in attitude makes him a dynamic character.
  • 18.
    Focus for Task2A Point Evidence + Explanation Link
  • 19.
    Steps for Task2A Fill in the graphic organizer planner provided Create your own graphic organizer, using Paint/Photoshop/drawing or any other software to illustrate Greenheart and Poll’s character traits