Feedback from Peers 
Kayleigh Poling
Why? 
Since my peer’s feedback on my writing was a 
major contributor to my success in this class, I 
decided to display some of the helpful 
comments I received.
Daybook Feedback 
First piece of daybook 
feedback
Daybook Feedback 
Feedback given on a 
daybook entry where I 
discussed a time where I 
felt insecure with my 
writing.
Daybook Feedback 
● To the right is a daybook 
writing about literacy sponsors 
I’ve had throughout elementary, 
middle, and high school 
● At the bottom is feedback given 
from a peer that I’ve become 
close friends with
Most Important form of Feedback: 
Individual Literacy Narrative & Feedback Pt. 1 
● Actual literacy narrative
Most Important form of Feedback: 
Individual Literacy Narrative & Feedback Pt. 2 
Feedback from group members

Daybook feedback

  • 1.
    Feedback from Peers Kayleigh Poling
  • 2.
    Why? Since mypeer’s feedback on my writing was a major contributor to my success in this class, I decided to display some of the helpful comments I received.
  • 3.
    Daybook Feedback Firstpiece of daybook feedback
  • 4.
    Daybook Feedback Feedbackgiven on a daybook entry where I discussed a time where I felt insecure with my writing.
  • 5.
    Daybook Feedback ●To the right is a daybook writing about literacy sponsors I’ve had throughout elementary, middle, and high school ● At the bottom is feedback given from a peer that I’ve become close friends with
  • 6.
    Most Important formof Feedback: Individual Literacy Narrative & Feedback Pt. 1 ● Actual literacy narrative
  • 7.
    Most Important formof Feedback: Individual Literacy Narrative & Feedback Pt. 2 Feedback from group members