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CROWDFUNDING WRITE-UP
DESIRABLE VS UNDESIRABLE
BY ABISH MARTIN
CROWDFUNDING ANALYSIS CAMPAIGN
DESIRABLE WRITE-UP UNDESIRABLE WRITE-UPVS
CLEAR OBJECTIVE
EMOTIONALLY APPEALING
LACK OF INFORMATION
NOT ENOUGH DETAILS
WRITE-UP #1
CLEAR OBJECTIVE
GOOD EYE VIDEO TRAVELS TO KENYA
INFORMATION:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/goodeyevideo/our-
harambee-good-eye-video-travels-to-kenya-to-0?ref=discovery
• Good Eye Video travels to Kenya to create videos
and educational theater and music programs for
an array of amazing non-profits!
• $10,000 funding goal
• $11,100 achieved
• Social Entrepreneurship
LIKE
They have 4 different categories:
- imagine this
- what we will do
- who we’ll help
- why we need your support
Those 4 categories really help the
reader to understand quickly what
the crowdfunding is about.
CLEAR
OBJECTIVE
WRITE-UP #2
LACK OF INFORMATION
THREE TWO WORKSHOP IN GHANA
INFORMATION:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/2012586524/three-two-
workshop-in-ghana?ref=category
• This project aims to raise money for the
building of a home in Ghana using modern
materials. The organizers won a design
competition and are now fundraising to see
their design actually be built.
• $8,000 funding goal
• $8,638 achieved
• Social Entrepreneurship
DISLIKE
The description is good except for its
lack of explanation about how to
maintain the house after it is built.
The role of the building is not very
clear, we don’t know what it is going
to be for.
LACK OF
INFORMATION
WRITE-UP #3
EMOTIONALLY APPEALING
LOS NARANJOS BASKETBALL COURT
INFORMATION:
https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/let-s-renovate-the-los-
naranjos-basketball-court#/
• Renovate/upgrade/rehabilitate a public
space in the village of Los Naranjos,
Honduras
• $1,250 funding goal
• $1,500 achieved
• Social cause
LIKE
Several pictures that show the need
of the repairs.
The write-up gives a full history of the
property and why they want to repair
it.
This write-up is more emotionally
appealing.
EMOTIONALLY
APPEALING
WRITE-UP #4
NOT ENOUGH DETAILS
100% SUSTAINABLE AND AFFORDABLE HOMES
INFORMATION:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/973900645/100-sustainable-
and-affordable-homes-for-the-world
• This project aims to fund the construction of
a sustainable house (produces electricity,
food, and water) using alternative building
materials.  He hopes to disrupt the
construction industry by offering a cheaper
alternative to traditional homes.
• $1,420,000 funding goal
• $105 achieved
• Environmental
NOT
ENOUGH
DETAILS
DISLIKE
Apart from the main pictures, there
are no other pictures or video that
talk about how this project is going
to be accomplish and shows who is
the speaker.
SOURCES
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/goodeyevideo/our-harambee-good-eye-video-travels-to-kenya-to-0?ref=discovery
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/2012586524/three-two-workshop-in-ghana?ref=category
https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/let-s-renovate-the-los-naranjos-basketball-court#/
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/973900645/100-sustainable-and-affordable-homes-for-the-world
IMAGES
https://unsplash.com/photos/WHWYBmtn3_0
https://unsplash.com/photos/1SAnrIxw5OY

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