It's hard work making government content easy to understand, and for good reason. But taking complex, obscure, sprawling (and often stale) information and transforming it into something direct, meaningful, and actionable doesn't have to be a pipe dream. Using tools from a range of user-centric disciplines - including content strategy, digital content production, and information architecture - we can create content that enables the public to find and use information they truly need, to accomplish what they truly want.
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Subconscious judgments about a website are made within 90 seconds in consumers’ minds and are based on visuals. Keeping this in mind, it’s crucial for web designers to develop color patterns that invite users towards their creation.
This is why, colors are a major part of any brand’s identity. Additionally, when a certain color scheme practice is prevalent, it starts to define that country. Designers need to study color coordination of brand categories, as well as research on color schemes used by any country as a whole.
In the following slides, learn the art of color choice for web design practiced in Denmark and Thailand. See how these two countries manage to grip users and online consumers with their unique color schemes to rank high among the 93% consumers who place appearance and color on top when making buying decisions.
People are visual. We get it! But how and when can we use visuals strategically EU in public affairs. Presented at EurActiv on 1 October 2015. Check out #MEPDigital for tweets from the event.
The Art of Choosing Web Design Colors: Lessons from Denmark and ThailandLogo Design Guru
Subconscious judgments about a website are made within 90 seconds in consumers’ minds and are based on visuals. Keeping this in mind, it’s crucial for web designers to develop color patterns that invite users towards their creation.
This is why, colors are a major part of any brand’s identity. Additionally, when a certain color scheme practice is prevalent, it starts to define that country. Designers need to study color coordination of brand categories, as well as research on color schemes used by any country as a whole.
In the following slides, learn the art of color choice for web design practiced in Denmark and Thailand. See how these two countries manage to grip users and online consumers with their unique color schemes to rank high among the 93% consumers who place appearance and color on top when making buying decisions.
People are visual. We get it! But how and when can we use visuals strategically EU in public affairs. Presented at EurActiv on 1 October 2015. Check out #MEPDigital for tweets from the event.
Our Near Futures Series of inspiration and insights reports is designed to highlight what is happening today and how it can shape tomorrow for brands and business. This one is on the Near Future of Travel.
This report is powered by the LHBS Inspiration-Hub that systematically tracks changes in culture, markets and technology and how these signs collectively point to a bigger story.
Infographics on traveling during pregnancy including travel tips and health information for expecting mothers. What you should know before traveling while pregnant.
Day 2 slides from a two-day workshop on UX Foundations by Meg Kurdziolek and Karen Tang. Day 2 covered research methods that can be used throughout the design process to evaluate and validate design.
For the first time in history, a spacecraft has landed on a comet! We are talking about the historic feat of Rosetta and its lander Philae. Here's a concise presentation about their historic journey.
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This is part of our ( 41? 29! ) agency's culture series. Basicly this series of documents helps our teams learn the foundation of agency culture, basic rules to do their work. We are all about sharing the data & know how, so here we are ;)
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Presented at Hofstra University on 3/9/12 in the Leo Guthart Cultural Center Theater. Topics discussed included the evolution of marketing, advertising, and how to best use social media for personal branding use.
From the SMX West Conference in San Jose, California, March 1-3, 2016. SESSION: What You Need To Know About Apple iOS App Search & Universal Links. PRESENTATION: Apple: The Next King of Search - Given by Ian Sefferman, @iseff - MobileDevHQ, CEO. #SMX #32A
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How user research and Data Analysis of the Real Estate market helped in Design the final Product and improved the product's conversions.This segment consists of Experience, Interacting and Visual Design for production.
Empathy, privacy and future proofing your dataPhil Herbert
There is no disputing that the rise of data in marketing has been the biggest boon for marketers in the last half of a century. We spend billions of dollars every year collecting, storing and managing this data, and yet, when asked about it, most consumers would trade the targeted marketing they receive for more privacy.
The question becomes, how do email marketers handle the new realities of the regulatory frameworks post GDPR and CPPA, customer privacy concerns and the needs of our own businesses to create lasting, durable email programs?
The answer is simply this: users over data. Trust, empathy and a laser focus on the customer experience have always been the keys to successful businesses. The internet hasn’t changed that.
Building a brand based on transparency and trust by giving users back the power over their data will create a more valuable (and more profitable) customer relationship that will be less dependent on the whims of big tech providers and government regulators.
In this talk we’ll cover things like:
What does consent actually mean, and how can you get it?
Tips for creating a transparent and trusting customer relationship.
How to MEASURE the monetary value of things like trust, transparency, and brand equity.
Building a safe and useable data structure for your email programs.
Creating preference centers that are useful to the customer and to the brand.
Our Near Futures Series of inspiration and insights reports is designed to highlight what is happening today and how it can shape tomorrow for brands and business. This one is on the Near Future of Travel.
This report is powered by the LHBS Inspiration-Hub that systematically tracks changes in culture, markets and technology and how these signs collectively point to a bigger story.
Infographics on traveling during pregnancy including travel tips and health information for expecting mothers. What you should know before traveling while pregnant.
Day 2 slides from a two-day workshop on UX Foundations by Meg Kurdziolek and Karen Tang. Day 2 covered research methods that can be used throughout the design process to evaluate and validate design.
For the first time in history, a spacecraft has landed on a comet! We are talking about the historic feat of Rosetta and its lander Philae. Here's a concise presentation about their historic journey.
10 Steps of Project Management in Digital Agencies Alemsah Ozturk
This is part of our ( 41? 29! ) agency's culture series. Basicly this series of documents helps our teams learn the foundation of agency culture, basic rules to do their work. We are all about sharing the data & know how, so here we are ;)
Start-up Chile Marketing & Advertising Tribe session on Data Analysis tools for startups. Written by Pedro Villalobos (Lagiar.com), Felipe del Sol (Admetricks.com), Liane Siebenhaar (Mewe.co). This is a selection of tools you can use to shape your pitch and product. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to contact us.
Presented at Hofstra University on 3/9/12 in the Leo Guthart Cultural Center Theater. Topics discussed included the evolution of marketing, advertising, and how to best use social media for personal branding use.
From the SMX West Conference in San Jose, California, March 1-3, 2016. SESSION: What You Need To Know About Apple iOS App Search & Universal Links. PRESENTATION: Apple: The Next King of Search - Given by Ian Sefferman, @iseff - MobileDevHQ, CEO. #SMX #32A
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Entrepreneurs encounter failure often. Successful entrepreneurs overcome failure and emerge wiser. We've taken 33 lessons about failure from Brian Honigman's article "33 Entrepreneurs Share Their Biggest Lessons Learned from Failure", illustrated them with statistics and a little story about entrepreneurship... in space!
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How user research and Data Analysis of the Real Estate market helped in Design the final Product and improved the product's conversions.This segment consists of Experience, Interacting and Visual Design for production.
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There is no disputing that the rise of data in marketing has been the biggest boon for marketers in the last half of a century. We spend billions of dollars every year collecting, storing and managing this data, and yet, when asked about it, most consumers would trade the targeted marketing they receive for more privacy.
The question becomes, how do email marketers handle the new realities of the regulatory frameworks post GDPR and CPPA, customer privacy concerns and the needs of our own businesses to create lasting, durable email programs?
The answer is simply this: users over data. Trust, empathy and a laser focus on the customer experience have always been the keys to successful businesses. The internet hasn’t changed that.
Building a brand based on transparency and trust by giving users back the power over their data will create a more valuable (and more profitable) customer relationship that will be less dependent on the whims of big tech providers and government regulators.
In this talk we’ll cover things like:
What does consent actually mean, and how can you get it?
Tips for creating a transparent and trusting customer relationship.
How to MEASURE the monetary value of things like trust, transparency, and brand equity.
Building a safe and useable data structure for your email programs.
Creating preference centers that are useful to the customer and to the brand.
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3) Pay Too much Interest
4) Pay Too Much in Taxes
5) Earn low rates of return
6) Don’t understand how money really works
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If you would like to find out more about our pre-employment training, employability training or apprenticeships and traineeships please call us on: 0121 707 0550 or e-mail: info@pathwaygroup.co.uk
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Fonts play a crucial role in both User Interface (UI) and User Experience (UX) design. They affect readability, accessibility, aesthetics, and overall user perception.
1. Content Design
What it is & why you need it
Erin Abler
Lead Content Designer, Office of Innovation & Technology
City of Philadelphia
@erinabler
2. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Content design
The practice of shaping
information to help people
take action.
3. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Medicaid: Apply if you are aged (65 years old or older),
blind, or disabled and have low income and few resources.
Apply if you are terminally ill and want to receive hospice
services. Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled; live in a
nursing home; and have low income and limited resources.
Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled and need nursing
home care, but can stay at home with special community
care services. Apply if you are eligible for Medicare and
have low income and limited resources.
http://www.plainlanguage.gov/testexamples/indexExample.cfm?record=86
4. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Medicaid: Apply if you are aged (65 years old or older),
blind, or disabled and have low income and few resources.
Apply if you are terminally ill and want to receive hospice
services. Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled; live in a
nursing home; and have low income and limited resources.
Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled and need nursing
home care, but can stay at home with special community
care services. Apply if you are eligible for Medicare and
have low income and limited resources.
Government content
is confusing.
5. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Medicaid: Apply if you are aged (65 years old or older),
blind, or disabled and have low income and few resources.
Apply if you are terminally ill and want to receive hospice
services. Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled; live in a
nursing home; and have low income and limited resources.
Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled and need nursing
home care, but can stay at home with special community
care services. Apply if you are eligible for Medicare and
have low income and limited resources.
Government content
is repetitive.
6. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Medicaid: Apply if you are aged (65 years old or older),
blind, or disabled and have low income and few resources.
Apply if you are terminally ill and want to receive hospice
services. Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled; live in a
nursing home; and have low income and limited resources.
Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled and need nursing
home care, but can stay at home with special community
care services. Apply if you are eligible for Medicare and
have low income and limited resources.
Government content
is hard to read.
7. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Medicaid: Apply if you are aged (65 years old or older),
blind, or disabled and have low income and few resources.
Apply if you are terminally ill and want to receive hospice
services. Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled; live in a
nursing home; and have low income and limited resources.
Apply if you are aged, blind, or disabled and need nursing
home care, but can stay at home with special community
care services. Apply if you are eligible for Medicare and
have low income and limited resources.
Government content
is bad content.
22. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Content design objectives
• Understand user needs
• Organize information more intuitively
• Create new content for unmet needs
• Develop an underlying content strategy
• Manage content at every stage
23. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Conduct user research
• Analytics
• User interviews
• Task analysis
• Surveys
24. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a: [type of user]
I need to: [task/action]
So that I can: [goal]
25. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a: [type of user]
Who is this for?
I need to: [task/action]
So that I can: [goal]
26. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a: [type of user]
Who is this for?
I need to: [task/action]
What will help this person reach their goal?
So that I can: [goal]
27. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a: [type of user]
Who is this for?
I need to: [task/action]
What will help this person reach their goal?
So that I can: [goal]
What larger thing does the user need to accomplish?
28. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a [type of user], I need to [task/action] so that I can
[goal].
29. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a [type of user], I need to [task/action] so that I can
[goal].
As a homeowner, I need to know how much real estate tax
I owe so I can make a payment.
30. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a [type of user], I need to [task/action] so that I can
[goal].
As a homeowner, I need to know how much real estate tax
I owe so I can make a payment.
As a small business owner, I need to know which taxes I’m
required to pay so I don’t get in trouble for not paying them.
31. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Create user need stories
As a [type of user], I need to [task/action] so that I can
[goal].
As a homeowner, I need to know how much real estate tax
I owe so I can make a payment.
As a small business owner, I need to know which taxes I’m
required to pay so I don’t get in trouble for not paying them.
As a low income resident, I need to find affordable tax
counseling so that I can prepare my tax return correctly.
32. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Gov.uk’s scoping rules
1. Do people want this?
2. Can people reasonably expect us to meet this
need?
3. Can only government meet this need?
4. Is it explaining someone’s rights or obligations?
5. Is it transactional or encouraging a shift to digital
by default government services?
https://gds.blog.gov.uk/2011/09/19/introducing-the-needotron-working-out-the-shape-of-the-product/
33. Erin Abler • @erinabler
User Needs Prioritization
People
want
this
We can
meet
this
need
Only
gov’t
provide
s this
Explains
rights or
obli-
gations
Trans-
actional,
digital by
default
As a homeowner, I need to know
how much real estate tax I owe so I
can make a payment.
As a small business owner, I need
to know which taxes I’m required to
pay so I don’t get in trouble.
As a low income resident, I need to
find affordable tax counseling so
that I can prepare my tax return
correctly.
34. Erin Abler • @erinabler
User Needs Prioritization
People
want
this
We can
meet
this
need
Only
gov’t
provide
s this
Explains
rights or
obli-
gations
Trans-
actional,
digital by
default
As a homeowner, I need to know
how much real estate tax I owe so I
can make a payment.
As a small business owner, I need
to know which taxes I’m required to
pay so I don’t get in trouble.
As a low income resident, I need to
find affordable tax counseling so
that I can prepare my tax return
correctly.
35. Erin Abler • @erinabler
User Needs Prioritization
People
want
this
We can
meet
this
need
Only
gov’t
provide
s this
Explains
rights or
obli-
gations
Trans-
actional,
digital by
default
As a homeowner, I need to know
how much real estate tax I owe so I
can make a payment.
As a small business owner, I need
to know which taxes I’m required to
pay so I don’t get in trouble.
As a low income resident, I need to
find affordable tax counseling so
that I can prepare my tax return
correctly.
37. Erin Abler • @erinabler
To meet a need . . .
• Be specific
• Be informative, not descriptive
• Keep to the point
• Be clear about what comes next
38. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Our user need
As
I need to
So that I
know what to do
am prepared to deal with one if it
happens.
someone potentially affected by a future
emergency,
40. Erin Abler • @erinabler
2 1 Mixed themes & multiple
headers
2 No explanation of unfamiliar
term
Before . . .
41. Erin Abler • @erinabler
1 Mixed themes & multiple
headers
2
3
No explanation of unfamiliar
term
Different descriptions cover the
same subject
Before . . .
3
42. Erin Abler • @erinabler
2
3
1 Mixed themes & multiple
headers
2
3
4
No explanation of unfamiliar
term
Different descriptions cover the
same subject
Indirectly related content
dominates the page
Before . . .
4
45. Erin Abler • @erinabler
…and after
3
1 Clear organizational premise
2
3
Plain-language description
Consolidation of repetitive
content
46. Erin Abler • @erinabler
…and after
1 Clear organizational premise
2
3
4
Plain-language description
Consolidation of repetitive
content
Related content moved to its
own subsection
4
47. Erin Abler • @erinabler
How do we clean up
content?
49. Erin Abler • @erinabler
The best ways to revise
content are also the best
ways to create it.
50. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Support scanning
• People only read 20-28% of text on a page.
• We look for clues that we’re on the right track
before we actually commit to reading.
Jakob Nielsen, http://www.nngroup.com/articles/how-little-do-users-read/
Why
How • Use brief, clear headings.
• Break lists into bullet points.
• Use sentence case, not all-caps.
52. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Put the important stuff first
• People scan content in an F-shaped pattern.
• Readers will decide for themselves if they
want more detailed information.
Why
How • Put critical information in the first two
paragraphs.
• Start subheadings, bullet points, and
paragraphs with informative, noticeable
words.Jakob Nielsen, http://www.nngroup.com/articles/f-shaped-pattern-reading-web-content/
53. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Use white space
• Cramped page layouts make it hard to tell
which content is the most important.
• Dense, lengthy text is less likely to be read.
Why
How • Keep most paragraphs 2-3 sentences long.
• Work with a designer to create an intuitive
visual flow.
Jakob Nielsen, http://www.nngroup.com/articles/how-little-do-users-read/
54. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Use active voice
• People want to be spoken to, not at – and
certainly not about.
• It’s human nature to be impatient.
Dan Carlin, http://www.crocstar.com/2015/02/online-writer-skills/
Why
How • Use “you” and “your” when talking to the
reader.
• Name the doer before the thing being done.
55. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Talk like a human
• Bureaucratic language is often obscure.
• Everyone needs context when learning
something new.
Why
How • Use common words and contractions.
• Provide context and explain the unfamiliar.
• Aim for an 8th grade reading level – 5th or 6th
grade when possible.
56.
57. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Fight complexity
• Long, complicated phrases take longer to read
and more concentration to understand.
• Unnecessary details only delay action.
Why
How • Shorten sentences to 15 words or fewer
whenever possible.
• Aim to instruct or explain, not to describe.
58. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Choose format purposely
• Text isn’t always the best way to help
someone take action
Why
How • Make processes and transactions interactive
• Use digital forms to collect information
• Use meaningful visuals, not random stock
photos
59. Erin Abler • @erinabler
How can we tell
whether it works?
60. A
Consistently clear, concise, and direct. Based on identifiable user needs.
Provides a logical path to a decision or action. Uses appropriate tone. Uses a
format purposely selected to optimize clarity, intuitiveness, and interactivity.
B
Generally effective. Clear, well structured, supports a central concept, and uses
language understandable to a wide audience. Supports users’ needs with
actionable information. May benefit from additional consolidation, editing, or a
different format.
C
Meets basic requirements but has noticeable shortcomings. May be
disorganized, difficult to follow, redundant, or attempt to cover more than one
subject.
D
Below acceptable standards. Poor organization, ineffective sentence
construction, unnecessary details, and imprecise or misleading wording.
Incomplete, repetitive, or uses excessive jargon. May include typos, broken links,
or other proofreading errors.
F
Inaccurate, unnecessary, or so poorly written that it’s likely to confuse or mislead
users. May include dense prose or irrelevant material, or be located in a place
that doesn’t match users’ expectations.
61. A
Consistently clear, concise, and direct. Based on identifiable user needs.
Provides a logical path to a decision or action. Uses appropriate tone. Uses a
format purposely selected to optimize clarity, intuitiveness, and interactivity.
B
Generally effective. Clear, well structured, supports a central concept, and uses
language understandable to a wide audience. Supports users’ needs with
actionable information. May benefit from additional consolidation, editing, or a
different format.
C
Meets basic requirements but has noticeable shortcomings. May be
disorganized, difficult to follow, redundant, or attempt to cover more than one
subject.
D
Below acceptable standards. Poor organization, ineffective sentence
construction, unnecessary details, and imprecise or misleading wording.
Incomplete, repetitive, or uses excessive jargon. May include typos, broken links,
or other proofreading errors.
F
Inaccurate, unnecessary, or so poorly written that it’s likely to confuse or mislead
users. May include dense prose or irrelevant material, or be located in a place
that doesn’t match users’ expectations.
• Consistently clear, concise, and direct
• Based on an identifiable user need
• Provides a logical path to a decision or action
• Uses appropriate tone
• Uses a format purposely selected to optimize
clarity, intuitiveness, and interactivity
62. A
Consistently clear, concise, and direct. Based on identifiable user needs.
Provides a logical path to a decision or action. Uses appropriate tone. Uses a
format purposely selected to optimize clarity, intuitiveness, and interactivity.
B
Generally effective. Clear, well structured, supports a central concept, and uses
language understandable to a wide audience. Supports users’ needs with
actionable information. May benefit from additional consolidation, editing, or a
different format.
C
Meets basic requirements but has noticeable shortcomings. May be
disorganized, difficult to follow, redundant, or attempt to cover more than one
subject.
D
Below acceptable standards. Poor organization, ineffective sentence
construction, unnecessary details, and imprecise or misleading wording.
Incomplete, repetitive, or uses excessive jargon. May include typos, broken links,
or other proofreading errors.
F
Inaccurate, unnecessary, or so poorly written that it’s likely to confuse or mislead
users. May include dense prose or irrelevant material, or be located in a place
that doesn’t match users’ expectations.
• Generally clear and effective
• Structured to support a central concept
• Uses language understandable to a wide
audience
• Supports users’ needs with actionable
information
• May benefit from further consolidation,
editing, or a different format
63. A
Consistently clear, concise, and direct. Based on identifiable user needs.
Provides a logical path to a decision or action. Uses appropriate tone. Uses a
format purposely selected to optimize clarity, intuitiveness, and interactivity.
B
Generally effective. Clear, well structured, supports a central concept, and uses
language understandable to a wide audience. Supports users’ needs with
actionable information. May benefit from additional consolidation, editing, or a
different format.
C
Meets basic requirements but has noticeable shortcomings. May be
disorganized, difficult to follow, redundant, or attempt to cover more than one
subject.
D
Below acceptable standards. Poor organization, ineffective sentence
construction, unnecessary details, and imprecise or misleading wording.
Incomplete, repetitive, or uses excessive jargon. May include typos, broken links,
or other proofreading errors.
F
Inaccurate, unnecessary, or so poorly written that it’s likely to confuse or mislead
users. May include dense prose or irrelevant material, or be located in a place
that doesn’t match users’ expectations.
• Meets basic requirements but has noticeable
shortcomings
• Suffers from disorganization
• Uses logic or language that is difficult to
follow
• Repeats key points instead of stating them
clearly
• Often attempts to cover more than one
64. A
Consistently clear, concise, and direct. Based on identifiable user needs.
Provides a logical path to a decision or action. Uses appropriate tone. Uses a
format purposely selected to optimize clarity, intuitiveness, and interactivity.
B
Generally effective. Clear, well structured, supports a central concept, and uses
language understandable to a wide audience. Supports users’ needs with
actionable information. May benefit from additional consolidation, editing, or a
different format.
C
Meets basic requirements but has noticeable shortcomings. May be
disorganized, difficult to follow, redundant, or attempt to cover more than one
subject.
D
Below acceptable standards. Poor organization, ineffective sentence
construction, unnecessary details, and imprecise or misleading wording.
Incomplete, repetitive, or uses excessive jargon. May include typos, broken links,
or other proofreading errors.
F
Inaccurate, unnecessary, or so poorly written that it’s likely to confuse or mislead
users. May include dense prose or irrelevant material, or be located in a place
that doesn’t match users’ expectations.
• Falls below acceptable standards
• Significantly hampered by poor organization
• Includes repetitive or unnecessary details
• Has imprecise, awkward wording
• May include jargon or needless complexity
• May include typos, broken links, or other
proofreading errors
65. A
Consistently clear, concise, and direct. Based on identifiable user needs.
Provides a logical path to a decision or action. Uses appropriate tone. Uses a
format purposely selected to optimize clarity, intuitiveness, and interactivity.
B
Generally effective. Clear, well structured, supports a central concept, and uses
language understandable to a wide audience. Supports users’ needs with
actionable information. May benefit from additional consolidation, editing, or a
different format.
C
Meets basic requirements but has noticeable shortcomings. May be
disorganized, difficult to follow, redundant, or attempt to cover more than one
subject.
D
Below acceptable standards. Poor organization, ineffective sentence
construction, unnecessary details, and imprecise or misleading wording.
Incomplete, repetitive, or uses excessive jargon. May include typos, broken links,
or other proofreading errors.
F
Inaccurate, unnecessary, or so poorly written that it’s likely to confuse or mislead
users. May include dense prose or irrelevant material, or be located in a place
that doesn’t match users’ expectations.
• Inaccurate, unnecessary, or so poorly written
that it’s likely to confuse or mislead users
• May include dense prose or irrelevant
material
• May be located in a place that doesn’t match
users’ expectations
66. Erin Abler • @erinabler
F
A
Failure of recollection is common. Innocent
misrecollection is not uncommon.
People often forget things or make
mistakes in what they remember.
http://www.plainlanguage.gov/examples/before_after/jury.cfm
67. Erin Abler • @erinabler
D
C
A preponderance of the
evidence.
More likely than not.
http://www.plainlanguage.gov/examples/before_after/jury.cfm
68. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something. Anything.
69. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something.
2. Walk away from it. Seriously. At least 5,000 steps.
70. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something.
2. Walk away from it.
3. Reread it. Wonder what you were
thinking.
71. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something.
2. Walk away from it.
3. Reread it.
4. Revise it.
72. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something.
2. Walk away from it.
3. Reread it.
4. Revise it.
5. Have someone else read it. Befriend that coworker who finds
fault with everything.
73. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something.
2. Walk away from it.
3. Reread it.
4. Revise it.
5. Have someone else read it.
6. Revise it.
74. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something.
2. Walk away from it.
3. Reread it.
4. Revise it.
5. Have someone else read it.
6. Revise it.
7. Have a lot of people read it. Get feedback. Get data. Get humble.
75. Erin Abler • @erinabler
A brief guide to writing well
1. Write something.
2. Walk away from it.
3. Reread it.
4. Revise it.
5. Have someone else read it.
6. Revise it.
7. Have a lot of people read it.
8. Revise it. Repeat as needed.
76. Erin Abler • @erinabler
Key points
• Ad hoc rewriting is a crutch, not a solution.
• Well-designed content turns a need into an
action.
• The best ways to revise content are also the
best ways to create content.
• To improve, seek feedback.
• And finally…
Centers for Medicare & Medicaid Services
Medicaid eligibility
If people can’t understand what we’re saying, how can we expect them to fill out applications correctly or provide us other info we need to help them? Also: online content is a service in and itself.
They can’t do business with us if they don’t know how to pay, how much to pay, and when.
If you want me to understand, you’ll explain it clearly. If you want to confuse or mislead me, you won’t.
What day do I put out my garbage? How do I change my address? Where’s my polling place? (can’t pick up garbage, can’t send them things they need or serve them where they are, can’t expect them to vote leaders into office)
Next slide: water bill user
The temptation is often to turn first to visual design. Understandable – the design is often so bad & inconsistent that it’s causing all kinds of problems on its own.
But fixing content is hard – we find complex links, confusing paths, & the age-old decision b/w an apple & a cheeseburger
http://www.phila.gov/health/chronicdisease/index.html
Sometimes you need a crutch. But it’s not the same as a systemic shift toward better quality
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:INF3-109_Food_Production_Apple_picking_Artist_Drake_Brookshaw.jpg
now that we've decided which needs to prioritize, we need to figure out how to meet these needs with content
now that we've decided which needs to prioritize, we need to figure out how to meet these needs with content
URL (slated for declination): http://oem.readyphiladelphia.org/RelId/607412/articlepage/2/isvars/default/what_to_have.htm
URL (slated for declination): http://oem.readyphiladelphia.org/RelId/607412/articlepage/2/isvars/default/what_to_have.htm
URL (slated for declination): http://oem.readyphiladelphia.org/RelId/607412/articlepage/2/isvars/default/what_to_have.htm
URL (slated for declination): http://oem.readyphiladelphia.org/RelId/607412/articlepage/2/isvars/default/what_to_have.htm
Current URL: https://alpha.phila.gov/prepare-for-an-emergency/make-a-shelter-in-place-kit/
Current URL: https://alpha.phila.gov/prepare-for-an-emergency/make-a-shelter-in-place-kit/
Current URL: https://alpha.phila.gov/prepare-for-an-emergency/make-a-shelter-in-place-kit/
Current URL: https://alpha.phila.gov/prepare-for-an-emergency/make-a-shelter-in-place-kit/
how do you take something that has the potential to meet a user need and improve it? it helps to think of revision less as a “fix” & more as an act of creation
Community gardens can be created by citizens who have permission from the land bank.
You can create a community garden if you get permission from the land bank.
Next steps on the proposition are being considered by council members.
Council members are considering next steps on the proposition.
State of California plain-language jury instructions
More than fifty percent of jurors defined "preponderance of the evidence" as a "slow and careful pondering of the evidence, according to a study of Washington DC jurors. The same study found that more than 50 percent of jurors could not define "speculate”
(majority of the evidence) (where is the evidence?) (doesn’t differentiate b/w assumptions, opinion, & evidence)
your first impulse isn't always going to be right. and you can follow these rules and still make mistakes.