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The outline of my film:
This story represents a lady who have got a pair of embroidered
shoes is in a tangle by a red dress female phantom. A series of
horrible things happens……
The outline of my opening sequence:
A lady is running in a muddy path in a blue funk. Then the
camera cut back to her memories. A series of toggle screens
between memories and the frames of running in the muddy path.
In the end, the lady sees a lake and she jumps into the water.


Comment:
In my rough cut, I haven’t put the logo in it yet. I just have put a
small number of the titles in the rough cut. And I just have
added sound of footsteps and flash back. I will add heavy
breathing during the lady is running .I also will put the sound of
falling into water at the end of the opening sequence. On the
other hand, background music also need to prove.
Besides the titles and sounds, I change the colour of frames. I
want to make the scenes in low key so that I can emphasize the
horror atmosphere. But I haven’t finished it ,so I will continues
in changing the lighting in my final cut.
Comment on rough cut

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Comment on rough cut

  • 1. Comment on rough cut The outline of my film: This story represents a lady who have got a pair of embroidered shoes is in a tangle by a red dress female phantom. A series of horrible things happens…… The outline of my opening sequence: A lady is running in a muddy path in a blue funk. Then the camera cut back to her memories. A series of toggle screens between memories and the frames of running in the muddy path. In the end, the lady sees a lake and she jumps into the water. Comment: In my rough cut, I haven’t put the logo in it yet. I just have put a small number of the titles in the rough cut. And I just have added sound of footsteps and flash back. I will add heavy breathing during the lady is running .I also will put the sound of falling into water at the end of the opening sequence. On the other hand, background music also need to prove. Besides the titles and sounds, I change the colour of frames. I want to make the scenes in low key so that I can emphasize the horror atmosphere. But I haven’t finished it ,so I will continues in changing the lighting in my final cut.