Sonny provided feedback on a student-created newspaper, saying it looked professional with realistic local stories, but the font was inconsistent. Katie also gave feedback, praising the researched stories but suggesting adding more pictures would make the newspaper easier to read.

1. Audience Feedback

2. Sonny I asked sonny to write a paragraph of what he thought of my work and how I can improve it. “ I think the newspaper looks professional and the stories are what would really be in a local newspaper. The criticism I would give is that the font of the newspaper is not consistent throughout the newspaper”

3. I asked katie to write a paragraph of what she thought of my work and how I can improve it “ I liked the stories in the newspaper and can tell a lot of effort was put into researching what would go in them, I think putting in more pictures of the stories would have made it easier to read though” Katie