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The feedback provider praised several aspects of the newspaper, poster, and website such as the clear layout, professional design, use of images, and relevant advertisements. Some minor issues were noted such as slightly confusing text formatting in the newspaper and the banner image being stretched too much on the website. Overall, the feedback was quite positive and only mentioned a few small areas for potential improvement.
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Amy created a local newspaper called "The Manchester Independent" that drew upon conventions from other newspapers like the Metro and Salford Advertiser. She aimed for a neutral style that balanced images and text like a tabloid while maintaining a formal tone like a broadsheet. Feedback praised the balanced layout and local stories but noted images could be larger. Amy researched newspapers online and used Photoshop for layouts, Premiere for her radio ad, and Excel to analyze market research findings. Overall, her media product successfully emulated real newspaper conventions.
Media Evalution
Amy Walker created a local newspaper called "The Manchester Independent" that drew upon conventions from real newspapers like layout, style, and content. She received overall positive feedback that her newspaper looked professional and was balanced between tabloid and broadsheet styles. However, one reviewer noted the images could have been larger. Amy reflects that she successfully emulated real newspapers while creating her own style and house conventions across her various media pieces.
Professional writing task 10 evaluation
The document provides an evaluation by Ryan Goldsmith of a professional writing project where he created 3 media products: a broadsheet newspaper, tabloid newspaper, and fanzine. Ryan feels he managed his time well on the project, allocating more time to more complex tasks. He is pleased with how the products turned out and feels they effectively targeted different audiences. Ryan also reflects on skills and techniques he has improved, such as layout techniques using InDesign and time management.
7. evaluation(3)
The document provides an evaluation of an FMP project to create a cosplay magazine. Research on existing magazines helped with layout ideas, including linking images and text as well as cover design styles. Planning involved writing content and selecting images for pages. Time management kept the project on schedule. The technical quality drew from professional magazines, and the aesthetic quality was based on a sample cover. The intended audience was UK cosplayers ages 12+. Peer feedback suggested filling white space, adding more event details, and cropping the cover within safe zones. Areas of disagreement included adding extensive writing and website links. [/SUMMARY]
Peer feedback(1) 3
The document contains feedback on three different designs - a broadsheet newspaper layout, a tabloid newspaper layout, and a fanzine layout for a hip hop subculture.
For the broadsheet design, the feedback praised the logo and banner ads but suggested making headlines more eye-catching and changing the Obama photo to allow for more text. For the tabloid, one reviewer liked the catchy headline and red banner but suggested improving the ad clipping and using a larger or fewer-word article. Finally, for the fanzine the feedback highlighted the clear images and fonts, creative collage, and informal text, but noted the design could be improved with more suitable colors.
Evaluation
The document summarizes the evaluation of a music magazine called "Billionaire" that was constructed by the author. Key points include:
- The magazine includes a front page, contents page, and double page spread
- The target readers are 16-24 years old with disposable income and interest in fashion/music
- Photoshop was used to construct the magazine pages, adding images, text, and design elements
- Conventions like mastheads, central images, and pricing were followed to resemble a real magazine
Question one
The document discusses the conventions used in creating a mock magazine. It summarizes how the magazine follows conventions of existing indie magazines in its use of natural, unedited images and layout of the contents page. It also aims to challenge conventions by including a feature on an AIDS charity to raise awareness of real-world issues. The double-page spread layout keeps things simple with the image, headline, article, and page numbers, and uses a striking black-and-white image of the artist to identify them for readers.
7. evaluation unit 5
This document provides an evaluation of an FMP project on magazine production. It summarizes the strengths and weaknesses of the producer's research, planning, time management, and technical qualities. It also discusses the audience appeal and includes feedback from peers. The feedback praised the professional front cover but suggested adding more images. Improvements to the double page spread layout were also noted, such as using outlines instead of solid colors to distinguish articles. The producer agreed some aspects could be improved and would change the double page spread layout and add space to the front cover for a barcode in the future.
Evaluation: Reflection on audience feedback
The document provides feedback on different elements of a music magazine called "UP BEAT".
For the front cover, feedback was positive about the title, use of bold purple color, and graffiti-style text which grabbed attention. However, the price text was noted as too small.
Feedback on the double-page spread liked how the title spanned two pages for dramatic impact and how the article was formatted. However, the pull quote did not stand out well.
For the contents page, feedback was positive about the clear section divisions, images providing insights, and personal editor's note. However, page numbers were missing from images.
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- 4. The feedback I received from Alex was mainly positive when concerning my products. He believed that my layout was good and the use of my side stories was a good convention used within my newspaper. He thought that my beach clean up sample article on the front cover was effective in drawing the readers attention, as the image used worked effectively with the story, showing how dirty the beach is and why it need's cleaning up. For the second page of my newspaper he thought that the articles used were very good and appropriate for the newspaper and that the images once again linked very well with the articles showing exactly what they were about. The only negative comment Alex had to say was the change in the look of the font, I believe this was created as the font size is smaller than the other article so that it could fit on the page appropriately. I do not believe this would be a very big issue for the readers as blown up to a bigger scale they will be able to tell that it is small text and not a change in font.
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