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ASSESSMENT 
FEEDBACK 
AS Media Studies 
TV Drama
Starter 
• Take some time to reflect on the comments and 
annotations I’ve made on your Shameless 
assessments.
CEMS & PEAR 
Your exam answer should be separated into four sections 
(the same sections you focused on during the note taking). 
C – Camera work 
PEAR Paragraphs 
E – Editing 
M – Mise-en-scene 
S – Sound 
P – Point 
E – Evidence 
A – Analysis 
R – Representation: link 
the area of representation 
in the question, e.g. social 
class and status.
General Feedback 
• Link to the question (representation) throughout – explain how the 
features you identify reveal the characters’ class/status. 
E.g. ‘The distortion of the camerawork during the scene with Frank in 
the pub reflects his inebriated state of mind. This is something we 
associate with a lower-class stereotype; someone who claims 
benefits and spends their money drinking and taking drugs.’ 
• Give specific examples when referring to features. 
E.g. ‘Close-ups are used throughout the extract to convey the 
characters’ emotions. An example is when the young girl hits one of 
the men over the head with an object – the shot cuts to a close-up of 
Fiona’s shocked expression, emphasising her worry and concern 
over what will the ‘thug’s’ response will be.’ 
• Not – ‘There are lots of close-ups in the extract.’
General Feedback 
• Points should always be backed up with clear analysis (PEA). 
E.g. The police man is of a higher status than the others; his uniform is 
cleanly pressed and his hair is neat. A police uniform is a symbol of 
status, as we associate the police with power and authority, which the 
character displays in this scene – particularly when he places his hat on 
his head and stands up straight to make himself taller. 
• Showing understanding of the difference between class and status – 
ensure that you explore both in your answer. 
• Class: a system of ordering society whereby people are divided into sets 
based on perceived social or economic status. (The Gallagher family) 
• Status: relative social or professional position; standing. (The police 
man; the bailiffs)
General Feedback 
• Points should always be backed up with clear analysis (PEA). 
E.g. The police man is of a higher status than the others; his uniform is 
cleanly pressed and his hair is neat. A police uniform is a symbol of 
status, as we associate the police with power and authority, which the 
character displays in this scene – particularly when he places his hat on 
his head and stands up straight to make himself taller. 
• Showing understanding of the difference between class and status – 
ensure that you explore both in your answer. 
• Class: a system of ordering society whereby people are divided into sets 
based on perceived social or economic status. (The Gallagher family) 
• Status: relative social or professional position; standing. (The police 
man; the bailiffs)

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Assessment Feedback

  • 1. ASSESSMENT FEEDBACK AS Media Studies TV Drama
  • 2. Starter • Take some time to reflect on the comments and annotations I’ve made on your Shameless assessments.
  • 3. CEMS & PEAR Your exam answer should be separated into four sections (the same sections you focused on during the note taking). C – Camera work PEAR Paragraphs E – Editing M – Mise-en-scene S – Sound P – Point E – Evidence A – Analysis R – Representation: link the area of representation in the question, e.g. social class and status.
  • 4. General Feedback • Link to the question (representation) throughout – explain how the features you identify reveal the characters’ class/status. E.g. ‘The distortion of the camerawork during the scene with Frank in the pub reflects his inebriated state of mind. This is something we associate with a lower-class stereotype; someone who claims benefits and spends their money drinking and taking drugs.’ • Give specific examples when referring to features. E.g. ‘Close-ups are used throughout the extract to convey the characters’ emotions. An example is when the young girl hits one of the men over the head with an object – the shot cuts to a close-up of Fiona’s shocked expression, emphasising her worry and concern over what will the ‘thug’s’ response will be.’ • Not – ‘There are lots of close-ups in the extract.’
  • 5. General Feedback • Points should always be backed up with clear analysis (PEA). E.g. The police man is of a higher status than the others; his uniform is cleanly pressed and his hair is neat. A police uniform is a symbol of status, as we associate the police with power and authority, which the character displays in this scene – particularly when he places his hat on his head and stands up straight to make himself taller. • Showing understanding of the difference between class and status – ensure that you explore both in your answer. • Class: a system of ordering society whereby people are divided into sets based on perceived social or economic status. (The Gallagher family) • Status: relative social or professional position; standing. (The police man; the bailiffs)
  • 6. General Feedback • Points should always be backed up with clear analysis (PEA). E.g. The police man is of a higher status than the others; his uniform is cleanly pressed and his hair is neat. A police uniform is a symbol of status, as we associate the police with power and authority, which the character displays in this scene – particularly when he places his hat on his head and stands up straight to make himself taller. • Showing understanding of the difference between class and status – ensure that you explore both in your answer. • Class: a system of ordering society whereby people are divided into sets based on perceived social or economic status. (The Gallagher family) • Status: relative social or professional position; standing. (The police man; the bailiffs)