A Critique of the Proposed National Education Policy Reform
AS Media Front cover feedback
1. This is the feedback I got from my target
market on my front cover edit so far. I asked
my target audience to comment on what they
would improve, to also contribute to the
further editing of my front cover.
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3. Uchenna Onyeji:
I feel as though I can’t see the masthead so I would add
some colour by making it yellow like the line at the bottom
of the magazine. I would also remove the text from above
her forehead and change the colour of the BBC line up text
to yellow too. Apart from that I like the simplicity of your
layout.
