1. Sanel and Kaya
Opening Sequence H
Draft 3 (Thriller)
• Laura walks into her room and puts 2 dolls into closet
• She calls someone and starts hearing noises from the closet and
opens it to nothing inside as something runs behind her
• She runs to the sofa and hides under blanket when closet doors
open in a sudden
• She sees the dolls hanging inside and takes them down
• She gets trapped inside the closet and lights a lighter to 2 girls
behind her
2. Sanel
How we have improved from our last
H
opening sequence to our new one
• We have improved our opening sequence by actually building
up tension towards the end and creating a thriller and scary
vibe for the audience to make sure they have some kind of
reaction and to get them off the edge of their seats.
• We fully researched and revised about spirits and how to thrill
people so we improved our understanding and knowledge
making sure we make an effective opening sequence.
3. Sanel
H
How are we contributing?
• We are all contributing by meeting up every
Thursday and Friday to discuss our ideas and
making sure our idea’s match up and make sense
to us and to our target audience so everything
won’t be confusing.
4. Kaya
Whole Film H
Draft 4 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 girl maids
• Her life is disturbed by these two maids who threaten her
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in
her room and the film goes into the past
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our
but they are still there
5. Kaya
Opening Sequence H
Draft 4 (Thriller)
• Laura walk home from purchasing a ghost book
• She sets up table for possession
• She hears noises and goes through paranormal phenomena
throughout
• They push her into the closet
• Screen goes black to sudden when the ghost are behind her
6. Kaya
Whole Film H
Draft 5 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 girl maids
• Her life is disturbed by these two maids who threaten her
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in
her room and the film goes into the past
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our
but they are still there
7. Kaya
Whole Film H
Draft 5 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 girl maids
• Her life is disturbed by these two maids who threaten her
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in
her room and the film goes into the past
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our
but they are still there
15. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
0-3ec Laura outside walking down • Establishing shot Laura walking down • Black cardigan
the stairs (1) the steps • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
4-7sec Laura still walking down the • Long shot Laura walking half • Black cardigan
stairs half way (2) way down the steps • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
8-10sec Laura finished walking down • Full-body shot Laura walking on the • Black cardigan
the stairs and now walking on pavement • Red skirt
the pavement (3) • White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
11-13sec Laura walking (4) • Establishing shot Laura walking on the • Black cardigan
pavement • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
14-15sec Just see Laura’s feet (5) • Close-up shot A close-up shot of • Black cardigan
laura feet . • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
16. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
16-18sec You just see Laura walking • Full body shot Laura walking . • Black cardigan
from her side (6) • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
19-21sec Laura walks to the door (7) • Full body shot Laura is walking to • Black cardigan
her house • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
22 Laura enters the house (10) •¾ body shot Laura comes in • Black cardigan
from the other side • Red skirt
of the door • White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
23-25 Laura starts walking to her •Mid shot She starts walking • Black cardigan
bedroom (11) up the stairs • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
26 You just see her hands (12) Close-up shot She opens her • Black cardigan
bedroom door • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
17. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
27-28 She walks into her •A full body shot She enters into • Black cardigan
bedroom (13) her bedroom • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
29 She walks to her shelf •Mid shot She goes and • Black cardigan
(16) grabs a box • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
30 She grabs the box (17) •Mid shot she holds the • Black cardigan
box in her hand • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
31-32 She walks to table (18) •Full body shot See her takes • Black cardigan
things out of the • Red skirt
box • White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
18. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
33-36 She then starts to pray •Mid shot She prays and • Black cardigan
(21) something • Red skirt
• White top
happens to her
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
37-38 You just see her eyes •Extreme close up You see her eyes • Black cardigan
(22) going weird • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
39-45 She begins to write •Close up shot Something inside • Black cardigan
something (23) her grabs the • Red skirt
• White top
pen and write
• Pen/candles/paper/
something on book/matches
paper
46-48 Laura is scared (24) •Full body shot After she see’s • Black cardigan
what was on the • Red skirt
• White top
paper she gets
• Pen/candles/paper/
scared book/matches
49 She stares at •Establish shot She stares at the • Black cardigan
something (25) cupboard • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
19. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
50-51 The candle lights blow • Extreme close up Candles light • Black cardigan
out (26) goes out. • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
52-53 She gets scared (27) • Close-up shot She gets scared • Black cardigan
when the • Red skirt
• White top
candle blows
• Pen/candles/paper
out itself /book/matches
54-55 The candle lights blows • Extreme close-up Candle light • Black cardigan
out. (28) goes out • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
56 She gets scared (29) • Close-up shot She gets scared • Black cardigan
when the • Red skirt
• White top
candle blows
• Pen/candles/paper/
out itself book/matches
57 The candle lights blows • Extreme close-up Candle light • Black cardigan
out. (30) goes out • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
20. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
58 She gets scared (31) • Close-up shot She gets scared • Black cardigan
when the • Red skirt
• White top
candle blows
• Pen/candles/paper/
out itself book/matches
59 The candle lights blow • Extreme close up Candles light • Black cardigan
out (32) goes out. • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
60-64 She walks to the closet • Full body shot She walks to the • Black cardigan
(34) cupboard slowly • Red skirt
• White top
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
65 Then she reaches to the • ¾ shot She stands in • Black cardigan
cupboard (35) front of the • Red skirt
• White top
cupboard
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
66 You only see her hands • Close-up shot She places her • Black cardigan
(36) hands to the • Red skirt
• White top
closet handles.
• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
