1. Sanel and Kaya
Whole Film H
Draft 3 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 maids
• Her life is disturbed by the threatening maids who don’t want her
to be there
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in
her room and we go back into the past to see why they were
murdered
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our
but they are still there
2. Sanel and Kaya
Opening Sequence H
Draft 3 (Thriller)
• Laura calls friend about dolls that keep returning
• She hears noises and goes to check out whats going on
• Ghosts run behind her as she runs
• She walks into closet and they shut the door
• They’re behind her in the closet
3. Sanel
How we have improved from our last
H
opening sequence to our new one
• We have improved our opening sequence by actually building
up tension towards the end and creating a thriller and scary
vibe for the audience to make sure they have some kind of
reaction and to get them off the edge of their seats.
• We fully researched and revised about spirits and how to thrill
people so we improved our understanding and knowledge
making sure we make an effective opening sequence.
4. Sanel
H
How are we contributing?
• We are all contributing by meeting up every
Thursday and Friday to discuss our ideas and
making sure our idea’s match up and make sense
to us and to our target audience so everything
won’t be confusing.
5. Kaya
Whole Film H
Draft 4 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 maids
• Her life is disturbed by these two girls and two dolls that don’t go
away
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in
her room
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our
but they are still there
6. Kaya
Opening Sequence H
Draft 3 (Thriller)
• Laura goes home from shopping where she bought a ghost book
• As she reads the book she finds a note while hearing whispers from
the closet
• She goes to check the closet and finds nothing to see 2 ghosts in
the reflection of her mirror
• She runs and they scream in her face and run into the closet
• She goes to check the closet and the ghost drops a note when she
picks it up to be locked inside with them
15. Shot list Final Draft Sanel
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
(secs)
1-5 She walks down the • Establishg shot She walks down • Orange top
steps (1) the steps • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
• Coat
• Bag
6-10 Still walking down the • Full body shot She walks down • Orange top
steps (2) the steps • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
• Coat
• Bag
11-13 You just see a bag (3) • Close-up shot A close up shot • Orange top
is shown to the • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
bag
• Coat
• Bag
14-18 see her walking down • Establishing She is walking • Orange top
the steps (4) shot down the steps • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
• Coat
• Bag
19-24 She is now walking • Full body shot She carries on • Orange top
along the pavement (5) walking • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
• Coat
• Bag
16. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
25-27 You just see the bag (6) • Close-up shot of A close-up shot • Orange top
the bag of the bag is • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
shown again
• Coat
• Bag
28-33 She reaches to the • Full body shot She opens the • Orange top
house door (9) door • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
• Coat
• Bag
34-37 You see the bag (10) • Close-up shot A close-up shot • Orange top
of the bag is • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
being shown
• Coat
• Bag
38-39 You just see her hands • Close-up shot She opening her • Orange top
(11) bedroom door • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
• Coat
• Bag
40-45 She opens the door (12) • Mid shot See her entering • Orange top
into the • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
bedroom
• Coat
• Bag
17. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
46-48 You just see the bag • Close-up shot Close-up shot • Orange top
(13) of the bag • black skirt
being shown • Hoop earrings
• Bag
49-50 She lights up candles • Close-up shot She lights up • Orange top
(14) the candles • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
51-57 She starts to pray • Mid shot She begins to • Orange top
(15) pray • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
58-61 You just see her • Close-up shot Close-up shot • Orange top
hands (16) of her hands • black skirt
touching the • Hoop earrings
rosemary
62-69 She get possessed • Mid shot She then gets • Orange top
(17) possessed • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
18. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
46-48 You just see the bag • Close-up shot Close-up shot • Orange top
(13) of the bag • black skirt
being shown • Hoop earrings
• Bag
49-50 She lights up candles • Close-up shot She lights up • Orange top
(14) the candles • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
51-57 She starts to pray • Mid shot She begins to • Orange top
(15) pray • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
58-61 You just see her • Close-up shot Close-up shot • Orange top
hands (16) of her hands • black skirt
touching the • Hoop earrings
rosemary
62-69 She get possessed • Mid shot She then gets • Orange top
(17) possessed • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
19. Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
90-93 She starts to hear • Mid shot She looks • Orange top
something (23) around as • black skirt
she can hear • Hoop earrings
some
whispering
94-96 You see what was • Close up shot You see that • Orange top
written on the paper the paper • black skirt
(24) says ‘the • Hoop earrings
closet’
97-99 She stares at • Close-up shot She is staring • Orange top
something (25) at the • black skirt
cupboard • Hoop earrings
100-103 You see the • Reverse shot You see she • Orange top
cupboard(26) is staring at • black skirt
the cupboard • Hoop earrings
104-107 She walks the • Mid shot She walks to • Orange top
cupboard (27) the cupboard • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
20. Shot list Final Draft Sanel
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
108-110 She still walks to the • Full body shot She is at the • Orange top
cupboard (28) cupboard • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
111-113 You see her face • Close-up shot She is really • Orange top
reaction (29) scared • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
114-117 You just see her hands • Close up shot Her hands our • Orange top
(31) touching the • black skirt
cupboard • Hoop earrings
handles
118-120 You see her face • Close-up shot She is scared • Orange top
reaction (32) • black skirt
• Hoop earrings
121-125 She looks around in the • Point of view She is looking • Orange top
cupboard (33) inside the • black skirt
cupboard • Hoop earrings
126-129 She leave the cupboard • Full body shot She the is • Orange top
open (34) relieved and • black skirt
closes the • Hoop earrings
cupboard
