Analysing Previous Students Work 
By Hafsah Zaman 12.6
The Edge 
GENRE - ACTION
Strengths 
 The editing of the opening of their film presented juxtaposition to establish that the 
main character was being chased by two men. 
 The positioning of the main characters head and where he is looking also helped 
the audience the establish who he was being chased by as the men then walk in 
the opposite direction to which the boy is looking. 
 The non-diegetic music creates tension as it builds up gradually and it also 
changes half way through to suit the scene which is being shown. 
 There are loads of longer shots on the main character throughout – this creates 
tension as if the audience are waiting for something to happen. 
 The lighting is quite dull and dark throughout this is to create an atmosphere for 
the movie and it may also create tension too. 
 The use of fading is used when the scene fades to black and then lights back up 
again – this is something done during the editing process to make it seem more 
effective.
Weaknesses 
 The use of lighting was dark and it may have been dark for a reason but 
it sometimes made it hard to establish what is actually on the screen. It 
also made it look a bit black and white. 
 The acting of the characters was a bit weak in places but the fact that 
there was no dialogue is a way around it 
 The font of the title was not clear enough and a bit confusing as it 
looked a bit illusionistic. 
 The film was slightly out of focus in parts but it was in focus for the 
majority of the film.
Angel 
Dust 
GENRE - THRILLER
Strengths 
 Good use of editing 12

Analysing previous students work

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    Analysing Previous StudentsWork By Hafsah Zaman 12.6
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    Strengths  Theediting of the opening of their film presented juxtaposition to establish that the main character was being chased by two men.  The positioning of the main characters head and where he is looking also helped the audience the establish who he was being chased by as the men then walk in the opposite direction to which the boy is looking.  The non-diegetic music creates tension as it builds up gradually and it also changes half way through to suit the scene which is being shown.  There are loads of longer shots on the main character throughout – this creates tension as if the audience are waiting for something to happen.  The lighting is quite dull and dark throughout this is to create an atmosphere for the movie and it may also create tension too.  The use of fading is used when the scene fades to black and then lights back up again – this is something done during the editing process to make it seem more effective.
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    Weaknesses  Theuse of lighting was dark and it may have been dark for a reason but it sometimes made it hard to establish what is actually on the screen. It also made it look a bit black and white.  The acting of the characters was a bit weak in places but the fact that there was no dialogue is a way around it  The font of the title was not clear enough and a bit confusing as it looked a bit illusionistic.  The film was slightly out of focus in parts but it was in focus for the majority of the film.
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    Angel Dust GENRE- THRILLER
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    Strengths  Gooduse of editing 12