The document provides examples of concise writing by eliminating wordiness and deadwood from sentences. It discusses avoiding vague nouns, unnecessary adverbs, and redundant phrases like "which" or "that." Examples are given of wordy versus concise revisions of sentences. Common expressions to watch out for that may be considered deadwood are listed. The document also gives tips for punctuation, checking paper details, and following writing guidelines.
The document provides examples and guidelines for concise writing, including eliminating wordiness and deadwood. It discusses removing unnecessary phrases and filler words. Specific examples are given of wordy versus concise sentences. Common expressions that are considered deadwood are listed, as well as vague nouns and adverbs to eliminate. Guidelines are provided for punctuation and using commas and semicolons. Finally, it discusses checking details in a paper such as formatting, spelling of names, and ensuring titles are formatted correctly.
The document provides an agenda that includes discussing an essay, a writing assignment, and topics related to wordiness, unnecessary words, and punctuation. It discusses concise writing and eliminating filler words and phrases. It provides writing tips and formatting guidelines for citing various sources like books, articles, films and more. The document serves as a guide for students on improving writing skills and properly citing sources in assignments.
The document provides an agenda for a meeting that includes:
1. Discussing essay #2 and the QHQ SBB (Stone Butch Blues).
2. Having an in-class writing on SBB.
3. Covering topics like wordiness, unnecessary words, and punctuation in documents.
The document provides examples of concise writing by eliminating wordiness and deadwood from sentences. It discusses removing unnecessary phrases, vague nouns, and weak adverbs. Specific editing tips are offered, such as changing word order to move the subject and verb closer together. Redundant expressions like "there is" and "it is" should be removed from sentence starters. The document also covers punctuation best practices for using commas and semicolons correctly.
The document contains an agenda for a class that includes discussing an essay, in-class writing, and topics on wordiness, deadwood, and punctuation in writing. It provides examples of wordy versus concise sentences and lists vague words and phrases to avoid. It discusses checking writing for details like page length, font, and title. Tips are given on writing about literature, revising sentences, and constructing a works cited page. An in-class writing on the topics discussed is also included on the agenda.
The document provides an agenda for a class that includes discussing an essay, the topics QHQ and SBB, and an in-class writing on SBB. It then discusses concepts like wordiness, deadwood, and punctuation. It provides writing tips and guidelines for checking paper details and the works cited page in MLA format. During the class, quotes from the novel Stone Butch Blues are discussed and analyzed in 3 sentences or less. The quotes illustrate themes of dealing with one's identity, societal pressures, injustice, and abuse.
This document provides an agenda and notes for a Class 12 discussion. The agenda includes revising an essay, discussing questions from previous lessons, an in-class writing assignment, and reviewing student work. The notes cover topics like eliminating wordiness, concise writing, punctuation, checking paper details, and works cited pages. Key points emphasized include omitting unnecessary words, replacing vague terms, and properly citing sources in MLA format.
The Sparrow Writers Writing Group is a monthly writing group that meets in Watertown, WI to promote creativity and build community among aspiring authors. Each meeting begins with a "three words" writing prompt where members incorporate unfamiliar words into a short story. The consistency of this activity helps the group focus. The group uses additional prompts to get ideas flowing and support each other's writing. Bringing together people of various ages and backgrounds, the Sparrow Writers aim to provide encouragement and friendship for those seeking an outlet for their creative talents.
The document provides examples and guidelines for concise writing, including eliminating wordiness and deadwood. It discusses removing unnecessary phrases and filler words. Specific examples are given of wordy versus concise sentences. Common expressions that are considered deadwood are listed, as well as vague nouns and adverbs to eliminate. Guidelines are provided for punctuation and using commas and semicolons. Finally, it discusses checking details in a paper such as formatting, spelling of names, and ensuring titles are formatted correctly.
The document provides an agenda that includes discussing an essay, a writing assignment, and topics related to wordiness, unnecessary words, and punctuation. It discusses concise writing and eliminating filler words and phrases. It provides writing tips and formatting guidelines for citing various sources like books, articles, films and more. The document serves as a guide for students on improving writing skills and properly citing sources in assignments.
The document provides an agenda for a meeting that includes:
1. Discussing essay #2 and the QHQ SBB (Stone Butch Blues).
2. Having an in-class writing on SBB.
3. Covering topics like wordiness, unnecessary words, and punctuation in documents.
The document provides examples of concise writing by eliminating wordiness and deadwood from sentences. It discusses removing unnecessary phrases, vague nouns, and weak adverbs. Specific editing tips are offered, such as changing word order to move the subject and verb closer together. Redundant expressions like "there is" and "it is" should be removed from sentence starters. The document also covers punctuation best practices for using commas and semicolons correctly.
The document contains an agenda for a class that includes discussing an essay, in-class writing, and topics on wordiness, deadwood, and punctuation in writing. It provides examples of wordy versus concise sentences and lists vague words and phrases to avoid. It discusses checking writing for details like page length, font, and title. Tips are given on writing about literature, revising sentences, and constructing a works cited page. An in-class writing on the topics discussed is also included on the agenda.
The document provides an agenda for a class that includes discussing an essay, the topics QHQ and SBB, and an in-class writing on SBB. It then discusses concepts like wordiness, deadwood, and punctuation. It provides writing tips and guidelines for checking paper details and the works cited page in MLA format. During the class, quotes from the novel Stone Butch Blues are discussed and analyzed in 3 sentences or less. The quotes illustrate themes of dealing with one's identity, societal pressures, injustice, and abuse.
This document provides an agenda and notes for a Class 12 discussion. The agenda includes revising an essay, discussing questions from previous lessons, an in-class writing assignment, and reviewing student work. The notes cover topics like eliminating wordiness, concise writing, punctuation, checking paper details, and works cited pages. Key points emphasized include omitting unnecessary words, replacing vague terms, and properly citing sources in MLA format.
The Sparrow Writers Writing Group is a monthly writing group that meets in Watertown, WI to promote creativity and build community among aspiring authors. Each meeting begins with a "three words" writing prompt where members incorporate unfamiliar words into a short story. The consistency of this activity helps the group focus. The group uses additional prompts to get ideas flowing and support each other's writing. Bringing together people of various ages and backgrounds, the Sparrow Writers aim to provide encouragement and friendship for those seeking an outlet for their creative talents.
The document appears to be a collection of informal notes and commentary from a literature class. It includes snippets of conversation between students, observations about assigned readings, and brief discussions of literary concepts and theories. Several topics are mentioned, such as postmodernism, critical theory, the American Dream, and interpretations of specific texts like The Road and Death of a Salesman. Students debate different analytical approaches and potential essay prompts.
This portfolio documents the student's growth in understanding literacy over the course of a semester. They learned that literacy involves reading more than just words - one can read different elements of the world. Through assignments analyzing everyday activities and media like advertisements, the student gained a broader view of literacy and how to think critically about the social implications of texts. Their idea of literacy expanded from basic reading and writing to encompass the many ways people communicate and interact through language.
The document provides information about artistic expressions and graffiti art. It includes 8 pictures of different art forms like graffiti, sculptures, and murals. It then discusses graffiti artist Banksy, noting that his work was featured in an exhibition at Bristol City Museum, unlike the classical statues and stuffed animals normally found there. Banksy is described as a mysterious figure who rarely gives interviews and likes to remain anonymous, with people speculating about his true identity. The text serves to introduce various art forms, with a focus on graffiti art and the famous artist Banksy.
The document provides testimonials from various people praising Linda Bergman's writing skills and teaching abilities. Many highlight how her classes helped them improve their own writing and storytelling. Others note her passion for sharing her love of the craft. Overall, the testimonials portray Linda Bergman as an insightful, knowledgeable, and supportive writing teacher and guide.
Presenter: Laura Tartak
Presented at the Georgia Libraries Conference in Columbus, GA on 10/03/2018.
This presentation discusses the most popular titles and authors
mentioned in Georgia Library Quarterly’s “My Own Private Library” columns.
Massachusetts Teen Summit 2013: Fandom and YA LiteratureRobin Brenner
This document provides an overview of young adult (YA) literature fandoms and fanworks. It discusses how fanfiction allows fans to engage creatively with stories they love. While some debate the legality of derivative fanworks, many see fanfiction as transformative and a form of appreciation and analysis. The document examines different types of fanworks including fanfiction, fanart, videos and meta. It explores conventions in fandom communities and why teens find meaning and joy through participating in fandoms.
YES. . .They WILL Read for Indiana Reading Association Fall 2013Paul Hankins
This document provides an overview of strategies and resources used in an English classroom to promote reading. It discusses creating text sets that weave together different types of texts on a central topic or question. Examples provided include pairing novels, poems, videos and other materials to explore concepts like goodness. The classroom utilizes book discussions, advanced reader copies and a diverse classroom library. Student comments indicate the approach has increased reading enjoyment and amounts. Professional development resources are also mentioned.
my name is Delly ELim , Indonesian originally and i love chocolate haha . I made this myself to gain the score of my thesis or proposal during my 7th grade to STIBA Saraswati Denpasar in November 2014. what a pity slide but that's all i could do, i tried my best to analize the phenomenon of my favorite novel UGLY by Constance Briscoe. why did Constance Briscoe or Clare, her nickname would dedicate this novel to her teacher Miss K which wriiten only for one short chapter of 25 chapters, chapter 17 for 12 pages? the whole story is about how she was abused by her mom.. but then why she came with the idea of one chapter direct interaction with miss Korchinskye for a short story and miss k deserved the dedication to this novel. ' aim high ' Miss K.
The document provides tips for improving fiction writing skills. It recommends taking writing classes, reading books on writing techniques, writing regularly, getting feedback from critique groups, identifying common writing weaknesses, and allowing time between drafting and revising. The goal is to develop skills through practice, feedback, and dedication to continuous learning over many years of writing.
- An analogy compares two concepts to explain an unfamiliar idea by drawing parallels between them. It can be used as a type of argument or figure of speech like a simile or metaphor.
- Jodi Picoult uses the analogy of a burning building to represent the threat of death, with the mother willing to risk her own life to save her child, just as the character sends her child into danger to save another.
- John Green compares being trapped in life's decisions to being lost in a labyrinth, with people imagining escaping it through an idealized future, just as the character feels trapped in her present circumstances.
The article discusses graffiti in Philadelphia from multiple perspectives. It notes that graffiti is popular in Philly but seen as vandalism by some. The city spends millions cleaning it annually. The article interviews a local graffiti artist, who notes he started tagging to showcase his art and gain recognition. He learns from other artists but considers risks and consequences, though is not concerned about being caught. The city could spend less cleaning if providing legal spaces for graffiti.
The document summarizes information about the book "Finally...Us" edited by Miriam Alves. It provides background on Alves as a prominent Afro-Brazilian female poet. The book is a compilation of literary works by contemporary Black Brazilian women written during a time of political and social changes in Brazil alongside the rise of feminist consciousness. It aimed to show that Black women have their own voices and experiences that distinguish them from oppression they faced due to both their race and gender. The document also analyzes and summarizes two poems included in the book which reflect on themes of overcoming shame of one's identity and the divisions created by apartheid.
This document provides information and guidance for writers on getting published. It discusses creating content for publications, building relationships with editors, avoiding rejection, and getting paid for writing. It emphasizes starting small by writing for free or low-paying publications first to build a portfolio. Specific tips include writing about your passions, following editorial guidelines, submitting concise pitches by email, and offering supplementary materials like photos. The document also provides examples of effective and ineffective pitch letters with annotations. Overall, the document provides a strategic approach for writers to get their work published and establish themselves as professionals.
This document provides an overview of LGBTQ fiction as a genre. It defines LGBTQ fiction as novels that explore the lives and experiences of LGBTQ individuals from their point of view. It discusses the history and classic authors of the genre, breaks the genre into subcategories like literary fiction, genre fiction, and young adult, and provides examples of popular authors and titles in each category. Resources for learning more about LGBTQ fiction and awards are also listed.
Ethics in Memoir Writing: An Instructional DialogueMelanie Rigney
Ask yourself, why you're writing a memoir and what makes my experience special to me - and my readers? Just like novels, memoirs must have a beginning, middle, and end. Learn how to make your memoir memorable.
This document outlines a 3-step project for American students at the Lycée International Nelson Mandela in Nantes, France to interview author Eric Price after reading an excerpt from his book. The steps include: 1) Preparing interview questions by analyzing the excerpt, 2) Conducting a Skype interview and discussion with Eric Price, 3) Writing a summary of the interview. The document provides background on Eric Price and his book "Unveiling the Wizard's Shroud" to help students analyze the excerpt and develop thoughtful questions to ask during the scheduled Skype interview.
This document is a special issue of The Clocktower, the Union College student newspaper. It contains articles from students about what they love about Union College, including the atmosphere, academics, relationships, community and spirituality. The issue was put together by editor Emily Syvertson and her staff. It includes articles on topics like the bond formed between students, appreciating the city of Lincoln, and finding purpose beyond oneself at Union. The editor's note expresses a goal to share reasons why students love their time at Union College.
The document summarizes and analyzes the children's book "The Seven Chinese Brothers" by Margaret Mahy. It discusses how the book resonated with the author as a child due to similarities with her own family and cultural background. The book filled important developmental needs for the author when she was young by sparking her imagination and teaching teamwork. The analysis praises the book's illustrations for authentically portraying Chinese culture and enhancing the story, though notes some pages have too much text. It concludes the book remains a timeless story that teaches valuable lessons about expressing emotions, problem-solving as a team, and overcoming adversity.
The document outlines an agenda for a class that includes discussing works about passing and identity, giving definitions for key terms, and having students write an in-class essay arguing either for or against the statement that passing for white provides advantages and only idiots would fail to do so. Students will analyze stories and poems about passing to understand issues of race, identity, and oppression.
1) The document is an excerpt from a chapter about the author burying his father and the three father figures he had in his life. The first was his biological father ("Daddy") who was a charismatic former basketball player and always encouraged critical thinking. The second was how others saw his father ("Mr. Sam") - a respected professor beloved by students and colleagues. The third is the lasting influence his father had, shown through how he mentored the author and his friends even after his death.
This document provides an agenda and information for Class 20 of an EWRT 2 course. It outlines that students will make up a missed vocabulary exam, do an in-class self-assessment writing, and draft Essay #5. It also discusses the end of quarter plan, including deadlines for assignments and a final exam discussion involving a Game of Thrones episode. Students are instructed on writing a thesis and outline for Essay #5.
The document provides an agenda for an English class. It outlines that the class will include a discussion of portfolios, allowing students to make up or retake a test, and working in groups on drama projects. It also lists the due dates for the drama projects and portfolios. The portfolio requirements are described, allowing students to submit stories and poems. Information is also provided about submitting work to the Red Wheelbarrow literary magazine.
The document appears to be a collection of informal notes and commentary from a literature class. It includes snippets of conversation between students, observations about assigned readings, and brief discussions of literary concepts and theories. Several topics are mentioned, such as postmodernism, critical theory, the American Dream, and interpretations of specific texts like The Road and Death of a Salesman. Students debate different analytical approaches and potential essay prompts.
This portfolio documents the student's growth in understanding literacy over the course of a semester. They learned that literacy involves reading more than just words - one can read different elements of the world. Through assignments analyzing everyday activities and media like advertisements, the student gained a broader view of literacy and how to think critically about the social implications of texts. Their idea of literacy expanded from basic reading and writing to encompass the many ways people communicate and interact through language.
The document provides information about artistic expressions and graffiti art. It includes 8 pictures of different art forms like graffiti, sculptures, and murals. It then discusses graffiti artist Banksy, noting that his work was featured in an exhibition at Bristol City Museum, unlike the classical statues and stuffed animals normally found there. Banksy is described as a mysterious figure who rarely gives interviews and likes to remain anonymous, with people speculating about his true identity. The text serves to introduce various art forms, with a focus on graffiti art and the famous artist Banksy.
The document provides testimonials from various people praising Linda Bergman's writing skills and teaching abilities. Many highlight how her classes helped them improve their own writing and storytelling. Others note her passion for sharing her love of the craft. Overall, the testimonials portray Linda Bergman as an insightful, knowledgeable, and supportive writing teacher and guide.
Presenter: Laura Tartak
Presented at the Georgia Libraries Conference in Columbus, GA on 10/03/2018.
This presentation discusses the most popular titles and authors
mentioned in Georgia Library Quarterly’s “My Own Private Library” columns.
Massachusetts Teen Summit 2013: Fandom and YA LiteratureRobin Brenner
This document provides an overview of young adult (YA) literature fandoms and fanworks. It discusses how fanfiction allows fans to engage creatively with stories they love. While some debate the legality of derivative fanworks, many see fanfiction as transformative and a form of appreciation and analysis. The document examines different types of fanworks including fanfiction, fanart, videos and meta. It explores conventions in fandom communities and why teens find meaning and joy through participating in fandoms.
YES. . .They WILL Read for Indiana Reading Association Fall 2013Paul Hankins
This document provides an overview of strategies and resources used in an English classroom to promote reading. It discusses creating text sets that weave together different types of texts on a central topic or question. Examples provided include pairing novels, poems, videos and other materials to explore concepts like goodness. The classroom utilizes book discussions, advanced reader copies and a diverse classroom library. Student comments indicate the approach has increased reading enjoyment and amounts. Professional development resources are also mentioned.
my name is Delly ELim , Indonesian originally and i love chocolate haha . I made this myself to gain the score of my thesis or proposal during my 7th grade to STIBA Saraswati Denpasar in November 2014. what a pity slide but that's all i could do, i tried my best to analize the phenomenon of my favorite novel UGLY by Constance Briscoe. why did Constance Briscoe or Clare, her nickname would dedicate this novel to her teacher Miss K which wriiten only for one short chapter of 25 chapters, chapter 17 for 12 pages? the whole story is about how she was abused by her mom.. but then why she came with the idea of one chapter direct interaction with miss Korchinskye for a short story and miss k deserved the dedication to this novel. ' aim high ' Miss K.
The document provides tips for improving fiction writing skills. It recommends taking writing classes, reading books on writing techniques, writing regularly, getting feedback from critique groups, identifying common writing weaknesses, and allowing time between drafting and revising. The goal is to develop skills through practice, feedback, and dedication to continuous learning over many years of writing.
- An analogy compares two concepts to explain an unfamiliar idea by drawing parallels between them. It can be used as a type of argument or figure of speech like a simile or metaphor.
- Jodi Picoult uses the analogy of a burning building to represent the threat of death, with the mother willing to risk her own life to save her child, just as the character sends her child into danger to save another.
- John Green compares being trapped in life's decisions to being lost in a labyrinth, with people imagining escaping it through an idealized future, just as the character feels trapped in her present circumstances.
The article discusses graffiti in Philadelphia from multiple perspectives. It notes that graffiti is popular in Philly but seen as vandalism by some. The city spends millions cleaning it annually. The article interviews a local graffiti artist, who notes he started tagging to showcase his art and gain recognition. He learns from other artists but considers risks and consequences, though is not concerned about being caught. The city could spend less cleaning if providing legal spaces for graffiti.
The document summarizes information about the book "Finally...Us" edited by Miriam Alves. It provides background on Alves as a prominent Afro-Brazilian female poet. The book is a compilation of literary works by contemporary Black Brazilian women written during a time of political and social changes in Brazil alongside the rise of feminist consciousness. It aimed to show that Black women have their own voices and experiences that distinguish them from oppression they faced due to both their race and gender. The document also analyzes and summarizes two poems included in the book which reflect on themes of overcoming shame of one's identity and the divisions created by apartheid.
This document provides information and guidance for writers on getting published. It discusses creating content for publications, building relationships with editors, avoiding rejection, and getting paid for writing. It emphasizes starting small by writing for free or low-paying publications first to build a portfolio. Specific tips include writing about your passions, following editorial guidelines, submitting concise pitches by email, and offering supplementary materials like photos. The document also provides examples of effective and ineffective pitch letters with annotations. Overall, the document provides a strategic approach for writers to get their work published and establish themselves as professionals.
This document provides an overview of LGBTQ fiction as a genre. It defines LGBTQ fiction as novels that explore the lives and experiences of LGBTQ individuals from their point of view. It discusses the history and classic authors of the genre, breaks the genre into subcategories like literary fiction, genre fiction, and young adult, and provides examples of popular authors and titles in each category. Resources for learning more about LGBTQ fiction and awards are also listed.
Ethics in Memoir Writing: An Instructional DialogueMelanie Rigney
Ask yourself, why you're writing a memoir and what makes my experience special to me - and my readers? Just like novels, memoirs must have a beginning, middle, and end. Learn how to make your memoir memorable.
This document outlines a 3-step project for American students at the Lycée International Nelson Mandela in Nantes, France to interview author Eric Price after reading an excerpt from his book. The steps include: 1) Preparing interview questions by analyzing the excerpt, 2) Conducting a Skype interview and discussion with Eric Price, 3) Writing a summary of the interview. The document provides background on Eric Price and his book "Unveiling the Wizard's Shroud" to help students analyze the excerpt and develop thoughtful questions to ask during the scheduled Skype interview.
This document is a special issue of The Clocktower, the Union College student newspaper. It contains articles from students about what they love about Union College, including the atmosphere, academics, relationships, community and spirituality. The issue was put together by editor Emily Syvertson and her staff. It includes articles on topics like the bond formed between students, appreciating the city of Lincoln, and finding purpose beyond oneself at Union. The editor's note expresses a goal to share reasons why students love their time at Union College.
The document summarizes and analyzes the children's book "The Seven Chinese Brothers" by Margaret Mahy. It discusses how the book resonated with the author as a child due to similarities with her own family and cultural background. The book filled important developmental needs for the author when she was young by sparking her imagination and teaching teamwork. The analysis praises the book's illustrations for authentically portraying Chinese culture and enhancing the story, though notes some pages have too much text. It concludes the book remains a timeless story that teaches valuable lessons about expressing emotions, problem-solving as a team, and overcoming adversity.
The document outlines an agenda for a class that includes discussing works about passing and identity, giving definitions for key terms, and having students write an in-class essay arguing either for or against the statement that passing for white provides advantages and only idiots would fail to do so. Students will analyze stories and poems about passing to understand issues of race, identity, and oppression.
1) The document is an excerpt from a chapter about the author burying his father and the three father figures he had in his life. The first was his biological father ("Daddy") who was a charismatic former basketball player and always encouraged critical thinking. The second was how others saw his father ("Mr. Sam") - a respected professor beloved by students and colleagues. The third is the lasting influence his father had, shown through how he mentored the author and his friends even after his death.
This document provides an agenda and information for Class 20 of an EWRT 2 course. It outlines that students will make up a missed vocabulary exam, do an in-class self-assessment writing, and draft Essay #5. It also discusses the end of quarter plan, including deadlines for assignments and a final exam discussion involving a Game of Thrones episode. Students are instructed on writing a thesis and outline for Essay #5.
The document provides an agenda for an English class. It outlines that the class will include a discussion of portfolios, allowing students to make up or retake a test, and working in groups on drama projects. It also lists the due dates for the drama projects and portfolios. The portfolio requirements are described, allowing students to submit stories and poems. Information is also provided about submitting work to the Red Wheelbarrow literary magazine.
This document provides an agenda and notes for an English writing class. The agenda includes drafting the second paper, studying for the second exam, and discussing technical details of integrating quotations and citations into essays. The notes cover proper formatting for short and long quotes, summarizing sources, avoiding grammatical errors, MLA style guidelines, and exam #2 details. Students are reminded to email the professor if needing help and homework includes drafting paper #2 and studying for the upcoming exam.
This document contains the agenda and announcements for an EWRT 30 class. It discusses upcoming due dates for a self-assessment, test 3 on drama terms, and group project 4. It also previews future class meetings that will include a make-up test, workshop on the drama project, and play readings. Students are reminded of the upcoming due date for their portfolio and submission to the Red Wheelbarrow literary magazine. Guidelines are provided for submitting work to the magazine. The document concludes with reminders to study for the make-up test and to bring copies of their group plays to the next class.
This document provides instructions for an in-class essay assignment. Students are asked to write a 500-word essay arguing for the supplies they have chosen to take with them into the wild. The essay should include an introduction with a description or narrative and thesis statement, body paragraphs for each supply item with examples and explanations, a counterargument paragraph, and a concluding paragraph. Students may only use a pen or pencil, blue book, and their own outline for the essay. They are reminded to include a topic sentence for each paragraph.
This document outlines the steps of Monroe's Motivated Sequence, a persuasive speech structure. It reviews the Attention, Need, and Satisfaction steps, then introduces the Visualization step. For the Visualization step, speakers offer a positive vision of what life could look like if the audience adopts the proposed solution. The document concludes by assigning homework for students to refine the Visualization step in their own speeches and prepare to present starting next week.
The document provides guidance on avoiding commonly misspelled words by using the correct suffixes. It notes that "accidently" is sometimes seen but "accidentally" is preferred. It recommends being careful with spelling variations to avoid distracting readers from the overall message.
This document provides an agenda for a writing workshop class. It outlines the steps for students to identify key parts of a problem solution essay in their own papers, including defining the problem, describing the solution, arguments for the solution, addressing objections, and evaluating alternatives. It then describes having students evaluate sample essays based on a grading rubric, focusing on elements such as the problem, solution, argument, objections, alternatives, and formatting. Students are assigned to review the rubric and revise their Essay #4.
The document provides an agenda for a class discussion on Thoreau and his essay "Civil Disobedience". It includes a biography of Thoreau, outlines his rhetorical strategies, and poses discussion questions about his views on government and unjust laws. Students are asked to prepare answers to the questions regarding Thoreau's belief that a just government governs least, an individual's responsibility to withdraw support from an unjust government, and how Thoreau dealt with unjust laws through civil disobedience and nonviolent resistance.
This document provides an agenda for a poetry workshop including discussions on poetic forms like sestinas and villanelles. It defines various poetic terms in 3 sentences or less for each. These include definitions of a sestina, villanelle, tercet, elision, personification, and free verse. The document then provides examples of poems written in free verse form with brief analyses of the poetic techniques and conventions used in each. It concludes with tips and guidelines for writing free verse poetry including the use of imagery, formatting, grammatical conventions, and repetition.
The document provides an agenda for a class that includes discussing integrating quotations, works cited pages, editing strategies, and essay 4. It covers avoiding grammatical errors when incorporating quotations, how to format a works cited page, revising sentences that lack an agent, and avoiding ambiguous uses of "this" and "that". The homework is to revise essay 4 using the integration and editing techniques discussed and bring a clean copy to class.
This document contains various scientific terms and measurements related to RNA dynamics and NMR experiments used to study RNA, including different energy levels measured in kcal/mol, molecular components involved in biological processes like transcription and translation, and NMR techniques like spin relaxation, residual dipolar coupling, and CPMG that provide information about RNA folding, helical motions, and the life of mRNA in vivo.
Yash Nagar completed an internship with Wikimedia Deutschland working on his master's thesis about harvesting mathematical formulas from Wikipedia and integrating them into Wikidata to make them available to question answering systems. This helped significantly enrich Wikidata's data and make it more useful for users. Wikimedia Deutschland is a non-profit organization based in Berlin that is the oldest and largest independent chapter of the Wikimedia movement, supporting the free online encyclopedia Wikipedia and other projects. Lydia Pintscher of Wikimedia Deutschland recommends Yash Nagar and his work during his internship.
The document is about a book titled "KENTUCKY 120" that features photographs from each of Kentucky's 120 counties. The photographs were taken by Ed Lawrence during his travels across Kentucky's backroads without a destination in mind. Lawrence accumulated thousands of photographs over the years and organized them by county. While some photos portray identifiable local landmarks, most locations would only be known by locals. Through the square format photographs, Lawrence aims to convey his deep love and connection to all of Kentucky from the Mississippi River to the Appalachian Mountains.
Mutasi adalah perubahan materi genetik (DNA) yang dapat diwariskan dan menghasilkan mutan. Terjadi karena substitusi basa, insersi, delesi pada DNA, atau perubahan struktur dan jumlah kromosom. Contoh kelainan akibat mutasi kromosom adalah sindrom Down, Klinefelter, Turner. Mutasi dapat disebabkan faktor alami seperti sinar UV maupun buatan seperti asam nitrat.
The agenda covers three main topics: 1) Discussing essay #2, 2) Discussing QHQ SBB, and 3) An in-class writing on SBB. It also includes subsections on wordiness, unnecessary words to eliminate, and punctuation. The document provides guidance and suggestions for improving conciseness and clarity in writing.
The agenda covers the following topics: discussing Essay #2, having an in-class writing on SBB, and discussing QHQ SBB. The document then discusses wordiness and concise writing, identifying unnecessary words like deadwood, utility words, and circumlocution that weaken writing. It provides examples and tips for eliminating wordiness.
Getting started with Fun HomeThe following are some notes anMatthewTennant613
Getting started with Fun Home
The following are some notes and handouts.
If you take a little bit of extra time to review them,
this should help a lot with doing the
various assignments.
We will also try to discuss many of them when we meet for ZOOM sessions!
FUN HOME: HOW DO WE READ A “PAGE”?
While reading a traditional prose text (such as a book, article, textbook, short story, report, etc…), this is usually not a complex choice:
EXAMPLE from F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby:
And, after boasting this way of my tolerance, I come to the admission that it has a limit. Conduct may be founded on the hard rock or the wet marches, but after a certain point I don’t care what it’s founded on. When I came back from the East last autumn I felt that I wanted the world to be in uniform and at a sort of moral attention forever; I wanted no more riotous excursions with privileged glimpses into the human heart. Only Gatsby, the man who gives his name to this book, was exempt from my reaction—Gatsby, who represented everything for which I have unaffected scorn. (2)
It’s very obvious, right? One simply starts at the upper left-hand corner, reads the top line from left to right, and then continues down to the next line—and repeats the process, sometimes for thousands of lines! Predictable? Sure! Engaging? Maybe…
“Graphic texts” do not work in the same way. As I try to provide examples, please note a basic way to refer to specific parts of a graphic text. Besides indicating pages, I ask that you refer to “panels.” For example, if I refer to 7,2 that would mean page 7, panel 2 (the one featuring Bruce in his classroom).
Here are some terms to consider and some relevant panels:
Words and pictures (obviously…) Panels and gutters [7,2 or L2,2 is a panel. The words “It was his passion” appear in the “gutter” between panels.]
Foregrounds, middle-grounds and backgroundsSymbols and texts [Take a look at 57,1 [Examples appear on almost every page. or L62,1.Bechdel directly shows readers 5,3 or L11,3 are good places to start. the exact words from the dictionary.]
Zoom in or zoom outMoving the camera
[See all of page 23 or L29. If you were filming this,
where would the “camera” be? How often would you need to move it?]
Sequences and non-sequitorsSpeech bubbles and text boxes
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is a sudden and at times confusing sequence. that’s a “speech bubble.” When she
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What was the first thing you read? And the features one font for the whole book.
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Here are a few key points about suicide:
- It is a serious public health issue, with someone dying by suicide every 18 minutes globally. Rates are highest among youth aged 12-18.
- Depression is strongly linked to suicide, especially among adolescents. Depression affects mood, thoughts, sleep, appetite and overall functioning.
- The transition period of adolescence itself can be stressful due to physical, social and emotional changes. This, combined with untreated depression, increases suicide risk.
- Factors like substance abuse, family dysfunction, bullying, trauma or abuse can further elevate suicide risk among vulnerable youth struggling with depression.
- However, suicide is preventable with early identification of at-risk individuals, treatment
This document outlines the schedule and assignments for an English literature course. It provides discussion topics and questions about the short story "We Might as Well be Strangers" and details for the second paper assignment. Students must submit a revised draft of Paper 2 by Friday of week 11 before noon. They are also to complete a self-assessment homework assignment. The document discusses primary texts that could be analyzed for the paper and provides potential essay topics and questions.
This document outlines the schedule and assignments for an English literature course. It provides discussion topics from texts read in the second half of the quarter, potential essay topics students can write about, and guidance for writing the paper. It notes that the final paper is due on December 12th and self-assessments are due in Class 22. Revisions for the paper are due the Friday of Week 11 before noon.
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The document provides an agenda for a Class 12 discussion. It includes plans to discuss essays, in-class writing assignments, and review materials. It also covers topics like revising for wordiness, checking paper details, punctuation rules, and submitting assignments electronically. The class will discuss the book Stone Butch Blues and review writing tips on using present tense for literature and proper citation formats.
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Reader Response
Objective: To write a 1.5 page Reader Response essay in MLA style that critically responds to the
article(s) from our class reading.
Remember that reading and writing "critically" does not mean the same thing as
"criticizing.”
Your "critique" can and should be positive and praise the text if possible, as well as
pointing out problems, disagreements, and shortcomings.
You may use “I.”
Process:
1. Title your paper. Do not use the title from the article; make up your own title.
2. In the first sentence, state author’s name, reading title, and the quote that you wish to discuss.
For example:
According to John Smith in his writing, “English is my Favorite Class,” “Freewriting
on my blog site helps me to organize my thoughts” (Smith 1).
3. State a question that you would like to answer in your writing.
For example:
While this statement works for most writers, I wonder how freewriting helps aural
learners.
4. Begin the second paragraph suggesting that you are going to develop an answer.
How much does the text agree or disagree with what you believe? Use quotes from
the text and/or personal examples to support your claims.
Or
How much were your views and opinions challenged or changed by this text, if at
all? Use quotes from the text and/or personal examples to support your claims.
Or
How does it address, or not, things that are important to your family, your
community, your ethnic group, to people of your economic or social class or
background, or your faith tradition? Use quotes from the text and/or personal
examples to support your claims.
5. To sum up, what is your overall reaction to the text? Would you read something else like this,
or by this author, in the future or not? Why or why not? To whom would you recommend this
text?
From Multicultural Barbie and the Merchandising of Difference
Ann duCille has served as the chair and director of the Center for Afri- can American Studies at Wesleyan University. She has published widely on black women writers and on race and popular culture, particularly in her book Skin Trade (1996), which won the Myers Center Award for the Study of Human Rights in 1997. The essay here originally appeared in the spring 1994 issue of differences: A Journal of Feminist Cultural Studies. In this piece about Barbie, you’ll hear one of duCille’s key interests in popular culture — the ways we all help establish cultural norms through producing and consuming goods and ideas.
A quick look through duCille’s MLA-style works cited list at the end of the essay shows that she draws on a range of academic conversations to frame her analysis of Barbie. She responds not only to scholars who write about Barbie but also to those who write about adolescent self-image,
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This document provides contact information for "DoctorL" including their email, Twitter handle, and Facebook profile. It also lists several resources and topics for discussion including a back channel for questions, slideshare materials, book matching strategies, educational psychology theories, and recommended books. The document contains information about connecting with readers through various formats and levels.
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This document provides guidance for writing a book report, including elements to include and tasks to complete. It discusses including an attractive cover with the title and author, identifying the literary element of theme by analyzing the plot, subject, and protagonist's insights or lessons learned. It also involves identifying one of several common themes in literature and creating a collage commenting on the main theme. Other tasks include writing a synopsis using provided prompts, answering interview questions in character, and imagining what clothes, media, and events the protagonist would engage with today.
This document provides instruction on the four main types of sentences in English: simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex. It defines each type and provides examples. Simple sentences contain one independent clause. Compound sentences join two independent clauses with coordinating conjunctions or semicolons. Complex sentences contain an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses. Compound-complex sentences contain at least two independent clauses and one or more dependent clauses. The document reviews identifying and writing each sentence type and provides guidance for a homework assignment to write examples of each.
This document provides information for the first class of EWRT 1A taught by Dr. Kim Palmore. The class will include reviewing the introduction, brainstorming activities, and introducing essay #1 on choosing survival supplies. Students will engage in a group activity to choose supplies from lists to argue for in a 750 word essay. The essay should have an introduction with a clear thesis, body paragraphs with topic sentences and examples supporting each supply choice, and a conclusion. Homework includes posting an outline with thesis and being prepared for an in-class essay exam in the next class.
This document provides an overview and instructions for a hybrid English composition course. It introduces the instructor and outlines the course format, which includes both in-person and online components. Students are instructed on how to access course materials and assignments through the Canvas online platform. Key policies like attendance, late work, and academic honesty are also summarized. The document concludes by directing students to familiarize themselves with the course website and syllabus in preparation for the next class.
This document provides an overview and instructions for a hybrid English composition course. It introduces the instructor and their contact information. It explains that the class will meet in-person once a week for 2 hours and 15 minutes, and students will complete the remaining coursework online through presentations on the course website. It outlines how the online platform Canvas will be used and provides instructions for navigating it. It lists the course requirements including essays, homework posts, and reading quizzes. It discusses policies around attendance, late work, academic integrity and conduct. Finally, it provides the course syllabus calendar.
This document provides an overview and instructions for Dr. Kim Palmore's hybrid EWRT 1A course. The key points are:
- The class meets once a week in person and requires additional online work to be completed independently through presentations on the course website.
- The website, Canvas, will be used for communication, submitting assignments, accessing course materials and viewing grades.
- Students are expected to actively participate in class discussions and regularly complete assignments by their deadlines. Formal writing assignments include essays that must be submitted electronically through Kaizena.
- The syllabus outlines course policies on attendance, late work, academic integrity and expected conduct. It also provides a tentative course calendar and information
This document provides information for the first class of EWRT 1A taught by Dr. Kim Palmore. It includes an agenda with topics like an introduction, brainstorming activity, and outlining an essay. Students will choose survival supplies for a hypothetical weeks-long trip into the woods and write an argument essay defending their choices. The document gives categories of supplies to pick from and instructs students to discuss their options in groups. It provides guidance on writing an outline, thesis, body paragraphs, and conclusion for the essay. The homework is to post an outline, bring a hard copy to class, and prepare to do an in-class writing exam.
This document provides an overview of the EWRT 1A course. It introduces the instructor, Dr. Kim Palmore, and outlines the course details and expectations. The class is a hybrid course that meets weekly for 2 hours and 15 minutes, with an additional 2 hours and 15 minutes of online work each week. Students will use the Canvas platform to access course materials, assignments, and submit homework. Students are expected to actively participate in class discussions and regularly complete reading and writing assignments on time, including essays, homework posts, and quizzes. Academic honesty is strictly enforced.
To highlight and comment on an essay using Kaizena:
1. Find the essay assignment and submission requirements
2. Highlight required sections of the essay using the specified colors
3. To add a comment, highlight text and type the comment in the box that appears, then click "Post to Highlight"
4. Use one consistent color for your own highlights so the instructor can use a different color for feedback
1) All essays and projects must be submitted electronically through Kaizena before the class period they are due.
2) Students will enter a group code to submit essays and can add files from Google Drive or their desktop in PDF format.
3) The professor will review highlighting and commenting on essays and students can leave written or voice comments on their submissions.
To establish a WordPress username for completing homework, students can visit https://signup.wordpress.com/signup/?user=1 and follow the steps to create a free username, or sign in through Facebook instead of using their own name; they should then email their instructor their username and use that account for all class work online, as having a username is mandatory for much of the coursework being done online.
Here is a 4 line quotation integrated into a sentence in my essay:
According to leading health expert Dr. Susan Smith, making healthy choices is about more than just weight loss or appearance. As she states:
"Health is about feeling your best both physically and mentally. It's finding energy and joy in everyday activities rather than feeling drained. Making small changes like adding more vegetables or taking a walk after dinner can lead to big improvements in overall well-being."
This quotation effectively captures Dr. Smith's perspective that health is about overall wellness, not just physical appearance or numbers on a scale. Focusing on small, sustainable lifestyle changes and how they can enhance quality of life is a motivating message.
This document provides an overview of the key information for a hybrid English composition course. It includes the instructor's contact information and a description of how the hybrid format will work with some weekly in-person meetings and additional online content. It outlines how the course website and learning management system Canvas will be used and provides details on course requirements, assignments, materials, and policies around attendance, late work, academic honesty, and conduct. The syllabus calendar gives a tentative weekly schedule and overview of topics. Students are instructed to review the information and policies, take a quiz on the first presentation, and complete tasks like exploring the website and setting up accounts before the next class.
This document provides an overview and analysis of themes, tensions, and theoretical approaches in Night by Elie Wiesel. It discusses major themes like death, God/religion, sanity/insanity, and family. It analyzes the internal and external tensions present in the work. It also explores how trauma theory and other theoretical lenses can provide insight into the text. Key events and passages are analyzed in depth, with questions provided about character perspectives and shifts in worldview over the course of the horrific events depicted in the Holocaust memoir.
This document outlines the schedule and assignments for a hybrid literature and composition class over 9 weeks. It includes in-class and online activities as well as assigned readings and homework for each week. The main topics covered are New Criticism, feminist criticism, psychoanalytic criticism, short stories, and trauma theory. Students are assigned two essays analyzing poems and short stories using different literary lenses. They also have online discussion posts and take an exam on the materials covered in the first few weeks.
1. This document provides the guidelines and requirements for Essay #3, which asks students to write a 3-5 page concept essay explaining and analyzing a concept of their choosing. Students must highlight and comment on specific sections of their essay, include at least 3 sources in a Works Cited page, and meet formatting and length requirements.
2. The essay should objectively explain the chosen concept for readers who may or may not be familiar with it already. Students are encouraged to reveal uncommon details about the concept and use examples and imagery to illustrate it clearly.
3. The document outlines learning outcomes, previously learned skills, best practices, and traps to avoid like choosing an inappropriate topic or failing to support arguments with evidence
Here are some potential connections between the prisoners in Night and Shawshank Redemption:
- Both groups are stripped of their freedom and individuality. In the camps, prisoners are reduced to numbers and forced into uniformity/submission. In Shawshank, the prisoners lose control over their lives and must obey the prison system.
- Survival requires adapting to a harsh, inhumane system not of one's own making. In the camps, prisoners must find ways to endure unthinkable cruelty and deprivation. In Shawshank, inmates navigate the prison's oppressive rules and power structures.
- Hope and humanity can persist even in the darkest of places. In Night, some prisoners retain aspects of dignity and compassion
The document provides an agenda and discussion points for analyzing the novella "Rita Hayworth and Shawshank Redemption" by Stephen King and the short story "The Metamorphosis" by Franz Kafka.
For "Rita Hayworth", there is a discussion of themes like hope, struggle, and imprisonment. Potential discussion questions are also listed. For "The Metamorphosis", summaries of each chapter are provided along with characters, potential theoretical approaches, and discussion questions. The agenda then outlines a group discussion for analyzing both works.
The agenda covers discussions of two novellas: Rita Hayworth and Shawshank Redemption and The Metamorphosis. For Shawshank, key themes of hope, struggle, and imprisonment will be analyzed. For The Metamorphosis, three chapter summaries are provided: Chapter 1 details Gregor waking up as a cockroach and his family's initial reaction. Chapter 2 explores Gregor's loneliness and his sister's compassion. Chapter 3 finds Gregor weakening as the family acclimates to his condition. Potential discussion questions are posed about characters and applying psychoanalytic theory.
This document provides an agenda and information for an online EWRT 1C class on Franz Kafka's novella "The Metamorphosis". The class will include reading the novella, an introduction to Kafka as the author, and discussing the historical and literary contexts. Kafka is introduced as an Austrian-Jewish writer from Prague in the late 19th/early 20th century. The novella is then analyzed including its use of third-person narration from the perspective of Gregor Samsa after he transforms into an insect. Students are assigned to read the novella and answer one of several discussion questions in 200-300 words for homework.
5. Wordiness
A sentence is not concise simply because it is short; a concise sentence contains
only the number of words necessary to achieve its effect or to make its point.
6. Deadwood
Unnecessary phrases that
take up space and add
nothing to meaning.
Examples
0 Wordy: There were many
factors that influenced his
decision to become a teacher.
Hint: omit the filler phrases
"it is," "there is," and "there
are" at the beginning of
sentences; these often delay
the sentence's true subject
and verb.
0 Concise: Many factors
influenced his decision to
become a teacher.
7. 0 Wordy: They played a softball game that
was exhausting.
0 Concise: They played an exhausting
softball game.
0 Wordy: It is expensive to upgrade
computer systems.
0 Concise: Upgrading computer systems is
expensive.
8. Some familiar expressions that are
Deadwood
0 There is/There are
0 I feel
0 I think
0 It seems to me
0 All things considered
0 Without a doubt
0 It is important to note
0 In my opinion
0 The reason why
0 In conclusion
9. Examples of Utility Words to
Eliminate or Replace
Vague Nouns
0 Thing (something,
anything, everything)
0 Situation
0 Kind
0 Type
0 Aspect
0 Sort
0 Area
Adverbs denoting degree
0 Basically
0 Very
0 Definitely
0 Quite
10. Omit "which" or "that” when
possible.
0Wordy: Because the fluid, which was
brown and poisonous, was dumped into
the river, the company that was
negligent had to shut down.
0Concise: Because the brown, poisonous
fluid was dumped into the river, the
negligent company had to shut down.
20. Miscellaneous Questions
0 Does the paper follow MLA guidelines?
0 Is the page length within assigned limits?
0 Is the font type and size within the assigned guidelines?
0 Does the Header follow the assignment guidelines?
0 Is the professor's name spelled correctly? Kim Palmore
0 Is your name spelled correctly?
0 Does the paper have a title? Is it a good title? Is the title in
the appropriate location?
0 Have you italicized book and movie titles and put stories,
articles, and poems in quotation marks.
21. Writing Tips
0 Write about literature in present tense
0 Avoid using “thing,” “something,” “everything,” and
“anything.”
0 Avoid writing in second person.
0 Avoid using contractions.
0 Cut Wordy Sentences
0 Fix run-on sentences
0 Check for misused words
0 Put commas and periods inside quotation marks
23. A Work in an Anthology,
Reference, or Collection
0 Works may include an essay in an edited collection or
anthology, or a chapter of a book. The basic form is for this
sort of citation is as follows:
0 Last name, First name. "Title of Essay." Title of Collection.
Ed. Editor's Name(s). City of Publication: Publisher, Year.
Page range of entry. Medium of Publication.
0 Example:
0 Harris, Muriel. "Talk to Me: Engaging Reluctant Writers." A
Tutor's Guide: Helping Writers One to One. Ed. Ben Rafoth.
Portsmouth: Heinemann, 2000. 24-34. Print.
24. A Work in a Collection or Anthology
Last name, First name. "Title of Essay." Title of Collection. (Date of original
publication if applicable). Ed. Editor’s Name(s). City of Publication:
Publisher, Year. Page range of entry. Medium of
Publication.
Langston Hughes
“Passing”
The Ways of White Folks
New York
Vintage 1990 1934
No Editor in this case
Pages 51-55
Print
Toni Morrison
“Recitatif”
Source: Confirmation: An Anthology of African
American Women
Publisher: Morrow
Edition: 1983
Editors: Imamu Amiri Baraka & Amina Baraka
Place Published: New York
Pages 243-260
Print
25. Recorded Films or Movies
List films by their title. Include the name of the director, the distributor, and the
release year. If relevant, list performer names after the director’s name. Use the
abbreviation perf. to head the list. End the entry with the appropriate medium
of publication (e.g. DVD, VHS, Laser disc).
Ed Wood. Dir. Tim Burton. Perf. Johnny Depp, Martin Landau, Sarah Jessica
Parker, Patricia Arquette. Touchstone, 1994. DVD.
The Human Stain
Directed by Robert Benton
Performers: Anthony Hopkins, Nicole Kidman,
Ed Harris, and Gary Sinise.
Distributor: Miramax
Release Year: 2003
Medium: DVD
26. An Article in a Scholarly Journal
0 Always provide issue numbers, when available.
0 Author(s). "Title of Article." Title of Journal Volume.
Issue (Year): pages. Medium of publication.
0 Example:
Bagchi, Alaknanda. "Conflicting Nationalisms: The
Voice of the Subaltern in Mahasweta Devi's Bashai
Tudu." Tulsa Studies in Women's Literature 15.1
(1996): 41-50. Print.
27. Article in an Online Scholarly Journal That Also Appears in Print
Cite articles in online scholarly journals that also appear in print as you would a
scholarly journal in print, including the page range of the article. Provide the
medium of publication that you used (in this case, Web) and the date of access.
Wheelis, Mark. "Investigating Disease Outbreaks Under a Protocol to the
Biological and Toxin Weapons Convention." Emerging Infectious Diseases
6.6 (2000): 595-600. Web. 8 Feb. 2009.
Author(s). "Title of Article." Title of Journal. Volume. Issue (Year of publication):
pages. Medium of publication. Date retrieved.
Randall Kennedy
“Racial Passing”
Ohio State Law Journal
Volume 62
Issue 1145
2001
1-28
Web
8 Feb. 2013
William Pickens
“Racial Segregation”
Opportunity: Journal of Negro Life
December, 1927
364-367
Web.
8 Feb. 2013
28. Article in an Online Scholarly Journal That Also Appears in
Print
Cite articles in online scholarly journals that also appear in print as you would a
scholarly journal in print, including the page range of the article. Provide the
medium of publication that you used (in this case, Web) and the date of access.
Author(s). "Title of Article." Title of Journal. Volume. Issue (Year of publication):
pages. Medium of publication. Date retrieved.
Hughes, Langston.
Passing (the poem)
Phylon
Vol. 11
Issue 1
(1950)
15
Web
30. “ I didn’t want to be different. I longed to be everything grownups
wanted, so they would love me. I followed all their rules, tried my best
to please. But there was something about me that made them knit their
eyebrows and frown. No one ever offered a name for what was wrong
with me. That’s what made me afraid it was really bad. I only came to
recognize its melody through this constant refrain: “Is that a boy or a
girl?”” (Feinberg 13)
0 As Jess was growing up, she knew she was different but she was not
willing to accept it because she did not want to be judged. She tried her
best to fit in like everyone else, but it was difficult. She wants to be what
society wants her to be so she can feel accepted, but she knows there is
something unusual about her, but she is not able to find out what and that
is what makes her scared of who she is.
This stood out to me because it was about Jess trying to fit in no matter
how different she was, but the question always lingered her – “Is that a
boy or a girl?” – and that made her both angry and curious.
31. “The sky was crayon blue. I pretended I was lying on the
white cotton clouds. The earth was damp against my back.
The sun was hot, the breeze was cool. I felt happy. Nature held
me close and seemed to find no fault with me.” (17)
Jess was so lonely in the world because of her difference.
Growing up in the ignorance of parents, Jess desired love and
care like any child would need from its family. This quotes
show readers Jess’ innocent view and feeling for her
surroundings, especially nature and those animals that
accepted her unconditionally. It made me wonder why Jess
could not have a normal life like other children when she did
not have a right to choose her own gender. Would it make
any different if Jess was loved and taken care by her parents?
Would her life be less tragic in the warmth of a family?
32. “For a moment in that mirror I saw the woman I was growing up to be
staring back at me. She looked scared and sad. I wondered if I was brave
enough to grow up and be her.” (21)
0 Jess is home alone after her parents left for works. Jess tries on
her father’s suit and tie. Unexpectedly, her parents come home
early and find out Jess is in male clothing. Afterward, they send
Jess to a mental hospital. This sentence stands out for me because
I think for the very first time, Jess knows who she really is.
Growing up with teases makes it difficult for Jess. Because from
the earliest memories, Jess tells us that she is painfully different
from other girls. She hates wearing dress, and she is happy
wearing her Roy Rogers outfit. Jess feels angry but more curious
about her identity when she faces the question, “Is that a boy or a
girl?” When Jess understands that her identity may make people
to disregard, she feels scared and sad. Moreover, it makes her
wondering about how she is going to grow up.
33. “Whatever the world thought was wrong with
me, I finally begun to agree they were right. Guilt
burned like vomit in my throat.” (Feinberg 23)
This quote stuck out to me a lot because Jess always knew
she was different. She knew everyone else knew she was
different. I think that because of how society was, thinking
that if you were part of the lgbt community, you were
basically wrong and don’t belong. I think because of the way
of thinking back then, it made Jess feel bad for who she was
and people should never feel bad for who they are. I think
this is the point where Jess started feeling ashamed of
herself.
34. “I dropped my gaze and walked back to my seat. Mrs. Noble
squeezed my arm…there was no criticism of me in her eyes.”
(Feinberg 25)
0 This stood out to me because it was hard for me to
integrate into the American society as i was brought up
with Chinese customs. I had a third grade teacher (my first
white teacher) for the first time in elementary. When i
presented about my life at home, i didn’t quite expect my
teacher to understand what i went through as i did my first
and second grade teachers (one was Japanese and the
other Indian). The teacher actually hugged me after my
presentation and told me i was going to be OK. This was
the first time I ever felt the warmth of a teacher caring for
my life. She didn’t judge me, she embraced my life and felt
for me.
35. “Part of the nightmare was that it all seemed so matter of fact. I couldn’t
make it stop, I couldn’t escape it, and so I pretended it wasn’t happening.
I looked at the sky, at how pale and placid it was. I imagined it was the
ocean and the clouds were white-capped waves.” (Feinberg, 41)
0 This passage is being said while she is being raped by her
classmates. I found this passage significant because it is
heartbreaking what those guys did to her. Additionally, that
passage shows how powerless she is in this incident. I
think that a person may have their opinions about others
but to do such a degrading act is extremely inhumane. This
type of event definitely marks a person for life and many
times that person can never fully recover from it. While I
was reading this scene, it reminded me of the French
movie, Irréversible, I saw a couple of years ago. The film is
about two men who want revenge for the rape a girlfriend.
It reminded me of this because both talk about this matter.
Rape is a very sensible topic that is not discussed in
society; so watching and reading about it is very profound.
36. “They cuffed my hands so tight behind my back I almost cried out. Then
the cop unzipped his pants real slow, with a smirk on his face, and
ordered me on my knees. First I thought to myself, I can’t! Then I said
out loud to myself and to you and to him, ‘I won’t’ “ (10)
0 Jess describes a night she had with Theresa. They were alone in a
strange tuff at that night, waiting for their friends, who never showed up.
Then, the cops came in and started targeting at Jess and Theresa for no
reason as usual. However, this time is different, Jess was alone, she did
not have anyone to back her up, or tell her it’s alright. Suddenly, Jess was
so vulnerable and weak, and she knew exactly what was going to happen
to her. She did not fight back because she was cuffed and she knew that
if she fought back, everyone in the bar would be beaten. The thing that
stood out to me the most is Jess’s attitude after the incident. She was not
even mad, and something inside her was changed. She accepted the fact
and lived with it, “ I learned the difference between what I can’t do and
what I refuse to do.” Jess did not tell what happen to her in the cell that
night. But we all know that it was so traumatized that there was nothing
she could do but to accepted it.
37. “I called him later that night and he raced over. “Jack set you up, Jess.”
[…] I had trouble following what Duffy was saying. It wasn’t just that my
mind was hazy with painkillers, I didn’t want to understand.” (92)
This passage stood out to me because nearly all her life, Jess
always looks for a place to belong. She began at the Tifkas
bar in Niagara, to Abbas in the city, and each time she would
have an experience that would shatter that dream of hers to
have a place where she could belong [. . .]
When she find out Jack allegedly sabotaged the machine she
was working on she was in a state of shock, not wanted to
believe that after all her effort making it into the union and
being accepted as one of them, it was once again not the
case. I see Jess’ situation as very tragic, and I think this is the
moment that people around her outside of the butches,
femmes, and drags begin to see it as well.
38. “Deep down, my insides seethed. I knew I was stone, too. It was a home
alarm system that didn’t seem to have an on-off switch. Once installed,
the sirens went off and the gates shut, even if the intruder was loving”
(94)
0 These lines in the book spoke very strongly to me. From them, you
realize just how much psychological damage that Jess has taken from
the repeated gang rapes and the beatings. Any one of the events that
Jess suffered before the age of sixteen would have had a significant
effect on her still developing personality. Just one on these events
could have caused her to shut down all attempts by others to reach
her on a personal level. The fact that Jess, while damaged, still goes
on to form personal attachments, and to form romantic relationships
is a testament to how strong a person she is inside. Jess also has the
examples from the older butches who have suffered through the
same exact types of abuse, to draw on. While the other butches
rarely talk about the abuse they have suffered, the fact that someone
else really does understand what you have been through can be an
enormous help in getting through it yourself. I believe that Jess
recognizing she has scars is what allows her to continue reaching
out to others.
39. “I went to the window and looked out over the mounds of
snow, wishing I could do everything in my life once as
practice and then go back and do it again.”(102)
0 Jess said this after Duffy gave her the present he got for her. This
text in the book stood out to me because she felt guilty leaving
the plant for a different job after everything she fought for there.
She also might have felt proud of the reputation she had
established there. Also, I think she senses a reoccurring theme in
her life. Every time she makes a mistake she always wishes she
could take it back. For example, she didn’t know what to do when
Duffy asked her to step aside and give her promotion to Leroy.
She said she regretted it later and did it because she thought it
was the right thing to do. This specific quotation is indicative that
Jess is uncertain of herself despite what she expresses outward.
The author depicts Jess a certain way but this quote at the same
time reminds us that Jess doesn’t know how to live the life she
has been forced into.
40. “”You know”, Duffy added, “I don’t think I really realized how hard it is for you. I
know what jerks the guys at work can be sometimes.”……..”But when I went to the
hospital with you, I saw how they treated you, how they talked about you,” he
rubbed his face. When he looked back at me, I saw tears in his eyes. “ I felt so
helpless you know? I kept yelling at them that you were a human being that you
mattered, and it was like they weren’t listening to me.”” (Feinberg 93)
0 This post really stood out for me. Why? It was sad; it is
unbelievable how people are so cruel and selfish. Duffy was right,
Jess was a human being like everyone else, but the doctors didn’t
help Jess just because of the appearance. And was a butch. I liked
how Duffy stood up for Jess, it was brave and a show of
friendship towards Jess. Also how he cried while he was saying it
was touching. I believe that everyone deserves the right as
everyone else; we all should have equal rights. This as many
other parts was sad.
41. “ I drifted in and out of consciousness. I remember Theresa propping me
up against a brick wall in the precinct parking lot and assessing the
damage with her eyes. she chewed her lower lip and fingered the bloody
places on my shirt. ‘I'll never get these stains out.’ ‘Indirect messages cut
through my fog much more clearly than direct ones.’” (136)
I believe that what Theresa and Jess
understood clearly is the damage of that night
inside them is something they are not going
to forget for the rest of their lives. the small
cuts and the blood is going to be cured in a
week or two but that night left Jess a big scare
inside that is never going to be cured. I like
these lines because deep inside us we can not
explain everything or talk about everything
we have been through sometimes, but still we
can have our beloved make us feel better by
showing us that they understand us and how
we feel without reminding us of what hurts us
and without opening our ugly scars.
These lines stood out to me the
most since i have never
experienced a beating like this.
And the beating was caused
just because she was a lesbian
is shocking. What homosexual
men and women went through
before people were more
accepting is terrible. I am glad
that people have wised up to
this and now this is punishable
under hate crime laws.
42. “I shrugged. ‘I’m twenty-one today and I
feel old’” (140).
0 This quote stood out to me beyond all others because of
some preconceptions I had. I had assumed more time
had passed between her talks of high school and this
birthday party. When she moved onto talking about her
fights in the union and all the time spent in the bar, I
assumed she had skipped forward in her life story a bit
and was in her mid-twenties. Being twenty-two myself,
the fact that she had undergone all of those beatings and
overall stresses of her life before reaching twenty-one
puts the earlier part of the story in perspective for me.
43. “They must have worked it over with a tire iron or a baseball bat. I
wondered how they had shredded the thick rubber wheels. I knew it was
only a motorcycle, but I felt like a ghost looking down at my own
mutilated body on asphalt.” (pg157)
0 This quote stood out to me because there is more meaning
to what really happened. Her safety was on the line. She
makes it know for the reader to understand what would
have happened to her if she didn’t run away. When she
looked at her bike she saw herself on the floor beaten to
death. Reading this peace reminds me of how tuff it would
have been to be her. The men had so much anger they even
tore the wheels to shreds. Just the fact that they did this to
a motorcycle lets you how bad discrimination was back
then. It shows how much we have moved forward in life.
44. “This time I didn’t try to hide my excitement. I was passing.”
(172)
0 This quote stood out to me because I know this feeling. The
feeling of passing is very exciting especially if you are getting
away with it. It’s a feeling that kind of sends a thrill down your
spine. It’s uplifting and gives you hope. Jess goes in the barber
shop, and gets addressed as “Sir,” and gets away with it. The
barber treats Jess like any other male that walks in, and with
respect. He cuts Jess’ hair, and right when she thinks he’s done,
he gets bay rum on his palms and rubs them on her cheeks.
That very moment, she realizes that she is passing. If I was in
Jess’ situation, I wouldn’t even try to hide my excitement either,
and with all the trouble and grief Jess went though, she
deserves some kind of happiness. I’m sure she felt some
happiness at this moment as well. I really like this quote
because it represents a positive turn in her life.
45. In-Class Writing
0 Explore a moment when Jess
intentionally passes. How does
this experience change who ze
is? How do you know?
0 Choose one when ze
unintentionally passes. Does
this affect hir in the same way?
How do you know?
46. HOMEWORK
Edit Essay #2: Submit your essay electronically before our next class
(feel free to submit early) by emailing a copy saved in MS Word to
palmoreessaysubmission@gmail.com. Please save your essay as your
last name and the number 2. Example: Palmore 2
Reading: Stone Butch Blues (196-End).
Post #16: Best paragraph from essay #2
Post #17: Jess interacts with medical personnel in
various ways throughout the novel. Explore an
experience Jess has with a medical professional.
Does her gender identity influence the treatment
she receives or doesn’t receive? Or explore a
moment when Jess passes. How does this
experience change who ze is? How do you know?
Include a quotation with your discussion.
Studying: Terms