2. State the option you have chosen – do not ask your schoolmates to choose. PROPOSE your idea Lack of background information provided PURPOSE – why are even having the flea market/ school concert in the first place? Elaborate, not lift. Recommend to you (x) Recommend ____ to you or suggest that you OPT for this option No need to capitalize your events unless they are NAMES Discuss the event; not discuss ABOUT (x) the event “I have decided..” (x) “I propose../ I re1commend..” Introduction
3. Need to use the criteria to decide which advantages should be highlighted! Elaborate on why you think the criteria is important E.g. mass participation why? E.g. less preparation why? Para 2/3 – advantages of choice
4. “I know some of you are concerned that..” Possible problem Proposed solution (be feasible) Paragraph 4 – problems of choice event
5. “I do not prefer the other one” (x) the other event is not as good/beneficial/not preferred State advantages, then move on to disadvantages Paragraph 5 – the other event
6. Restate your option clearly Summarize main advantages of option Thanks Conclusion
7. Do not begin sentence with But And Also So So as to “and” only related ideas Others
