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HOW TO TELL A STORY
THE MOTH
VICTORIOUS
WILSON POTORREAL
HIS STORY
A GOOD STORY HAS…
A Set-Up
An Introduction to the Conflict
A Tension Stretch
A Punchline
A Resolution
THE SET-UP
Where/when are we?
What did you care about then?
Describe people/places/relationships.
Establish the mood
Use metaphors or comparisons.
THE CONFLICT
Establish the stakes.
Why did you care? Why should we?
What could happen?
What did you want?
THE STRETCH
Milk the tension
Dramatize the obstacles
Show how you’re feeling
Take your time…but not too much time.
Inject energy!
THE PUNCHLINE
Give us a satisfying result
Can be successful or tragic
Consider how to use pauses.
Be clear about what happened.
THE RESOLUTION
What did you learn?
How were you changed?
What could others take from this?
Why did this matter?
Where do we go from here?
VICTORIOUS
WILSON POTORREAL
A GOOD STORY HAS…
A Set-Up
An Introduction to the Conflict
A Tension Stretch
A Punchline
A Resolution
THE SET-UP
“I’ve always wanted a dog. Who
doesn’t want a man’s best friend?”
Strong first line
THE SET-UP
“I wanted to carry a Rottweiler, or a
husky you know.”
Specific details
THE SET-UP
“I’m gonna teach it how to stay, how to
fetch…”
The theme: Responsibility
THE SET-UP“I see this little fur ball come up to my
socks and starts nibbling my socks. And
I feel the little teeth, they go to my toes
and it tickled but hurt at the same time.”
Sensory Description
THE CONFLICT
“You know what? Today I’m going to
teach him how to follow me off the
leash.”
Uh-oh! First inkling of danger
THE CONFLICT
“He got a little too curious and that
door opened and he just ran out
excited.”
It’s on! Start of conflict
THE STRETCH
“I didn’t want to get up but I had to.”
Obstacle
THE STRETCH
“Mind you I’m chasing this little dog,
half Shih Tzu, half Maltese.”
Detail
THE STRETCH
“He was like a lion, a miniature lion.
And his tongue was rolling out his
mouth, like a fruit roll up.”
Metaphor/simile
THE STRETCH
“The Grand Concourse is like a mini
highway.”
Reminding of stakes
THE STRETCH
“You know what this is my
responsibility…I felt like Captain
America.”
Theme reminder
THE PUNCHLINE
“And it was too late…for Death. I
grabbed my dog and lifted him high
like Simba! Death was not going to
take my dog!”
Big finish! Metaphor
THE RESOLUTION
“The bus driver gave me the thumbs up
and I gelt victorious.”
Feelings about story
YOUR TURN
THE MOTH
A GOOD STORY HAS…
A Set-Up
An Introduction to the Conflict
A Tension Stretch
A Punchline
A Resolution
POSSIBLE STORIES•A time when you were victorious
•A time when you were embarrassed
•A time when you learned something
•A time when you did something wrong
•A time when you stood up for yourself
•A time when you felt betrayed 
•A time when you realized something about someone close to you

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