A Critique of the Proposed National Education Policy Reform
Sentence structures
1. Deliberate choices
MESMERIZING
1. Wondrous, captivating, mesmerizing,
the town square stood in front of me
in all its glory.
2. Beautiful, elegant, mesmerizing, the
sun began to set over the valley.
3. Cold and hungry, Martin was
mesmerized by the people walking
past not taking pity.
4. Vibrant and mesmerizing, the book
sat on the old library bookshelf.
5. There was one store, so amazing, so
mesmerizing, it was untouchable.
The triple threat
adjectives
Beautiful, stunning,
captivating, the streets
were filled with magic.
Adjectives at the start
sentence
Cold and hungry, Martin
waited for someone to
take pity on him.
So so sentence
There was one item, so
small, so unrecognisable,
it didn’t register.