A2 Media Studies

2. 1st Version of Shooting-
Book
This is the 1st version of Shooting-Book for the short film ‘Redemption Dinner’.
The main benefit of this version is the correct order of scenes and shots. However,
when it comes to the flashback part, there isn’t sufficient number of shots, thus the
main purpose of that scene will not be clear enough. This will be improved in the
next two versions. Also, scene 3 has wrong order of shots. David should first
unpack his groceries, wash his hands and then pun an apron on.

3. 2nd Version of Shooting-
Book
This is the 2nd Version of
Shooting-Book. While
reading thoroughly each
sentence of the text, various
grammar mistakes were
found. This will be improved
in the final version. In
addition to this, few shots
became unnecessary so they
are removed from the
shooting-book, but few where
added as they represent the
most natural of denouement.
Emma-the supporting role of
the film will be David’s
girlfriend instead of being his
wife.

4. Final Version of Shooting-
Book