this was feedback from my advert

1. Task 4 feedback and
review
By Keeley Barnaby

2. My advert
This advert
promotes Evian
water

3. Peer assessment
Berfin- At the end of the video when you had the logo showing the clip was too short.
The background for the advert should have been white instead of still showing the
advert in the background.
Emmanuel- The concept was good. The editing could have been better if the advert had
faded into the scenes and add more transitions.
Veera-the dance was good and if there was a beat drop and a change the scene. Faster
dance would have match the fast transition putting the bottle in a different location
would have been better. The logo would have been better if it had faded in at the end of
the video.
Rob(teacher)- the advert was good the ending could have been better if the logo was
smaller and in a corner so it could still be seen and to have the advert still playing. The
slow pace over the advert works for the product.

4. Self-assessment
• My areas of improvement are adding more to my
advert by making the choreography longer so I could
have more footage to work from. I would use more
transition.
• What went well for me is that the music flowed well
with the video and the was the video flowed, to make
it flow more smoothly I could add more transitions.