3. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked the main outline and shape of the image and thought I had adjusted
the different parts to fit the overall body well so they were all in the correct
proportion. I also like how the different colours give a more natural and
realistic feel to the image.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I think I could improve on the image by adding a background to it in order to
make the animal stand out more and make the image look more interesting.
Another way I could achieve this would have be to add an overall shadow to
the animal to give some depth and would have also made it stand out more.
5. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like that this time I have added in a background but not just made it a block
colour but added in some extras to make it look more realistic and also the
detailing on the face.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I think I could improve on the face more to make it look more realistic by
adding in texture on the face and focussing more on the mouth to get more
detail there too. I would also improve on the colours and add some gradients
instead of each parts being a block colour.
7. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like the fact that none of the images are the same and that I have used a different
technique on all of them to see what looks good and what I need to work on and
change to achieve an image that shows its full potential. I like how I have incorporated
a picture into the text to add diversity into my images and how I have outlined each
letter in some of the texts to highlight each part of the words and how I have adjusted
the shapes or the texts to make them interesting to look at but have still kept all the
images legible. By not just using my name and experimenting with a quote is also
something that adds diversity and how I have tried using different shadows and
textures in the writing are also things I like about that image.
What would you improve if you did it again?
Things I would improve on, on my images would be by making them more different in
terms of not only the technique used but also the colours instead of just a plain black.
I also think I need to improve the image with the camera in the background as it is
hard to tell what it is due to the spacing of the text. Next time I will add some depth to
the text by applying shadows to the words to make them bolder and so they’ll stand
out more. I would also like to improve on my images by adding more texts with a
picture incorporated into them and try different words, pictures, colour and
techniques of how to make them stand out more.
9. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
In these images I like how they are all similar as they are all in black and white
however very different as not only are they 3 different pictures but also that they
have all had different filters added to them. I also like how you can still tell they
are people and I have chosen the correct features such as ‘Threshold’ to balance
out the image so that it is not too dark or too light and you can still make out each
individual person and also some of the detail in the image such as the brick wall.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would improve the colours of the images because even though they are all black
and white which shows consistency, I think adding different colours to the images
would provide variety amongst them and make each images its own but also
visually stimulating to look at. I would also change the detail within the images
and so if there were some parts of the image which didn’t stand out I could use
techniques I know such as rotoscoping to improve them and make the details
finer and stand out.
11. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
What I like about these images is that they are all very different in terms of
how the emotion is presented. I like how for loneliness it is an object and not
a person to allow variety in my images and also how in one of the images
there is more than just one person.
What would you improve if you did it again?
Next time I would improve my images by exploring different ways of capturing
emotions and have a few of the images less posed and more natural and also
try and incorporate more objects into the images instead of people to make
them more diverse. I would also make sure that every image was taken in a
different place as two of them, the emotions sad and excited were in the
same place.
13. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
What I like about this image is how I have made the swing and the tree look
3D and adding depth to them by shading with a darker pencil. I also like how I
have blended the colours in the tree together to get a mix of brown and
green.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I would improve this image by making it have more colours in to be brighter
and more eye catching. I would also make the scene bigger as there is not
much going on and is not much of a scene and so next time I would expand it
and add some depth to it.
18. Proposal
Dimensions
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Export Format
Advantages:
Disadvantages:
Story Overview
(Provide an outline of your story)
19. Production Methods
(Explain the methods you are going to use to produce your pages. Show us the
thinking behind your decisions for a more detail response)
Audience
(Think about who you are targeting as your audience. Consider age, gender, class,
location and other characteristics which could define your audience.)
Deadline
20. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
21. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
22. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
23. Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
