This document contains evaluations by Jordan Lee of various digital graphic narrative development tasks. For a shape task, Jordan liked how their image used layers to give a 3D feel. They would improve details and coloring. For their second shape task image, Jordan liked the bright colors and use of color range, and would incorporate more textures. Jordan also provided positive and negative feedback on subsequent rotocope, text-based, and comic book tasks, noting what they liked about each image and how they could further improve.

1. Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
Jordan Lee

2. Shape Task

3. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked how my image used multiple layers to give a sort of 3d
feel to a flat image. The way the jaguar is stood up on the
rocks looking over them adds more character to the image. I
also like the bright block colours I used for the background
and foreground which added to the cartoon feel that we were
aiming for with this image.
What would you improve if you did it again?
Id improve on some of the detail within the image which
would consist of the shading and colouring within the image.

4. Shape Task

5. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
In this second image that I created I really liked the colours used to
create a bright image that could be appropriately used in a children's
book.
I also liked how I incorporated a new skills ‘colour range’ to add some
texture and realism to the image that you would expect in real life. I
think I definitely improved on my first image as I have built up on my
skills over the last task learning how to warp things more precisely.
what would you improve if you did it again?
I think if I was to improve on doing this task again I would try to
incorporate the colour range more with other textures such as fur and
hair.

6. Rotoscope

7. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked a lot of things from this image as I think it turned
out really well. I had good use of shading and detail
throughout the image while still keeping it cartoon like. I
also liked how well the colour range turned out for
picking out the detail in the hair and adding some shading
to the ear.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I was to improve this image I would try and concentrate
the detail more finely, I could do this by maybe adding
creases to the clothing or textures.

8. Rotoscope

9. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
Again I liked quite a few things from this image but I think my first
image was much better even though I tried to take my previous
evaluation in mind. Some of my favourite parts from this image I would
say are the detail in the ears, the detail to the badge on the shirt and I
also liked how I used the gradient to give the effect of what the shirt
actually looks like.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I was to improve parts of this image I think id try get a nicer shade
for the skin as I found picking out the shading in the skin was a lot
harder than the last image to keep them more consistent throughout
the face. Id also try to pick out a lot more detail and shading in the
facial hair and main hair.

10. Text Based

11. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
What would you improve if you did it again?

12. Text Based

13. Comic Book

14. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I really liked the way the pastel colours of the
background and main characters show through the
threshold really well and shows different types of
shading throughout the image in their faces and
clothing.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I was to improve this id maybe do the background
separately to characters just to change the image
up and maybe change it so that it had more detail.

15. Comic Book

16. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
What would you improve if you did it again?

17. Comic Book

18. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I think this was my favourite of my images because it was
probably the most abstract with big bold blocks of colour
that naturally wouldn’t be recognisable until I put the
threshold layer on top it gave this nice contrast picking up
little details such as the text from the original Image.
What would you improve if you did it again?
If I was to do this image again I might think about adding
more colour and contrast into the image to make them
come through the harsh black a bit more.

19. Photography

20. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
What would you improve if you did it again?

21. Illustration

22. Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
What would you improve if you did it again?

23. Initial Ideas

24. Mood board of inspiration

25. Idea Generation

26. Mood board of chosen idea

27. Proposal
Dimensions
(number of pages and page size)
Story Overview
(Provide an outline of your story)
Export Format
Advantages:
Disadvantages:

28. Deadline
Audience
(Think about who you are targeting as your audience. Consider age, gender, class,
location and other characteristics which could define your audience.)
Production Methods
(Explain the methods you are going to use to produce your pages. Show us the
thinking behind your decisions for a more detail response)

29. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?

30. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?

31. What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?

32. Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?

33. Storyboards

34. Storyboards

35. Storyboards

36. Original Script
Original Script goes here with link to where it came from

37. Original Script
Original Script goes here with link to where it came from

38. Final Script
Final script goes here.

39. Digital Flat Plans