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1. After exploiting the Netflix's users Market we will focus on new
clients to make the Netflix Community even bigger
After tapping into the Netflix audience we will focus on new clients
to make the Netflix Community even bigger
To make Netflix Sports as personalized as possible, we conducted
a survey to adjust our product to the market demands
To make Netflix Sports as personalized as possible, we conducted
a survey to adjust our product to the market’s demands
Being our product related to Netflix, after asking age and gender
we wanted to know...
Our product being related to Netflix, after asking age and gender
we wanted to know...
Although the answers were very equal, finally, with slight
difference, the answer most answered was that they were not
considering it
Although the answers were very similar, with only slight
differences, the answer most frequently supplied was that they
were not considering it
Before, cars were considered to be the preferred form of
Transport when moving around the city due to its commodity and
the fact that several people can be taken at the same time
Before, cars were considered to be the preferred form of
Transport when moving around the city thanks to their practicality
and the fact that several people can be transported at the same
time
This trend is not new to big cities like Beijing or Tokyo where it is
barely impossible for cars to drive by
This trend is not new to big cities like Beijing or Tokyo where it is
barely possible to drive a car

2. We have designed a revolutionary product never seen before,
which will end up with these two problems in a simple and unique
way
We have designed a revolutionary product never seen before,
which will put an end to these two problems in a simple and
unique way
We would also like to have a product sold in stores but buying or
renting a local is not a strategy that we think could be successful.
We would also like to have a product sold in stores but buying or
renting a venue is not a strategy that we think could be
successful.
Not only do we offer an environmentally friendly product but also
approved by the World Fair Trade Organization
Not only is it produced in an environmentally friendly way but it is
also approved by the World Fair Trade Organization
The company's headquarter is in Madrid, from where the coffee
will be distributed to every city of Spain
The Company is based / headquartered in Madrid, where the
coffee will then be distributed to every city of Spain
The aim of the survey is to get an idea of the coffee role in
nowadays society
The aim of the survey is to get an idea of coffee’s role in today’s
society
As a result only a 21.6 percentage of people were reluctant to
coffee consumption

3. As a result, only 21.6% of the respondents were reluctant to
consume coffee
When regarding the fair trade issue, the survey proved that
there's interest on it with more than three-quarters of the people
interviewed having interest...
When it comes to the fair trade issue, the survey proved that
there's interest in it with more than three-quarters of the people
interviewed showing interest...
The users can access to these instructions easily and learn how to
cook, iron etc.
The users can access these instructions easily and learn how to
cook, iron etc.
The service is aimed at young students living alone for the first
time nonetheless any flatmates can use this app
The service is aimed at young students living alone for the first
time nonetheless any flatmate can use this app