Error correction 3ºe4 nov17

1. Correct the errors contained in the sentences below:
They contain of 67% Sports enthusiasts and 33% couch potatoes whom want to change
their lifestyle
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We are making a survey in order to improve our new product
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How often do you eat healthy in a week
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In the end we asked them to give us a small feedback to our concept. It was
predominant positive like
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Every stakeholder is able to have an overview of attendances
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In fact, we wanted to compare both of teachers and student's opinion about how
disturbing do they find attendance lists
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Would they welcome the digital improvement for attendance list to answer to our
hypothesis that it consists a loss of time and the disturbing step of class proceedings
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If it is conclusive, in a mind of growth we will diffuse the idea of Uniscan to other
university or/and school of Madrid next year
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Price is also a disadvantage, following the fact that is uncomfortable to wear them and
their practicality
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More than 70% would like to find the brand in normal stores there is even though a
chance the idea can be sold on the Internet or our own stores
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With this, we create a library of video games to which any subscriber can access from
his television and/or computer
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However we also intended to create a new "gamer" culture prompting with our modest
price to consumers of less usual video games. Consumers will no longer have to move
from home to get their favorite games, Downstream takes you straight home.
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In one hand we want to know how big the market is, so to have an average of potential
players, on the other hand we want to know about their habits and if they use similar
platforms...
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Another important point in our strategy was to know the price per month for
Downstream. We also asked for the money people spent per year in video games in
order to put a similar or lower price.
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If the person answers "no" he was done with the survey
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Another important point in our strategy was to know the price per month for
Downstream. We also asked for the money people spent per year in video games in
order to put a similar or lower price
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76.3 answered that they will be able to pay 10 euros per month, very similar price to
Netflix, so we can tell that having Netflix as a reference when creating this app, people
directly relate the price to the Netflix one
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This confusion matches with the fact that 70% of the respondents consider sweet pizzas
to be more suited for desserts.
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There are two types of consumers, the students that share their knowledge by
uploading their notes and by getting profits of it, and the students that download these
notes and get to understand what they didn't know just by paying a low amount of
money
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Being ourselves students helps us to understand better their needs

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We will distribute flyers on front of schools, libraries, subway and other places where
students spend free times and work.
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In order to do this we have to know how much time does our average target person
spends on social media and in what kind of social media platform
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Actually they all like to have money. Moreover when you earn it thanks to your
knowledge
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This option will give us information about how and to who we should focus our app
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