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  2. 2. Each interview took around2 minutes to complete which is a fairy confortable time-consuming questionnaireto be done. Each interview took around2 minutes to complete which is a fairly comfortable time. This report aims to investigate the viabilityof a new groundbreakingproduct as B-connected is. This report aims to analyze the viabilityof a new groundbreakingproduct: B-connected. The device projects the time on the ceiling as well as showing the time on the own carpet. The device not only projects the time on the ceiling but it also shows the time on the very carpet / on the carpet itself. In terms of financingthe ACC, we are doing a crowdfunding in Kickstarter. Our company is looking for 80.000$ investment in order to start the production. In terms of financingthe ACC, we are doing a crowdfunding campaign on Kickstarter. Our company is looking for an 80.000$ investment in order to start the production.
  3. 3. Our society usually spend huge amount of money in useless things such as sneakers that are way over 300$, only because trends. Our society usually spends huge amounts of money on useless things, such as sneakers that are well above 300$, only because of trends. We also offer a wide range of colors in between the clients can choose. We also offer a wide range of colors from which / among which the clientscan choose. Moreover, we aimed to get specific information to stablish a concrete idea of what the needs of our customers were and how can we meet them Moreover, we aimed to get specific information to establish a concrete idea of what the needs of our customers might be and how we can meet them This informationguides us about on which brand we should focus when creating our product. This informationguides us as to which brand we should focus on when creating our product. Imagine a low-middle income person living in Fuenlabradathat does not usuallyuse his/her car. Imagine a low-middle income person living in Fuenlabrada who/that does not usually use their car.
  4. 4. The elderly who own cars but they do not use them that much, so instead of keeping them in their garage, we offer them the possibilityof getting a profitability. The elderly often own cars but do not use them that much. Therefore, we offer them the possibilityof making a profit out of their vehicles instead of keeping them in their garage. They own a car, which is good because this means they have the possibilityof renting if they wish… They own a car, which is good because this means they have the possibilityof renting it out if they wish… It consisted of 6 questions and a brief introductionthat explainswhat Renti consist of. It consisted of 6 questions and a brief introductionthat explainedwhat Renti consists in. In this day and age, fitness is more of a lifestyle then it is a hobby and the number of people engaged to this lifestyle keeps on growing. In this day and age, fitness is more of a lifestyle than it is a hobby and the number of people engaged in this lifestyle keeps on growing. In order to do this we have to have a globalsight on the general things, but also have a particularview for each group in the market.
  5. 5. In order to do this, we ought to have a globalview/ perspective on general things, but keep a closer eye on each market segment. Students, which could find the idea of having a chocolate bar with caffeine very profitable,it is something that you can carry with yourself everywhere. Students might find the idea of having a chocolatebar with caffeine very beneficialsince it is something that you can carry with you everywhere. 23.2% attended the events with a companionand almost anyone went alone (0.7%) 23.2% attended the events with a companionand almost no one went alone(0.7%) LACY will simplify the clients’ dailylife with its easy use and enrich the style with its fashionableappearance. LACY will simplify our clients’ dailylife with its simple use and add a touch of style with its fashionableappearance.

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