22. First Draft Feedback 1:
The first element of feedback
I received was that suggesting
that I should alternate the
fonts used on my cover lines
to show variation between
each of them. I was told this is
conventional of music
magazines and will help make
my magazine a lot more
industry standard I was told my barcode also appeared
slightly smaller in scale in comparison
to other industry standard products,
so I will research this and make
changes if necessary.
I was also given advice to maybe
fill in the blank space that is
located to the right of my models
head. I am yet to think of
something that will fit but I will
research conventional ways of
doing so and make changes
accordingly.
I was also given feedback
with regards to my date, I
must add the year not only
on the barcode, but on the
obvious cover too.
