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Positives:
- Good release date of two weeks.
-Original colour scheme that applies to both genders

Negatives:
-Not too sure about the name
-Chart magazines could appeal more to females
Individual     What are the Strengths of the               I think the strengths of my pitch are the genre of the magazine. I enjoy chart
Assessment                Pitch?                         magazines so I feel li have a better idea of what to include in it. I like my colour
Form                                                     scheme of maroon, as it is a gender neutral colour and it is bold. My pitch also
                                                          related back to my research, so I knew that what I chose would appeal to the
                                                                                              audience.

              What are the Weaknesses of the Pitch?
                                                               The weakness’ of my pitch in my opinion would be I wasn’t sure when my
                                                         magazine should be released: every two weeks or every week. I also struggled a
                                                           lot with the name, as I could find a name that represented the genre and that I
                                                         liked, or wasn’t similar to something else on the market. I should of explored more
                                                              magazines that were already on the market. To compare and make mine
                                                                                                different.

              What are the Strengths of the Planning?
                                                           Strengths of the planning were that it gave me lots of ideas of what I want my
                                                           magazine to be like. I got a chance to explore lots of different colours, and to
                                                         then choose my scheme. The planning made me realise which ideas I wanted to
                                                                include and didn’t. I made my work relevant to the target audience.


             What are the Weaknesses of the Planning?
                                                          There were lots of different options, e.g. fonts and colours, so it was very difficult
                                                         to choose what I wanted to choose. Even though I planned and wrote down a
                                                           variety of possible names for the magazine the planning stage didn’t help me
                                                                                           choose a name.



             What are the Strengths of the blog/design
                              of blog?                       The strengths are you can easily see which work is which, as it is
                                                           separated my dates and titles. The blog was fairly easy to upload to
                                                                                          also.




              What are the strengths of the magazine
                              design?                     Strengths of the magazine design are it helps me decide what the layout of my
                                                           magazine is going to be like. Also it shows me if my colour scheme works, and
                                                                               what text I should do in each colour

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  • 1. Feedback Positives: - Good release date of two weeks. -Original colour scheme that applies to both genders Negatives: -Not too sure about the name -Chart magazines could appeal more to females
  • 2. Individual What are the Strengths of the I think the strengths of my pitch are the genre of the magazine. I enjoy chart Assessment Pitch? magazines so I feel li have a better idea of what to include in it. I like my colour Form scheme of maroon, as it is a gender neutral colour and it is bold. My pitch also related back to my research, so I knew that what I chose would appeal to the audience. What are the Weaknesses of the Pitch? The weakness’ of my pitch in my opinion would be I wasn’t sure when my magazine should be released: every two weeks or every week. I also struggled a lot with the name, as I could find a name that represented the genre and that I liked, or wasn’t similar to something else on the market. I should of explored more magazines that were already on the market. To compare and make mine different. What are the Strengths of the Planning? Strengths of the planning were that it gave me lots of ideas of what I want my magazine to be like. I got a chance to explore lots of different colours, and to then choose my scheme. The planning made me realise which ideas I wanted to include and didn’t. I made my work relevant to the target audience. What are the Weaknesses of the Planning? There were lots of different options, e.g. fonts and colours, so it was very difficult to choose what I wanted to choose. Even though I planned and wrote down a variety of possible names for the magazine the planning stage didn’t help me choose a name. What are the Strengths of the blog/design of blog? The strengths are you can easily see which work is which, as it is separated my dates and titles. The blog was fairly easy to upload to also. What are the strengths of the magazine design? Strengths of the magazine design are it helps me decide what the layout of my magazine is going to be like. Also it shows me if my colour scheme works, and what text I should do in each colour