This document summarizes the learning process and improvements made from earlier drafts to the final product of a video project. It identifies specific mistakes and strengths in Draft 2, such as shaky camera, poor focus, and good monster scene editing. The improvements section outlines how the storyline was changed to add more fear, editing and camera work skills improved to reduce shakiness and increase shots, and credits and sound design were enhanced to better fit the genre. Overall, it concludes all aspects of the project improved significantly from Draft 2 to the final version.

1. EVALUATION QUESTION 7:
LOOKING BACK AT PREVIOUS
TASKS, WHAT HAVE YOU LEARNT
IN THE PROGRESSION FROM THEM
TO THE FINAL PRODUCT?
Harry Ellis

2. FINAL VIDEO

3. DRAFT 2

4. MISTAKES/ERRORS AND GOOD SKILLS
FROM DRAFT 2
• Lots of errors with sound, can hear people talking in the background
• Shaky camera
• Camera focus isn't too good
• Jump scare is anticlimactic at the start
• Credit positioning is ok, but they are too quick and the font is boring.
• Its supposed to be night, but it is very bright. This is due to the lack of shading and color
correction we did in editing.
• Good angles of Marcus walking down stairs
• Dog barking is edited in well
• Living room scene is quite boring
• More sound issues, and a lack of tension building music etc.
• Bathroom scene is not well edited
• Sounds in this scene are very good, tooth breaking out and dropping
• Make up here is good
• Marcus's sister can be seen behind him in the hand scene
• The editing on the final scene with the monster is good, as it looks creepy, but its not a great
scene.

5. IMPROVEMENTS
• We really improved from our 2nd draft to our final one, as we improved all
aspects of the product.
• We changed the storyline, which allowed us to add in much more to the fear
factor of our OTS.
• We also improved in our editing skills, and camera work, as can be seen in
the final draft. The camera is a lot less shaky, with a much wider variety of
shots, and the editing is a lot better, with less jumpy cuts and bad
transitions. We also managed to make it seem darker in our final draft
thanks to editing.
• The credits also improved slightly in our final draft, as the font we used for
them more fitted the genre.
• We also improved the music and sound in it, by creating our own sounds
through foley, and using music to build tension.