What have you learned from your audience feedback?

1. What have you learned from your audience
feedback?
QUESTION 3

2. TREATMENT FEEDBACK VIDEO
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7sLD-i-P_k0

3. Feedback from the class:
1)They liked how our song choice because it was upbeat and it went well with our
genre.
However, they disliked;
1)The idea of us linking the river with the emotions of the artist and the lyrics as
we were planning on showing how just like the flow of the river she moves along
with her life too but they pointed out how not many people would understand
that.
2)The fact that we didn’t yet know how many actors we we’re going to have in our
music video.
3)How our narrative wasn’t explained well enough and that we need to expand on
our ideas more.
4)Lastly, if we’re going to express her feelings of her being heartbroken and
depressed or of her recovering and moving on.
TREATMENT FEEDBACK
~The treatment is a basic plan for what we will be including in our music video~

4. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6XzUj11UBQ
ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK VIDEO

5. Feedback from class:
Improvements:
1)Some of the lip syncing didn’t match with the song
2)Few of the scene where a bit dark
3)The scene where the artist deletes the contact should be re done with the
number saved
4)Lip synching during the beginning was too long
5)Space out the clips
ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

6. Positive side:
1)The establishing shot was good as it set the scene
2)They like the actresses’ energy throughout the video
3)Scenes linked – was layout well
4)The wedding shop scene was shot well and was portrayed well.
ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

7. IDEAS FOR PRINT PRODUCT
FEEDBACK VIDEO
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aBlKFlvzWzQ

8. Improvements:
1)The spine should have contained more info and logos
2)Should include logos on the cover
3)Quotes or a lyric from the song would have been good to use as it would
have made it more personal.
Positive points:
1)The photos were clear as the brightness and contrast where at the right level
2)The house style was consistent throughout.
3)It was nicely spaced out which made the layout look good.
IDEAS FOR PRINT PRODUCT
FEEDBACK

9. Generally, I as happy with what I have produced as I have kept it simple just
like I wanted it to be like. I kept to the layout of Rihanna’s album loud which
did in fact inspire my print product. However, I think I would have added
more logos and company's.
CONCLUSION