2. Cover page corrections
I centred the masthead “Subculture” as it was considered
more conventional
•I enlarged the BoomTown logo as it was unclear and hard
to see
•To ensure that each cover line was clearly separate, I
adjusted the positioning and colours.
•I changed the Main cover line from “upcoming artist” too
“most anticipated” as the wording was most sophisticated
and professional
•I added a price above the bar code .
I made my artists name “FLO” a prominent feature on the
magazine cover so that it was clear what the main article
was about
3. Contents page
I Removed the date on my contents page as it is a monthly
addition rather than weekly.
I put numbers on the images so that they corresponded
with the pages they were related too
I made the numbers the same size throughout the list
rather than significantly larger or smaller.
I added small descriptions to each page, to inform the
audience what each page would be about . I also removed
some pages from my contents list as they were inferior to
others and were therefore taking up too much room and
making the list too long.
I Changed the colour of the page names too a dark purple
so that they would stand out.
I changed the currency of my subscription to pounds.
4. Double page spread
I made some slightly chances to the over all look of the mast head. I added drop shadows so that it
would stand out more on the page and made the over all font bigger in size.
I moved the positioning of the strap line down slightly so that it was well aligned on the page
I added drop capitals to each paragraph
I corrected any spaces in my columns so that the text was flowing consistently
To be conventional, I made the introduction of my article slightly bigger in font size and changed
the colour too a fuschia pink
I increased the spaced in-between the interview questions and answers as I needed to fill up
empty space towards the end of the article
I Changed ‘Biggest Upcoming’ to ‘MostAnticipated’ so that it was content throughout my
magazine
I edited my pull quote by adding blending options, such as a dark pink drop shadow. I also used the
same font as I used for my mast head so that it was consistent also.
I increased the size of my font on the pull quote so that it was more visible.
I added a corresponding page number in the bottom left hand corner.
