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As a teacher , I should educate for life
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( ) and it demands a lot of competences for me. I must
become change agent . It means that I need to prepare ,
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( prepare ) update , innovate our plans .
At the same time
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( ) I have to be responsible to plan
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( responsible for planning ) deepened .
When I plan a topic ,
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( topic ) it ´s necessary that my students achieve goals . When I plan ,
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( plan ) I ask myself the following questions :
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( questions: )
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What do I want my students to learn from the lesson ?
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( lesson? )
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Is the lesson develop properly ?
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What activities will my students enjoy ?
How much time is it going to take to my students to participate in all the activities ?
How should I present the lesson ?
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( lesson? )
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What materials do I need for the class ?
What questions should I ask to my students ?
What classroom management problems do I need to consider to plan ?
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( plan? )
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How to evaluate the students at the end of
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( the , a ) lesson ?
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( lesson? )
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How are they going to show their knowledge that they achieve after the lesson is done ?
Where do I go next ?
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( next? )
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How can i
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( I ) help the students who can´t improve in my class
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to become more successful ?
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( successful? )
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If my students did n´t understand the lesson ,
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( lesson ) what should I do different ?
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( different? )
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My advice for Ms. Rubinetti to improve is to believe in what she is doing , love her students , do her
best to motivate them, to be patient ,
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( patient ) research about new methods and keep learning
from experienced persons .
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