The document discusses introverts and extroverts, providing definitions and examples. It notes that introverts tend to focus more on inner thoughts while extroverts focus more on external things. The document suggests teachers should better understand and accommodate introverted students, for example by building quiet time into the school day for individual work and limiting an emphasis on large group activities and social standards. It also provides suggestions from Susan Cain on teaching students to work independently and encouraging introverts to open up on their own terms.

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Introverts Extroverts Definition It ´s a shy person . A person mainly concerned with their
own
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( ___ ) thoughts and feelings rather than with external things .
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It ´s an outgoing ,
socially confident person . A person mainly concerned with external things or objective
considerations .
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Important facts A third to a half of the population are introverts .
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Some
transformative leaders in history have been introverts like Elenor Roosevel
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( Roosevelt ) , Rosa
Parks ,
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( Parks ) Ghandi, mother Teresa, Bill Gates, Hillary Clinton. People could feel these
leaders were at the helm . They were lookin
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( looking, looked, lookin', look, Lookin ) for common
good .
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( good. ) 50-74 percent of the population are extroverts . Extroverts leaders in history are
Bill Clinton ,
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( Clinton ) Margaret Thatcher, Steve Jobs, Muhammad Ali. People could feel that
leaders like Hugo Chavez, Bin Laden, Kim Jong-un and others enjoyed directing others and
not out of the pleasure of being looked at
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.
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Susan Cain´s definition Introversion is more
about how do you respond to stimulation ,
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( stimulation ) including social stimulation.
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Introverts feel at their most alive and their most
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switched on and their most capable when
they are in a quieter environment . To maximizing their talent is to put themselves in the zone of
stimulation that is right for
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them. Teachers think that a
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( an ) introvert student is a problem
case . Introvert students get better grades and more knowledgeable. They like t(...) They tend to

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very careful leaders
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( ) and they are better leaders than extroverts . Extroverts really
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( ___ )
crave large amounts of stimulation including social stimulation .
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( stimulation. ) Extrovers
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( Extroverts, Extrovert, Extroversion, Extraverts, Extravert ) feel at their most alive and their most
switched on and their most capable when they are in a social environment . To maximizing their
talent is to put themselves in the zone of stimulation that is right for
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them. Teachers think an
ideal student is an extrovert . Extrovert students get good grades and some of them not. They like
to work in groups . They are good leaders but not as good as introverts . Special skills When it
comes to creativity and to leadership , we need introverts doing what they do best .
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They
have unique talents . When they are in their own
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( ___ ) world ,
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( world ) it means they will
innovate something for our world . Encourage teachers to help them to develop the faculties so
they can maximize their talents . Encourage teachers to help them to develop the faculties so they
can maximize their talents . General Suggestions Parents and teachers need to better understand
how to love and cultivate the introverted kids . They need to do general teacher training to just
make
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( just to make ) them aware of what makes a student an introvert ,
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Teachers need
to cultivate the talent of those students . teachers should avoid setting social standards for
what is normal .
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It ´s a problematic and should let know to parents if a student have
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( has )
none friends . If a student has one or two or three friends ,
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( ___ ) and prefers to go deep
with their friendships instead of being one of a big gang , there ’s nothing wrong with that
at all .
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Build quiet time into the school day ,
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( day ) where the students just read alone ,
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( alone ) play board games in smalls groups or do other activities thaty
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( that, they, thirty,
throaty, thy ) they like . Teacher should mix it up between individual work ,
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( work ) group work
and pair work . Teacher should rethink what they mean about class participation and think about
classroom statement instead . Teachers should have a reading assignment about the book Quiet
and work on the teacher ´s guide http://www.thepowerofintroverts.com/about-the-book/teachers-
guide/ (...) Teach them how to handle introvert people . Susan Cain´s suggestions 1-We need
to be teaching kids to work together but we also need to be teaching them how to work on
their own . This
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is especially important for extroverted children too . They need to work
on their own because that is where deep thought comes from in part .
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2- We could all
stand to unplug and get inside our own
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( ___ ) heads a little more often .
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3- introverts ,
you being you , you probably have the impulse to guard very carefully what 's inside
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of
you but occasionally , just occasionally , I hope you will open up your suitcases for other
people to see , because the world needs you and it needs the things you carry .
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How
will the curriculum in schools of the future vary from what we see
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now
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?
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( now? ) . The
deliberate practice should be working alone if students really
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( ___ ) want to learn something
What kinds of differences would you imagine in how teachers are trained and evaluated
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Teacher should have freedom to design curricula that they think it would work for their students . .
What kind of social activities are not part of the school day now that could be in the future
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? We should have small tables not just not just giant tables . Introvert people needs to socialize with
1 or 3 people ( restaurants , playgrounds ,
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( playgrounds ) etc. ) Let ’s talk about technology.
How could technology be integrated into the classroom of the future to give more options ,
and be there in positive ways for students who are introverts
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? Teachers will move toward
anything that encourages student participation through an online medium .
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