2. 5w’s From this we created an
opening sentence –
We opened with a fact that
Who? Mick we had found, converted
Walsh, the Vice
Principal of into our own words – “The
Oldham Sixth Study from Women’s Aid
Form College.
warns that smart phones
can install spyware in less
Why? Is this
helping social
What? Are than 5 minutes to find out
smart phones
networking
deemed a much about a person by
dangers take
danger? their phone”.
place. Hard
News The ‘5w’s’ created our next
sentence. “We sent our
education correspondant to
speak to the Vice Principal
of Oldham Sixth Form
Where?
When? College , about the dangers
College
Irrelevant.
grounds. of smart phones within the
college”.
3. 5w’s From this we created an
opening sentence –
Who? Martin We opened with our ‘what’.
Ashurst, musical This included “In other
director of
Oldham news, anti-social behaviour
Lyceum, and the is again reported to be on
youths involved.
the rise and the clichéd
reason being “youths have
Why? Is the What? Is there nothing to do”
Lyceum helping enough for
youths with youths to do in
nothing to do? Oldham? We then issued a statement
Soft that explained what the
News interview involved – “Our
news
correspondant, Gemma
Mills, visited the Oldham
Lyceum, where she spoke to
When? Where? Oldham Musical Director Martin
Irrelevant. Lyceum.
Ashurst, to see if there is
enough for youths to do in
Oldham”.
4. 5w’s
Both ‘5 w’ structured opened up to the interviews
that we had previously recorded. So then
transcribed our interviews and vox pops so that
we could plan our script effectively.
Below this presentation, I have embedded the
original transcription of our interviews and vox
pops along with how they were cut down due to
important facts and time limits.
5. Rule of 3
In worry of our script being too
long, we used to rule of 3 on the
lines that we would have to
record ourselves. The rest were
already recorded and so had
stated times.
6. Rule of 3
.......................................... .......................................... ..........................1 second!
Good Morning Oldham
Its Eight Fifty
Three And This
Is Your Morning
News Report. Are
Smartphones Deemed A
Danger Within College
Grounds Is There
Enough For Youths
To Do In
Oldham And Whats
The Most random
7. Rule of 3
.......................................... .......................................... ............................1 second
Text Message You
Have Ever Received?
The Study From
Womens Aid Warns
That Smartphones Can
Install Spyware In
Less Than 5
Minutes To Find
Out Much About
A Person By
Their Phone.
8. Rule of 3
We considered that this was only 5 lines
long and yet 26 seconds. Taking in to
account that we had approximately 30
lines, we worked out that this would
add up to near 800 seconds – around 1
and a half minutes. This seemed
appropriate for our time limit of 5
minutes and so we went ahead.
