1. 情報編集の３ポイント: ＜わかる＞, ＜つかむ＞, ＜動かす＞ 2. 段落づけをする。

1. 英語でE-mail
第3回 磁力にからめる：
相手への気配り
鈴木繁夫（名古屋大学・名誉教授）

2. ＜つかむ＞情報：
驚き＝不思議＋弱点
• I usually stay at home on weekends.
• I spend my time with a handicapped son,
Tomo.

3. • If you have any questions about social
welfare in Japan,
• I am the one you should ask.
＜つかむ＞情報：役立ち

4. • I have been practicing Japanese
martial arts for many years.
＜つかむ＞情報：
驚き＝ユニーク＋ユーモア
• I want to protect myself
from attacks from
students.

5. • If you want to learn self-defense arts, I
can recommend to you some useful
books.
＜つかむ＞情報：役立ち

6. 相手への気配り
• Give a surprise: 相手を驚かす
tips コツ: Your own weakness or
uniqueness
自分の弱点や得意
↓
• Be helpful to others 相手の役に立つ

7. ＜動かす＞情報：誘い
Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography,
doesn’t it? I like collecting maps in the
sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends.
I spend my time with my handicapped son
Tomo.
Kind regards,
Geo
あなたはどうですか？

8. 誘い：＜つかむ＞から＜動かす＞へ
Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography,
doesn’t it? I like collecting maps in the
sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends.
I spend my time with my handicapped son
Tomo.
Kind regards,
Geo
How do you spend your
weekends?
Do you have a family?

9. メイルとプレゼンの違い
• メイルには 段落 がある。
• 段落ごとに改行

10. Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography,
doesn’t it? I like collecting maps in the
sixteenth-century. I usually stay at home on
weekends. I spend my time with my
handicapped son Tomo. If you have any
questions about social welfare in Japan, I am
the one you should ask.How do you spend
your weekends? Do you have a family?
Kind regards,
Geo

11. 段落ごとのまとまり
1. My name is Geo. It sounds like
geography, doesn’t it?
2. I like collecting maps in the sixteenth-
century.
3. I usually stay at home on weekends.
4. I spend my time with my handicapped
son Tomo.

12. 段落ごとのまとまり
1. My name is Geo. It sounds like
geography, doesn’t it?
2. I like collecting maps in the sixteenth-
century.
3. I usually stay at home on weekends.
4. I spend my time with my handicapped
son Tomo.

13. Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography, doesn’t it?
I like collecting maps in the sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends. I spend my time
with a handicapped son, Tomo.
If you have any questions about social welfare in
Japan, I am the one you should ask.
How do you spend your weekends? Do you have a
family?
Kind regards,
Geo

14. Summing up:
• メイルは４つでできている。
– あいさつ 情報 配慮 署名
• 情報編集の３ポイント
＜わかる＞, ＜つかむ＞, ＜動かす＞
• 段落づけをする。

15. 自己紹介：ピアpierに送る （２）
あい
さつ
Hi Maru,
情報
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography, doesn’t it? I like
collecting maps in the sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends. I spend my time with a
handicapped son, Tomo.
気配
り
If you have any questions about social welfare in Japan, I am
the one you should ask.
How do you spend your weekends? Do you have a family?
Kind regards,
署名
Geo