Cycle of Survival (TEASER TRAILER) rough cut feedback from classmates. A2 Media Studies REIGATE COLLEGE

1. Teaser Trailer – Rough Cut
Feedback

2. Group 1
Excellent Good Ok Poor Very Poor
Mise en Scene ☑
Camera work ☑
Editing ☑
Sound ☑
Strengths:
• Lighting
• Camera Angles
• Font of titles
• Likes the split screen effect
Improvements:
• Not sure about the music
• Doesn’t understand the plot

3. Group 2
Excellent Good Ok Poor Very Poor
Mise en Scene ☑
Camera work ☑
Editing ☑
Sound ☑
Strengths:
• Editing
• Used a variety of shots
• Teaser built suspense well
Improvements:
• Music could be more dynamic
and added at the end
• Could be shorter
• More content

4. Group 3
Excellent Good Ok Poor Very Poor
Mise en Scene ☑
Camera work ☑
Editing ☑
Sound ☑
Strengths:
• Split Screen
• Camera angles and Movement
• Use of depth of field in shots
• Stopping music to create effect
• Point of view shot
Improvements:
• Looks like a short film
• Needs a variety of locations

5. Group 4
Excellent Good Ok Poor Very Poor
Mise en Scene ☑
Camera work ☑
Editing ☑
Sound ☑
Strengths:
• Titles
• Fight Scene
• Establishing Shots
Improvements:
• Towards the middle is slow

6. Main Points
Strengths:
• Use of camera angles and use of a variety of shots
• Titles
• Split Screen
Improvements:
• Need to add more music to suit what is happening
• The middle slows down, need to keep the pace up by adding
music or changing the duration of the shots.