This rough cut feedback document provides criticism and praise in two sections. The first section lists 11 issues with the cut including too loud background sounds, a lack of different shots and steady camerawork, and distracting background elements. The second positively notes the film's good costumes, dialogue, adherence to conventions, clear characters and acting, and pace.

1. Rough Cut Feedback – Bad and Good
Need more reaction shots
Background sounds too loud
Not many different shots
Nintendo Wii in background, doesn’t fit the Mise en Scene
Voices in the Background
Not much Sound
No Titles
Not much editing
Needs more steady camerawork
Need to cut certain items out of shot
Needs credits
Annoying accent
Good Costumes
Good Dialogue
Fits conventions well, Black and white.
Clear characters good acting
Good Pace