The document discusses feedback from audience research on a film storyline. The first story line was found to be interesting and leave audiences scared, but could be improved by providing more detail in the plot and less predictability. A suggestion to add a plot twist was made to thicken the story and make the ending less predictable.

1. Using the audience feedback I have found out that story
line one is a good idea that relates to real life scenarios
and leaves the audience scared after watching the film.
The first story line is an interesting and gripping storyline.

2. I have also found out that the story line could be
explained in more detail and the actual progression of
the storyline could be improved as well. The audience
research has told me that if the plot is not thickened
that it can be predictable ending

3. I have also found out that in in order improve the
storyline I need to include more information as well as
making it less predictable. This can be done by maybe
adding in a plot twist to mix things up a bit.