2. Write a letter encouraging students from your school to
go on a school trip that includes sporting activities.
You should include:
● Why they should come on the school trip with you
● Details about the school trip
● Evidence about the quality of the trip
● Your guarantee that they will have a good time
Your task
3. Spider diagram
Plan your idea
TYPE OF TRIP
Why they should
come? (2-3
reasons)
Details about the
trip (when, where,
activities, etc.)
Evidence about
the quality (2-3
points)
4. STEPS
1. Arrange your ideas (pg 109, Q2)
2. Come up with a striking opening sentence
(introduction)
3. Tick the checklist (pg 109, Q3)
5. WHEN WRITING INTRODUCTION..
1. Make the audience involved or address audience
directly (pronouns ‘you’)
2. Use some persuasive techniques (AFOREST)
3. Include details of the trip here
6. BODY PARAGRAPHS
1. One paragraph for one evidence of the quality of the
trip
2. Include your guarantee for each evidence
3. Remember AFOREST
7. BODY PARAGRAPHS
1. One paragraph for one evidence of the quality of the
trip
2. Include your guarantee for each evidence
3. Remember AFOREST
8. CLOSING PARAGRAPH
1. Summarise the points from the body paragraph
2. Restate and persuade again by adding rhetorical
questions to appeal to readers
“Surely you cannot want to miss out on this fantastic
opportunity?”
9. REMEMBER that we are looking for ACCURACY and
RANGE in your use of language.
Marks are awarded for spelling, sentence structure
and punctuation.