Emma storyboard with suggestions

1. Shot
No.1 Snapshotone:
Walkinghandinhand
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Establishingshot
Movement:Drone
trackingoverhead
Angle:Birdseye view
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Foley soundof cameraclick
Setting:Pertonpark
Colour:Sepia
Lighting:Dark
Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy
expressions, positioned=manonkneesandwoman
standingwithhandovermouth.Howwill theybe
positionedwhenwalking?Who’sonwhichleftor
right?
Frame
duration
3
seconds
Shot
No.2 Snapshottwo:
Man onhis kneesproposingtowoman.
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:longshot
Movement:none
Angle:highangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting. Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Foley soundof cameraclick
Setting:Pertonpark
Colour:Sepia
Lighting:Dark
Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy
expressions,positioned=manonkneesandwoman
standingwithhandovermouth.
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editingnotes
Fast cuts,filtereffects dothese goin-betweeneachsnap-
shot?
Shot
No.3 Snapshotthree:
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
Frame
duration

2. Couple hugincelebration
Shot:Mid shot
Movement:None
Angle:Straight
No dialogue.
Sound:Foleysoundof cameraclick
Setting:Pertonpark
Colour:Sepia
Lighting:Dark
Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy
expressions,positioned=ineachother’sarms Who’s
face is facingthe camera? Isher headburiedinhis
chest?Is hisface buriedinherneck?
2
seconds
Editingnotes
Fast cuts,filtereffects
Shot
No.4 Snapshotfour:
Couple kiss
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Close-up
Movement:None
Angle:Straight
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Foleysoundof cameraclick
Setting:Pertonpark
Colour:Sepia
Lighting:Dark
Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy
expressions,positioned=ineachother’sarms Are
facesstraighton to eachotheror tiltedforthe kiss?
Frame
duration
3
seconds
Editingnotes
Fast cuts,filtereffects
Shot
No.5 Establishingshotof bestfriend’shouse
Car pullsuponto drive
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Long shot
Movement:None.
Angle:Straighton
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Ambientsounds.
Setting:Outside bestfriend’shouse.
Frame
duration
4
seconds

3. Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Normal lighting
Mise en scene:Rule of thirds(carin middle third).
Editingnotes
Fast cuts,no filtereffects.
Shot
No.6 Woman getsoutof car
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Mid shot of her feet
and legs. Will partof the
car be capturedinthis
shot?
Movement:No
movement.
Angle:Lowangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Ambientsoundsandsound of dooropening.
Setting:Outside bestfriend’shouse.
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,natural.
Mise en scene:Jeans/bootsforclothing. Makeup?
Facial expression?
Frame
duration
3
seconds
Editingnotes
Fast cuts, nofiltereffects
Shot
No.7
Woman closesdoor
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Overthe shoulder
Movement:No
movement.
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Ambientsoundsandsound of doorclosing.
Setting:Outside bestfriend’shouse.
Frame
duration
2
seconds

4. Editingnotes
Fast cuts,no filtereffects
Angle:Mediumshot Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,natural.
Mise en scene:Jeans/bootsforclothing. Asabove.
Shot
No.8
Flashback
Woman hasa flashbackof herand herbestfriend together
ina bedroomhavingagirlynight.
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Wide shot
Movement:No
movement.
Angle:Mediumshot
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Ambientsoundsandsoundsof doorclosing.
Setting:Inside bestfriend’sbedroom.
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Dark,sepia,flashbackeffect.
Mise en scene:Pyjamasandhotchocolate inmugs.
Facial expressions?Makeup?
Frame
duration
4
seconds
Editingnotes
Fast cuts,filtereffects
Shot
No.9
Woman lockscar, engagementringinshot.
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Extreme close up
Movement:No
movement.
Angle:Highangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting. Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Foleysoundof the car locking.
Setting:Inside bestfriend’sbedroom.
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,normal.
Mise en scene:Engagementring, carclicker
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editingnotes
Fast cuts,no filtereffects

5. Shot
No.10
Flashback
Woman hasa flashbackof herand herbestfriend
together.
Is thisa continuationof the previousflashbackortold
froma differentperson’sperspective?
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Mediumshot
Movement:No
movement.
Angle:Straightangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Ambientsoundsandsoundsof doorclosing.
Setting:Inside bestfriend’s house
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Dark,sepia,flashbackeffect.
Mise en scene:Pyjamasandhotchocolate inmugs.
Frame
duration
4
seconds
Shot
No.11
Woman walksupto house
Shotof woman’shouse
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Mediumshot
Movement:No
movement.
Angle:Straightangle
Perhapschange to
trackingshot sothat you
getsome movement?
Everythingisverystaid.
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Foleyfoundsof woman’sfeet
Setting:Outside friend’shouse.
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,normal.
Mise en scene:Jeansandshoes
Frame
duration
4
seconds
Shot
No.12
Woman knocksontothe door and Bestfriendopensdoor
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Overthe shoulder
Movement:No
movement.
Angle:Highangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Foleyfoundsof doorknocking
Setting:Outside friend’shouse
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,normal.
Mise en scene:Top,anddoor. Movementof woman
waiting?Facial expressionof womanwhoopensdoor?
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Shot
No.13
Type of shot,movement
and angle.

6. Bestfriend’shug
Shot:Long shot
Movement:No
movement
Angle:Straight.
? ?
Shot
No.14
Viewof engagedwoman’sface
Stoodon doorstep
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:close up
Movement:no
movement
Angle:straight
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:background score
Setting:Outside friend’shouse
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,normal.
Mise en scene:Topand door. Facial expression?
?
Shot
No.15
Viewof mistress’face
Stoodon doorstep
Face dropsfroma smile toa frown
Move overto mise-en-scene
Type of transition?
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:Close up
Movement:No
movement
Angle:straight
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:backgroundscore
Setting:Outside friend’s house
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,normal.
Mise en scene:Topand door.
?
Shot
No.16
The bestfriendsare talkingandmistressismakingcoffee
whilstthe engagedwomanissatdrinkingtea
Dialogue (mistress):“So,how didhe propose?”
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:two shot/wide shot
Movement:no
movement
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
Dialogue (mistress):“So,howdidhe propose?”
Sound:backgroundscore
Setting:mistress’kitchen
?

7. Transition?
Angle:straight Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,normal.
Mise en scene:Kitchen/domestic,mistressin
provocative clothing,engagedwomanincasual
clothing. Facial expressions?Movements?
Shot
No.17
Audiochannelsdistortandmainflashbacksoccur of the
mistress’andmale fiancée’srelationship.
Flashbackof man and mistresswalkinginparkand
carryinga picnic.
Flashbackof man pushingmistressagainstatree (lovingly)
Type of shot, movement
and angle.
Shot:longshot
Movement:No
movement
Angle:Lowangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Distortedsounds
Setting:Pertonpark;ina forest
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Dark,sepiaeffect.
Mise en scene: Tree,picnicequipment,clothing.
Facial expressions?
?
Shot
No.18
Shotof fiancée explainingaboutherengagement,audio
channelsstill distortedandflashbackscuttingintoshot.
Will there be dialogue orunhearddialoguetoshowshe’s
explaining?
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:longshot
Movement:No
movement
Angle:Lowangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Distortedsounds
Setting:KitchenandPerton Park.
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Highlighting,normal.
Mise en scene: Tree,picnicequipment,clothing. As
above.
?
Shot
No.19
Flashbackof mistressandman laughingandkissing
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.

8. Shot:longshot
Movement:No
movement
Angle:Lowangle
No dialogue.
Sound:Distortedsounds
Setting:Pertonpark;ina forest
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Dark,sepiaeffect.
Mise en scene: Tree, picnicequipment,clothing. As
above.
?
Shot
No.20
Type of shot,movement
and angle.
Shot:longshot
Movement:No
movement
Angle:Lowangle
Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en-
scene.
No dialogue.
Sound:Distortedsounds
Setting:Pertonpark;ina forest
Colour:Normal,natural colours.
Lighting:Dark,sepiaeffect.
Mise en scene: Tree,picnicequipment,clothing.
?
Overall ladiesthisisgreat- reallynotmuchto addto. It may looklike alotbut it’sonlylittle bits andbobs.The onlyreal thingI’mmildlyworriedaboutis
your lackof cameramovement:everythingcurrentlyfeelsalittle stilted.