Analysing copy text, writing editing

1. Task:
Language Content Style Proof read:
Spelling/Grammar
/Punctuation
Headlines
* What
examples of
language
stand out?
Use the
checklist
above to
help.
*What is the
story about?
Is the
purpose to
inform/entert
ain?
*Is the
article
chatty or
formal?
Serious or
funny? How
long are the
sentences?
*Proof read, using
spellchecker, but
ensure that you
judge the overall
clarity Consider
sentence structure
and paragraphing:
does the article make
sense? Is it fluid and
clear? Use Ctrl/Alt M
to suggest changes
* What kind of headline
is it? What techniques
are used?
(Pun/Alliteration/Informal
language etc)
There isn’t
much to talk
about and
nothing to
notice that
is to stand
out which
would be
best to
change the
article to
have more
of this.
The
purpose is
a review on
a film and it
is
informative
because I
read this
making me
want to go
watch the
franchise of
films for
myself and
see if they
are any
good.
The article
is like he is
personally
directing at
me which
would be a
good thing
because
I’d want to
read more
and it
seems to
be serious
as though
this person
loves
these
films.
I checked it and
there weren’t any
mistakes which
Indicates that it
was a well checked
before finished
which is always a
good thing to check
work before you
show it, the only
thing would be
sorting out the
layout the text
changes when you
read the next two
paragraphs.
There is no fitting title
for it, due to it being a
few and it seems just
to be the raid 2 review
which seems as
though it didn’t have
much thought into
which means could
have done better
maybe thinking of a
qoute of the movie
and adapting it as a
title.