2. First Draft
• This is my first draft of
a contents page. It has
lots of the copy I
wanted but I would still
like some inserts and
images.
3. Second Draft
• This is the picture I
have chosen to use for
my background for my
contents page. I have
photo shopped it so the
background is in black
and white and the model
is in colour.
4. Third Draft
• I have contrasted and
changed the lighting on
this picture I like this
better as it sharpens the
image.
5. Fourth Draft
• This is my first Photoshop
draft of my contents page. I
don't like the way you cant
read the copy over the
background. I am going to
try out using boxes,
changing the colour/font of
my copy and blur the
background, I am also
experimenting with layout.
6. Fifth Draft
In this I have blurred the
background and changed the
layout I like this one better.
However I have decided to
change the font entirely to
black, Times New Roman. I
like the boxes but will
probably change the colours
of them.
7. Sixth Draft
• I like this draft much
better however when
asking my audience for
feedback there was
comments about the
page numbering, which
although new and
edgy, is more difficult to
read and find things so I
will be changing it.
8. Seventh Draft
• In my seventh draft I
have shortened the box
and the words to make it
look tidier
9. Eighth Draft
• I am lots happier with
this draft. I have
changed the layout of
the numbers and the
style of the page
numbers and title of the
page. I think it looks
good with the
• “Features” title over
lapped.
10. ninth Draft
• I changed the layout to
have the picture on the
right because the
audience will read from
right to left.
11. tenth Draft
• I changed the colours of
the text and boxes to
match the image and
the connotations of the
font (masculine)
however this changed
my entire demographic.
12. Eleventh Draft
• I changed the colours
back to the feminine
pinks and purples and
changed the font to
“pristina” which is again
more feminine, I also
added in the copy and
added a brief tagline.
13. Twelfth Draft
• In this draft I added a
strip along the bottom
revealing several more
things not mentioned in
the above copy and
moved the page
number, for the article
to the top of the image I
also made enough room
for an insert below the
contents copp
14. Thirteenth Draft
• I inserted the copy for
the competition insert. I
did a survey to
determine that my
demographic was
correct. 10% of the
group of only males said
they would buy the
magazine whereas 90%
of the only female
group.
15. Fourteenth draft
• I changed the font to
“cooper” in this draft
because I wanted to make
the font clearer and more
feminine, I resized lots of
the copy but I don’t think it
works as well as I thought. I
photo shopped the cover
image so the band
members hair was pink
adding a feminine edge.
16. Fifteenth Draft
• In this draft I cut the
pink out all pink and
replaced it with a paler
purple and added
caption with details on
the article which the
picture is referring to.
17. Sixteenth Draft
• Removed the “letter
from the editor caption
because it stood out too
much and I lightened
the upper body and
facial part of the main
image to draw more
attention to it.
