2. Pan down
Opens with soundtrack- Way
down we go, Kaleo
None1 Close up
Fade after the
‘Chalk Lane’
Fair sunny day
2
Soundtrack- Way down
we go, Kaleo
“Darrel, I’m pregnant”
Zoom in on Darrel’s face
Problem 1 Generic room with
both standing apart from each
other
MCL to CU
OSS and focuses on girl
first then on the stalker
(face is not identifiable)
Nothing
Soundtrack- Way down
we go, Kaleo
Problem 2 Club/ bar- vulnerable
girl is in focus and then focus
changes to the dark figure
behind her
Jump cut
MS
Jump cut
3
4
Problem 3: Man finishes drink
looking almost guilty
None
Soundtrack- Way down
we go, Kaleo
Close up on man’s face after
finishing a drink
CU
Jump cut
3 seconds
2.5 seconds
2.5 seconds
2.5 seconds
Critic during the jump cut
(1.5 seconds)
HA
EL
EL
LA
3. 5
6
7
8
SRS between the father and
friend
Friend: ‘Where’s Sam then?’
Father: ‘At home’
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Problem 4. Father looks
fearless and certain that son
is at home
SRS M +
ZOOM CU
Jump cut
P1. SRS of the pregnancy
and the Ricks face
CU zoom on
pregnancy
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Jump Cut
SRS of the pregnancy and the
man’s face, show him looking
anxious, distraught.
Shows the man still looking at
the pregnancy form with the
women in background smoking.
Frames focus on one at a time
and man leaves the room/
frame
LS
Fade Cut
Man narrating his feelings ‘she's
not ready for this’
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Camera is still but zooms a little
and changes focus
Man leaves the house with
and cuts to the women
hearing the sound of the door
Door slams
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
MS
Quick cut
to women
Camera is tracking men and
shot of women is ECU
2.5 seconds
2 seconds
3 seconds
2 seconds
Critic during Jump
cut 1.5 seconds
ML
M/HA
MA
M/HA
4. 9
10
11
12
P2 Scenario changes to stalker
who is looking at girl but we
cannot see him and spikes her
drink
Camera is still, POV of stalker,
glass in deep focus, and we
can see Eva in shallow focus
Girl is narrating with sound
bridge ‘I feel uncomfortable’
LS/CU
Jump cut to
this scenario
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Eva drinks the drink Side shot of Eva as she walks
to the bar and drinks the
drink, marking the moment.
MCU
Cut
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
‘”Rick.. You’ve been
drinking again!”
camera is still, viewing the door
as Mary enters frame and
drops her bags. camera is
focused on her facial
expression, the camera then
tilts down to reveal Rick, she
then lashes out
P3. Mary comes home to Rick
LS
Cut
Close up of Ricks face. He
looks annoyed and nagged.
CU
Jump cut
Follow Ricks head movement,
this is a close up
2 seconds
1.5 seconds
1 second
2 seconds
EL
EL
MS
LA
‘”How many bloody times
do I have to tell you!”
5. SRS, broken frame shot when
Jon is in shot.
13
14
15
16
Friend “so how is he”
Jon “if im honest im kind of
worried”
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go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
P4. back to the café, broken
frame shot. Jon and his friend.
MS
Cut
Camera is inside the suit
case, as Sam is revealed by
opening it and then the
camera is covered after he
fills 3 items.
‘he's been coming home
really late after school, he
never wants to listen to me”
Sound bridge – Sam is packing
his bag
N/A
Cut
Continues the same scene, just
an alternative shot but revealing
the letter
been “Im not around a lot of
the time, its difficult” Camera shows Sam writing a
note from side on, he then walks
of and the camera pans right and
zooms slightly to the note
Side, shot
Jump cut
P1. Darrel says he doesn't want
the kid
“We cant have this kid Mary”CU
Cut
Mid shot/ side angle of them
both.
1.5 seconds
3 seconds
2 seconds
1.5 seconds
MS
EL
HA
MS
6. 17
18
19
20
Revealing Marys reaction. Close up of her face, she looks
distressed
“What?!”
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
MCU
Cut
MCU
Jump cut
Cut outside, she stumbles to
show she is uneasy, and stops
to take a breath.
SRS
‘I feel ill, im gunna go’
Warp effect so camera can
sway slightly.
Jump cut
LS
3 Seconds
2.5 Seconds
1.5 Seconds
3 Seconds
EL
EL
HA
Mid
Problem 2, girl is very
uncomfortable and leaves, telling
her friend.
High angle, down onto Eva
She walks round a corner
into the alley, checking over
her shoulder
Camera is in the alley as she
is revealed walking round into
it. Camera is still.
Full body
shot
7. 21
22
23
24
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go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
LS
Cut
Now outside we see Rick come
out Mary following him, trying to
stop him.
‘Stop, come back Rick?,
ill get a divorce’
MS/ LS
Jump cut
camera is shot over Jons shoulder
as he enters inside Sams bedroom,
as he says Jon.
‘sam” and stops himself in
shock he isn’t in
Jon goes into Sams room
MS
Cut
Problem 4 father returns home
and calls his name but sees
note
Camera is still filming the door
as he enters
Father calls ”Sam you home”
camly with no suspicion.
Jump cut
LS of door
2.5 seconds
2.5 seconds
2.5 seconds
2.5 seconds
EL
EL
EL
Problem 3, drunk man
leaves the house
‘Where are you going?’
‘I’m leaving’ Camera follows the man as
he leaves with the partner
following
8. 25
26
27
28
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Man looks at note with SRS and
he looks very shocked
SRS, maybe have the camera
shaky on the man to show his
emotions
No soundCU/SRS
SRS
Problem 1, husband finds her
going for another cigarette but
grabs her and throws away the
packet
Camera is shaky as he
approaches her. Slight low
angle down onto the cenario.
‘No, no more, you need to
stop!’
Women: ‘Get off me!’
LS AND CU
Problem3 Rick reverses leaving
Mary alone on the drive way.
“Your drunk… Crying” camera captures bonnet of the
car as it reverses, zooms into
Mary upset ("you cant drive,
your drunk")
LS
Jump cut
1.5 seconds
3.5 seconds
3.5 seconds
MS
ML
9. 29
30
31
32
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go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Problem 4 Jon in absolute
despair
crying
camera pans around Jon to
connote how he feels lost, he
drops to his knees with note in his
hand
Pan
Jump cut
Man has a mental breakdown
in car Camera is outside looking at
him inside.
Man is stressing out
MS
Cut
CU/Focus
split
Jump cut
packet of cigarettes and Jane
in shot, she struggles to resist.
Camera is on the table,
with the packet close in
focus, with her sitting down
behind clearly struggling to
resist.
MCU
Cut
1.5 seconds
3 seconds
2 seconds
2.5 seconds
EL
EL
Waist
HA
Critic During jump
cut 1.5
P2. camera has Knife in deep
focus, Girl is close in front.
Walking speed, about
10ft away from her.
10. 33
34
35
36
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go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
Soundtrack- Way down we
go, Kaleo
ls
Jump cut
Jump cut
Jump cut
Jump cut
MCU
CU
MCU
2.5 seconds
1.5 seconds
2 seconds
2.5 seconds
EL
ML
EL
LA
Long shot of Sam on the side
of a road so that he looks
completely alone
Sound bridge “where have
you gone”Sam is trying to hitch hike on
main road (sound bridge- "where
are you")
