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Writing student e-tree
1. THESIS:
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controlling idea
Organizer BP
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SI 1 SI 2 SI 3
Organizer
BP 2
SI 4 SI 5 SI 6
Organizer
BP 3
SI 7 SI 8 SI 9
LEAP 5A: Student Writing
Writing Student Course Pack A - Part 2 Page 9 of 28
The ingredients of a happy life for Canadian women are having a good health, gender equality and having a support from women
organizations.
The ingredients of a happy life/
Canadian women
Having a good health Get support from
women
organizations/Govt
Have a Gender equality
Physical
health
(need
specific)
Give birth
Work - Life
balance
Working
time/ holiday
break
Mental health
(need
specific)
Stress reduce
In The
Workplace
(e.g Wages is
the same
level for
every ppl)
In the Family
(e.g Equal to
do the
chores)
Get involved
in Political
(Govt cabinet
ratio)
Support for
residential
(Shelter Safe)
Support in
medical
(Breast
cancer)
Support
living
expenses/Chi
ld benefit
